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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you every one for so lovely comments.

so as i told , ma al di's wil be proud of me after reading this ss...i felt they are. happy i m.

guyz dis story is highly inspired by a scene in BORDER picture..

hope you remember.

this strory have no twist, nothing like surpises.

its simple, but still special as its for ma rtmc.

another update just down,

do enjoy it,

and yes please comment.

coz, main voh bachi ho jo comments ke mamale main bot greedy ho, ...

comments are important

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~~**ARMY WIFE**~~

(2)

''mujhe border per bolaya gaya h!...mujhe jana hoga!''

Ananya opens eyes and returns back to her emptiness, she clutches his shirt very tightly. She breaths to compose herself. She really proved herself to be an ARMY WIFE, with no tears since last 3 night. And by each night it becomes harder to even stand this emptiness. She had an ocean of issues, stuffs, talks and thoughts to share. The silence surrounding her pinches her. she lived in the house, but everything around her was not complete.

Only veer could fill those interstices of her life. Her eyes explore around the clock for him, never seem to be come to rest. She even didn't know how is veer now. More importantly she wanted to know-is he fine, and when is he returning to her. Since he had gone, the only call came was regarding his safe reach. Rest all was assumptions which all family members had through news who celebrated Indian triumph on terrorists on border. Her eyes were moist again, and every time these tears came, not letting them flow became mightier task. She gasped, which hide a pinch of his name in it again.

With heavy steps she precedes towards the bed, she lays facing his side of bed, which was vacant even today. She pulls his pillow to her, and grabs it close to her heart. Each n single moment of her life craved for him, her eyes longed to see his single glimpse. Today too she has the same superficial sleep, just because of her restless heart in his worry, her pleading psyche for his body, her vibrant eyes in his search and her life in explore of his love.

Morning sets. The sunrays disperse unbiased in all directions. Birds chirruping fill the scented air, and the air today holds a strange mischief in its wind. Ananya didn't know the reason why her heart felt so light and pleasing today. Today she could feel him closer than since last 4 days. It was as if he is going to return to her.

Shreya entered the kitchen and saw Ananya already cooking, with a light blue apron on her mahroon sari. Her bangles which she wore in her almost lower arm were disturbing her. The tinkling sound they made already prepared shreya about her presence inside the kitchen before she entered. Shreya smiled to see her sister early this morning, who was similarly pleasing to her eyes.

''Namaste didi!'' Ananya acknowledged her.

''good morning. Kaisi ho tum?'' shreya asked, for as now she had a believe that today she is going to get a positive answer, seeing her genuine smile.

''bhot accho hoon di!'' Ananya happily informed.

''chalo tho thiik h yah sab choddo' aur jaker taiyaar ho jao'hospital nahi jana kya?'' shreya raised her eyebrows.

''nahi di! Aaj maa ne mujhe KOA PUJAN ke liye chotti lene ko kha tha!''

''arey haan! Tumhe panch din ho gaye h na ghar aaye hoe. Hum tho bhool hi gaye the.''

Both daughter in laws were chatting and filling the environment of kitchen with their sweet giggles and ananya's little mischief, which she did on her new best friend.

The telephone in drawing room rings. Ananya's ears immediately responded. The ring snatched her attention from her cooking, as her hands' working phase decreased. She sensed him around. She ran towards the door of the kitchen to look the phone ringing.

Shreya who was serving everyone on dinning table in dinning room, saw this restlessness of hers. Ananya stood with her palm on her chest and deep frequent breaths. It was as if the telephone ring had filled life in her. now even shreya knew that it was veer's call, which was confirmed when rohan, shreya's husband picked up the call.

''hello''

''hello bhaiya! Main veer!'' veer stood on the peak of the knoll. All war-equipments covered his background. guns and cannons were not in role now. Tanks were not used too. This dispute with terrorist on border was usual, it happens in every tenth day coming. Since this hill mark comes under CAPT. VEER BHADHORIA'S command, veer has to be definitely called 5 nights before.

