~*RTMC~fantasy world*~(engaged- anumeha_rajat)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello everyone...
aap sabko mera namaste..

welcome everyone to...

as we all rtmc fans fantasize our favorite couple in every possible story, scene and form...
but every time starting a new fan fic is not a choice...
but some of us still couldn't stop ourselves from writing what way we desire to see rtmc...
so, this is the place for those crazy heads like me...

well, i noe

i all alone starting it,
but here by i invite you to put your contribution to this thread with ur lovely imaginations...
and making this thread a success...

in very straight words...
i seek help n contribution from ma all di's n buddies...
in making this fantasy land of rtmc a multi-writer thread...😃

i wud also love it..
if new writers try their hand here first to gather up actually how they write and what readers feel about their writing...



well inauguration tho ker diya h...
ab, ek story tho jarur start honi chahiye...

would lov to start this thread by ma own self...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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rules and regulations-

since i m thinking of making this thread a multi writer thread, because searching of short stories and one shots separately becomes really a messy issue(especially for people lazy like me!😉), thats why management is necessary...

1) any writer who wish to post a short story or one shot, should complete it before posting the first part itself.

2) if convenient, i would request the writer to pm me the whole story before posting here on IF in advance, ((this is simply to avoid any delay in uds, n to be sure that ur uds are safe in your computer or ma computer, coz computers cant be trusted, they hang any time, or some internet connection creates problems, dont worry, i will post it on behalf of you, with no credits of mine... and will post only after interval of fours days, maximum...hope u writers can trust me about this!))

3) only one story will be running at a time on this thread, (avoid one shots here!)...

4) if a story is running here, the topic/thread name will have- ~engaged~ OR ~reserved~ written along with writer's name of story running.


any other doubt regarding, please contact me through pm.



Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~~**RESERVED**~~

will post links of other rtmc ss/os already written and even the galleries already opened.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so, guys, lemme do the shri-ganesh of this thread...
this story, i can say will surely make ma all di's proudand is a gift to all ma buddies..⭐️
its a serious story,😊 so ma humor/ jokes are nil here...😆
hope you can bear this too.😕









~~**ARMY WIFE**~~



''di aap jaiye! JHET jii wait kar rahe honge! Main sambhal longi baaki sab kuch!'' she said while arranging back the utensils all washed and wiped after dinner meal, with a plastered smile on her face, which Shreya knew, that she is pretending to be happy since last 4 days of her newly married life. Shreya just could not avoid recognizing the pain, the longing in her voice. Shreya knew her, she feels incomplete.

''koi baat nahi Ananya! Main kar deto hoon tumhari help!'' she smiled towards her lovely new sister. She tried to be with her, always accompany her, so that she doesn't feel lonely and detached.

''nahi! Didi, aap thak jaoge' vaise bhi aapka itna kaam karna thiik nahi!'' Ananya sweetly talked, while directing her black crystalloid iris to shreya's womb, which is bulged outwards a bit. Ananya winked at her in a naughty mood, which was an escape for her from her life with emptiness now-a-days.

She didn't want to be naughty, but she wants a slip from her reality of incompleteness.

''okay thiik h!...chalo maan li doctor sahiba aapki baat!...jaati hoon main, ab thiik hai na!...'' she patted Ananya's head lovingly, and smiled for her innocence.

''good night di! And haan di , please voh vitamins n iron ki tablets jarur lena! '..bhot need hoti h pregnancy main iron n vitamins ki!'' Ananya remarked her new elder sister with whom she felt the same bond and warmth as her best friends.

''tum poore din apni doctor-giri jhadte jhadte thak nahi ho kya?'' shreya mocked her. She wanted Ananya to feel light.

''di aapke saath tho sakti baratani padegi!... after all abhi tho aap, double naughty ho gaye ho!,thode aap pehle se the hi, ab aapka baby bhi aapke saath h!...isliye yeh doctor 24 hours on service rahti h!'' she smartly blazed her designation.

''okay main le longi! Good night Ananya!'' she agreed.

''good night di! And good night shone baby!'' Ananya just loves babies, she feels very delighted about them.

Shreya makes her way out of the kitchen slowly and precisely. She really felt pity for her, she knew she is alone in But she even knew what Ananya wants, which unfortunately she could not help. That space in her new married life could no one fill, except her husband- ARMY CAPTAIN VEER BHADORIYA!

