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Posted: 13 years ago
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RTMC (One Shot)



The Hitchhiker


He had been driving since last fifteen hours...the journey was tiring for him now...



his car passed through the deserts of Rajasthan...he was tired of the music and radio... "need a drink" he didn't stop the car...picked up his energy drink...though his eyes wanted to sleep...but he thought of sleeping once he reaches his destination...



It was dry and sandy...mainly due to the sand dunes...


It was hot afternoon...


there wasn't anyone seen even from far away...not even a bird...he looked at his phone...and thought of charging it...but somehow his body was restless...he wanted to cross the desert before night...



After few minutes...


he saw someone pointing out a thumb standing by the road...as he came closer he saw a beautiful girl asking for a lift...



he did not stop the car...he hated people who hitchhiked... "no beautiful..." he nodded his head and drove faster...



he looked into the rear view to look at her again...but to his surprise she was sitting at his back seat...


he suddenly thought over...he didn't stop the car...how the hell did she get in... was it a dream or a girl actually managed to sit in his car...


he looked at his speedometer...he was driving over 100... "what the hell..." he yelled... but he still didn't stop the car...


he didn't even bother to ask her to get out...he was too drowsy to even scold her...


he had been driving for so long...finally he finished his drink...


"how did you managed to get in pretty lady??" his question had a mixed feelings...he was angry, he was curious and at the same time he was least bothered if she managed to pull herself in the car...but then she had to be some superwoman...



"it was easy" she answered gracefully... and took out her make up kit...one after another she applied different products on the face...



"i think I need another drink" he murmured... his thoughts weren't stopping...his brain was active but he felt tired... he gulped the entire can of the energy drink...




she smiled... "well...won't you ask me again...how did I get in??"



he was least bothered to talk to her '..for some reason tiredness was overtaking him but he was active enough to drive the car... "don't disturb me" '.



she came closer to his seat... "you know who I am??"



he tried to concentrate on his driving "who cares" he answered casually...



"well...you know I died here...years ago..." she said



he had another sip of his drink "good..."



"what if i kill you here?" she laughed...



he was getting irritated of her "well this driving is already killing me...so it doesn't matter..."




After few minutes


...he looked around...it was evening and he had crossed the desert... he thought of pulling the car and stretching himself... "come out fair lady..." he said while lazily dragging himself out... to his surprise there wasn't anyone sitting on the back seat...


"oh no...it means I gave a lift to a ghost...or I should say a ghost had a free ride in my car...lucky ghost..." he smiled, had another drink and started driving...


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pranita1202 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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man didn't see that one comming

that was...spooky...but in a goood way.

first i thought he was hallucinating coz of lack of sleep or even dreaming ...

but it was real ghost n way atleast he got company through the drive






Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what was that...?????...that was really funny...😆
he travelled with a ghost and it doesn't effect him...wow kya insaan hai...😆
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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One shot
It's Very Nice Dhanvi di
Thanx for making it
N Really it's Hillarious 😆
He actually got irritate byy her Question 😆
and at the End He came to knew that She was a ghost n he gave lift to a Ghost ...no no a ghost herself had free ride in his car 🤣
lov u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wao ek or ss ooops os 😃
vo bhi bhoot wala 😳
luv u di 🤗
🤣 kya os thi
ek dm mst jhakkas 👍🏼
15 ghante se drive kr rha h
m hoti to drive krte krte hi so jati 😆
bt mujhe car drive krna hi nhi aata 😛
vo kya h na mere pass BMW nhi h
isly nhi ati
ye to itni sundar ladki ko koi lift dene se mana krta h kya
ooopppss... Bhoot ko 😆
bhoot bhi make up krte h 🤣
ye is ldke ko dar nhi lgta bhoot se 😕
bhootni hi dar gai hogi uski baato se 🤣
isly bhag gai 😆

w8ing for or kahani 😳
luv u di 🤗
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hehehe very funny!! so he gave lift to ghost! thanks to ghost tht gave him company in tht bore journey!
but where is rtmc here😕
Edited by shruja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oho ek or ghost story
di aap to hmesha mujhe dara dete ho
bhoot ki kahani sunkar mujhe bhot dar lagta h...

He was not slept from 15 sleeping omggg nice yr
n she sit in his car...mujhe laga wo sapna dekh rha h
bt she is real

hehehe he irritated with her...nicooo

last scene is vry nice
loved it
ghost enjoyed free ride lovely

awesome update di
thanks 4 pm
luv u

cont soon with new story
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow luvd it
funny os
poor ghost! she actually escaped seeing his indifferent behavior lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruja

hehehe very funny!! so he gave lift to ghost! thanks to ghost tht gave him company in tht bore journey!
but where is rtmc here😕



the driver is rt and ghost is mc😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow di, yeh kya tha,
i mean i ws just raeding and somthng happened n i strted laughing like jerk...

it ws just so mindblowing,
loved it
so sooper...
superduper.

t itni der se nhi soya, sad!

bichara sleepy head ko neend a rhi h...
energy drink pii rha h...

mc as ghost, itni beautiful ghost hone lage tho ghost ki defination hi badal jayegi...

but shikar wali bhootani, i is sacry, but not mc...

she is just so much .too much hilarious here, she is doing make up...
ghost do make up?
well of course they can, evry one hav rite to make up n look good, b it ghoats...

but rtt din pay any attention to her, sad...

amazing os.
lovely..

tnx di .
lov u


Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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