Veer stood with his proud army chest, adorned with precious medal and his black name-tele along with his designation. The army dark green color suited him so much, that anyone could what kind of enthrall Ananya would have felt when for the first time she saw his photograph before her marriage. His exquisite features were enhanced in his army uniform. He looked so gallant; he looked a trustworthy Indian soldier.

''haan veer! Kaise ho tum?'' asked rohan. Ananya smiled with a trace of shyness on her face, which excelled all limits of beauty.

''thiik hoon bhaiya'main aaj sham tak ghar pahoch jaunga!'' veer informed with happiness, both of his success and home return.

''train book karli tumne?'' rohan interrogated.

''haan bhaiya! Voh military quota main easily mil gayi'' veer assured.

''uff oh! Choddo rohan yeh sab'meri baat karwao pehle!'' a proud excited mother of two soldier came running towards the phone, and literally started snatching the phone.

''haan veer!'' damini called his son.

''namaste maa!'' veer wished her.

''namaste beta Namaste! Kaise ho aap?'' well she of course knew the answer. But its still there simply for formality'

Damini had a quick chatter with his son on border, she was very happy for his return. Rohan returns to dinning table, while smiling on silly features of his mother. Soon even excited mother ends and tries keep the phone'

''chalo thiik h beta'tum sham ko aa jao, phirr baat karte h!'' damini concluded.

''maa!..'' he suddenly blurt, without thinking why he did so, soon he agreed with reality that he wants to listen her voice.

''haan! Boliye beta..'' damini asked.

''aa' aaa' maa'voh main'meri baat'I mean, aap meri baat bhabhi se karwado,''- finally, he still didn't come up with his real wish.

''haan haan ! kyun nahi?''

Damini called shreya and shreya picked up the phone.

''oh ho! Tho dewar jii ko hamari bhi yaad aati h''' shreya teased.

''bhabhi aap tho meri best frined h na!...please baat karwa dijiye kaise bhi''' captain veer badhoriya pleaded. He desperately wanted to hear her, just once. As if her voice is gonna fill his body with life.

''vaise kya kr rahi h ananya ab?'' veer curiously asked.

''kitchen ke darwaze ke piche se chupke se tumhari baat sunn rahi h'sharma rahi h!'' shreya said while whispering to the phone, not letting other members of family to know about their talks, while they were busy in dining room with their morning meal.

Veer smiled, he closed his eyes, he saw her. he clenched his palm, he know what kind of sight he is loosing. He could imagine her blushing. Her blush, her shyness breaks all records of beauty. This he had already witnessed in their first incomplete night.

''bhabhi usese baat karwaye na!'' he composed himself, and straightly presented his desperate need to his bhabhi.

''haan haan , karwati ho!'' shreya agreed and took the wireless phone towards the kitchen' she called the maid outside for some non-important work, and left Ananya alone in the kitchen'

Ananya, hided again behind the door of kitchen, as if she is shy of even the air surrounding her.

She holds her breath, and bring phone to her ears.

''hello Ananya?'' veer could not hold himself talking to her.

Ananya felt elated, her heart jumped and danced. She heard his voice for first time in last 4 days, she could not call him earlier as all cell phones of this army batch were jammed so as they are not caught by terrorists.

''ananya'' his curious voice repeated. He badly wanted to listen her. she breathed heavily, he heard her breathing.

''kuch tho bolo Ananya'please'' he pleaded. He had pain of her separation in his voice.

She finally, from her choked throat with happiness, breathed out-''veer''. This word was the one, in which her whole world is described. She closed her eyes.

And yes, her voice filled life in him, the moment he heard his name from her, he felt his body warmer, he experienced a blood gush in his veins, his heart was rapidly beating. He closed his eyes'

Ananya was about to lose herself to her helplessness, she was about to cry. She feared that her sobs could disturb him on phone too, she removed the telephone from her ears and pressed it deep into her breast on her heart, so that it escaped her sounds of her sobs.