Here Ananya engages herself back in kitchen activities all alone. Its not that, this rich family of Haryana can't afford keeping maids or workers. They had two-three in case needed. But usually its daughters in laws of the house who do all household work in evening. Maids of this house were living a life more comfortable then members of family. They do all work of day time with perfection and are punctual. These qualities anyone can derive from such a civilized family of defense personnel all around.

A pinching silence again surrounded Ananya, which she was slowly being used to since her last 3 nights, all alone in her bed room. She dispersed all the utensils accordingly, with out making any sound which could disturb the stillness around her. She wanted him, and only him to crack this. She was existing here in complete solitude, in which she never wanted to be. She saw a droplet on the plate which she nicely wiped just a while ago. But she then realized that she is weeping. The pain embedded in her heart, flowed through her eyes as tears. She closed her eyes to block them, but instead its purpose reversed. She saw him. Yes she wanted him back. She gasped, as if calling him back to her.

''jaldi aa jaiye!'' she called him.

She opens her eyes. And founds her work was done, its complete. Well it's a good thing, but for Ananya it was not. Now she had nothing better to be engaged with. She swirls around slowly, just in case if she have some new work, but no, kitchen was completely set. She moves towards the switch board, and switches off all lights in kitchen.

She reaches her bedroom, and bolts from inside. She turns to face the same, the exact as it is room, all intact since 3 nights. Every single glance around her, made her connect to him. His pictures around, hang on walls, his medals and certificates too. She moves towards the cupboard to change into her night dress. She opens and sees the space inside it, she shared it with him, his husband. She grips his shirt and closes her eyes'

The door of the room opens; the best appearing man on earth enters his room, for his first night with his newly married wife. The famine figure, which today looked epitome of beauty in her marriage attire, was standing beside the window in the room. She turned slowly to explore. Her dreamy eyes, with starry looks really killed him. He could see few traces of nervousness on her forehead, slight pink puff of blush on her cheeks, and many glittering stars in her eyes with curiosity. He is very confident and have a sparkling attitude of manliness in his eyes.

He moves towards her, her body became cooler as he proceeded. But some kind of trust made her stand still and wait for further.

''hi!'' veer spoke lightly.

'hello!'' she responded. Well of course this is the most formal way two strangers can start. They were not strangers. They knew each other since their engagement, which happened to be just 4 months ago. They were well aware and conscious about each others likes- dislikes, priorities and duties, believes and responsibilities. This much anyone can know if they talk for long continuous hours for 4 months, just before their sleep in late nights. They shared a special space with each other, which had every emotional connection.

''so tumhe tumhara naya room kaisa laga??'' he softly asked while standing beside her, facing window.

''bhot accha h humara room!'' she sweetly stated, with a feeling of ONE with veer-''humara'' room. The silence prevailed all over, well army soldier veer surely could not be shy, but his constant gaze to Ananya made her go red. Her cheeks had a warm blood rush, making her blush crimson. Veer silently adores the beauty the god had created only and only for him. He swiftly removes his fixed eyes from her, the moment he realize that he is going to be lost. Silence talked, they stood beside each other gazing, occasionally, hoping that the other will start something new. They both felt a strange enthrall in their body. Their own blood flow was tickling them. The breeze feels to be more scented today. The air of the room had fragrance of henna, sandal and jasmine, which was her fragrance from mahendi in her hands, her skin and her hairs respectively.

Veer finally decides to crack the silence, and the village view in front of them was the best escape, at least for now. They talked more formally today. There was something new; their accents were a bit changed. They were feeling something which could not be described. They talked for long. Soon Ananya lightly yawns. She was sleepy, of course was tried from all marriage rituals and body wrenching activities.

'ananya tum change ker lo. Please, you feel free, tum yeh jewelleries bhi''' he wanted her to feel comfortable.

''yeah!'' she agrees sweetly, still her eyes bowed. She searched for her bag. Veer found it faster, he moved towards it. Lifted it and placed it on the bed. He immediately moves towards washroom, trying to give her a private space, and more importantly escaping the magnificent magnetism he experienced for her beauty.

He could have surely lost his control and senses, if he would have not been so tough emotionally. He closes the door from behind and exhales to relax. He closed his eyes, he could not escape it, he loved her, her smile, her blush, her talks, her grace, her innocent face, her dreamy eyes, and her lips. He remembers every bit of it. 'SHE' occupied the major space in his memory. All he could think about, all he could feel about, all he could see about was only and only her-ananya. She was living in him as his heart beat.

He opens his eyes to see a dark room. But, how could be it, he remembered that he had switched the lights of washroom on.

''shit!! Powercut'' he concluded. A mere shame came as smear of disappointment on his forehead. He could not gather up might to face her with the fact- powercut on her first night with him, in his house.

''veer!''

Veer heard a feeble call from outside, which had the sweetness which belonged to his wife. He had to go now at any cost. He immediately opened the door, the room ws dark, he could not make out where exactly Ananya stood.

''ananya tum thiik ho?'' he questioned, facing the dark.

''aap kahan h veer?'' she questioned him again, with a pinch of fear for dark in her voice.

''tum jahan khadi ho, vahin rho..stay there'lemme lite the candle!'' he was now confirmed where exactly was she, 'cause being a army captain, his hearing senses are surely sharp.

''jii!'' she surely agreed, but she was nervous, and wanted to hold him as soon as possible, she was finally moving towards his voice. She was taking small and precise steps, but may be it was of no use. Some mischievous play of her LAHENGA, some deeds of folds in carpet, finally lead her to loose her balance and dash a so strong physique. Veer immediately supported her, embossed her in his arms for the first time. Her arms automatically claimed him, by encircling themselves around his neck. She felt like heaven. And this heaven turned to be more glittering when in motion her lips came in contact with nook of his lips. For this mere touch, her senses created a electrifying nerve conduction. For veer this was the sensation for his life for veer. Finally the contact breaks, without any kiss or lip caress.

They both finally land up on bed, with Ananya lying upon veer. Her arms were wrapped around him and eyes were squeezed in fear. Her face was damn close to his, veer could her lips proximity to his, which surely proved 'yes her lips touched his lips, though just corner. He filled her face in his eyes. Just in so less time, her face was the best liquor for his addicted eyes. He blew bits of air on her lips, unconsciously. She opened her eyes to witness an ocean of immense love, but may be lacked passion. She increased the space b/w them to say something-

''sorry!'' she pleaded so innocently, which could easily melt anyone. Well she complied it for both her mistakes, 1st of all for moving when he said no, and second for non-intentional touch of her lips on his.

Veer knew this fact. Well for first mistake of her, he surely deserve a sorry, but latter one was the most beautiful mistake any one could commit. Instead he expect a sorry for not making the lip contact correct and complete. But'.that's another part.

He could not respond. The way she had ensnared him in her arms, the way he embraced her, and the way they both were laying on bed' this moment felt so complete, their existence felt so meaningful, their breaths were meant so reasonable. They could be just statue like this for time so long, which they themselves didn't know. The breeze blowing made ananya's flicks sway in air and tickling veer's face. Still his view was not disturbed. Their faces had enough glow, they didn't required any extra luminance for it. The moonlight was enough.

But, their fate loves playing with them, it cannot give Ananya and veer a private moment'the electricity came. They both blinked to break each others trance. Ananya blushed like hell and veer certainly stole this glance of her in his eyes. Ananya adjusted her self to get, while biting her lips. She stands up, finally veer to gets off the bed.

Before they could respond to each other for what just happened, veer's phone rings. It grabs attention of both. Veer concentrates on the name flickering on the screen. It was his brigadier's call. He had to immediately pick up.

He acknowledged boss and listened to his instruction, with attention. Anaya stood in suspense and confusion. Veer finally cuts the call and faces her. He breaths and informs her with the heaviest stone on his heart

''mujhe border per bolaya gaya h!...mujhe jana hoga!''

Ananya opens eyes and returns back to her emptiness, she clutches his shirt very tightly.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of all congratulation n thanx for starting a thread like this...😊
n the story...that was really good...
veer is an army officer...wow...
loved the scenes b/w them...that was to cute...
but he has to at their first night...oh poor anu...
but that was gr8...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luved it yaar... veer as army officer... wow... 😍
ye light bhi na glt tym pe aana hota hai...
plz update soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi😊

A very nice and different concept😊...Will wait for more😊

Love😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Thanx Rahu for starting this thread
as u know I m waiting for this
So u have updated first part of your first ss " Army wife "
the name seems interasting and as u say a bit serious 😉
hmmm...
let me read first then lateron I will come with my comment .
okkkey 😳
Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo for new story dear
loved it like hell

anu is so sweet...bt she was all alone oho sad feel very sad 4 her
she missed him
sachi me mein bhi bhot miss kar rhi hun veer ko

oho first night mein v dono sath ni the
bt scene was very lovely n romantic
loved it

yr jaldi milao unko
update soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u

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