Very soon veer heard her heart beats, he recognized it. He knew she is not listening, and has held phone to her heart. He kissed the speaker of his phone, feathery. HE KISSED HER HEART. He closed his eyes too, to not let the tear making their way out.

''aap kab aa rahe h veer?'' again the lively voice spoke through the phone.

''aaj sham ko, tumhare liye!'' he confessed.

''main intezaar karungi aapka!''

''chinta mat karo, aaj ka vrat tum mere haathon pani piker hi poora karogi!'' he made her realize that her fast really meant to him.

''jaldi aayega!'' she could not wait to see him, fast for not eating was bearable, but the fast for not seeing him since 4 days, was impossible.

''tumhare liye!'' he stressed.

Silence prevailed on both the sides. Their silence talked, they could listen to each other breathes for longs hours.

But family members don't let anything private.

Rohan came to kitchen and Anaya shivered..

''voh zara phone dena' mujhe veer se kuch pochna h!'' rohan asked.

''jii, yeh lijiye!'' she didn't want to give, but has to.

Rohan went out with the phone and Ananya sighed.

As soon as veer disconnected the phone, he reached his camp tent. He closed his eyes. Still he could he her so fresh and enticing. Veer really repented for moment, when he was leaving. She stood at a distance from him, but still he could feel her the closest. She looked strong, but her core was enervated. Her eyes had tears all ready to stream out, as soon as he goes. Her eyes were pleading to him, they beseeched him- please fill me in you, your arms, kiss me once before going. But he felt a strange bond around him, he was hesitating. He took blessing of his elders and hugged his brother, waved his hand too bhabhi. He didn't know how to behave with his new bride. He badly wanted to embrace her, but he didn't know exactly did she want the same. He opened his eyes and promised, he will never ever let her cry. There was a strange determination in his eyes.

PRECAP- veer comes and their first COMPLETE night together..😉

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
lovely update dear...😃
the phone convo was really cute😳...
veer and anu dono kitne sharmate hai😆...
but i love shreya bhabi and the baby in her womb too...
at least veer could share his feelings with her without any hesitation😃...
and anu got emotional...poor girl...
for how long could she pretend to be happy when she'd been alone even in the midst of crowd *sigh*...
and of course our hero will keep his promise by coming back to his anu...
very touchy part was this...
Edited by prahelika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
read first part
so emotional ,
loved it,
nice work.

about the thread so proud of u🤗
humari rashmi us rtmc fans ka naam roshan karegi

btw i have a surprise for u as exams is on tuesday i started making yesterday. u wil get it soon.

will read next update later
Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
omg second ud is full of hope

poor anu in lonely but don't worry he is gona cum

family members annaya ko phone jaldi do naa. i know know they too miss veer

loved the phone convo

love ,pain , need in their voice😭 touchy

precap😳
hope happiness last long
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

😛Res

bad me coment edit karungi 😳
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very nice update 👏 👏 👏
loved it thoroughly
the war you described ananya's feeling is just awesome
n veer too ..kitna desperate ho raha tha uski ek aawaj sunne k liye 😳
so lovely
they could listen their heart beats , breath 😳 😳
he is coming soon
wow so finaly they gonna meet 😛
n want to read how will their interaction and reaction after meeting
update soon
lov u ⭐️
Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Awesome story!! Plz anu aur veer ko jaldi mila do

nd mujhe pm list me add karlo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
res
love u rashu 4 this one
will edit soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Awesome update😊, really loved it ... continue soon😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
That was a mix of sadness plus hope.But the good thing is that veer is coming soon.
Love the update..continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
superb dear...
so our mr.fauji is coming back...gr8...
n loved the way u described the whole scene...their convoo,their emotions...superb...
n precap...ahem ahem...
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago

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