VIRTUE & VICE#3[AR]P 16C-Moved to 4th thread - Page 100

Finally the long awaited part has been updated...
I'm feeling really bad for both Armaan and ridz for their being so miserable...
Feeling real bad for Armaan too as ridz didn't even bother to hear what he's trying to say... But i guess it's not even her fault as armaan had been ignoring her since 1 week, so i guess he deserved it... But bechaara woh bhi to mujboor hai haalat aur apne kismat ke haton...
You described the ridhima's pov very well, all her emotions wer heart tearing...
The officer Armaan Mallik who is all emotion proof and never shed a tear is being so miserable in the hands of luv... 'Sach hi kehte hai log ke pyar insaan ko kya se kya bana deta hai'... Jo Armaan apne so close to heart dadaji ko khone ke baad bhi nahi roya tha aaj uske aakhon mein aasoon, pyar sach mein insaan ke haton woh karwa deta hai jo usne sapnon mein bhi nahi socha hota...
I didn't got it that why still anjie didn't understood the feeling of ridz for armaan, but then again she's too gud at hiding her emotions as even her best friend rohan is in dark abt it...
But i guess atul has some doubts abt ridz's feeling towards armaan... I hope he finds it out all soon and try to sort things out between them...
Anjali taking her devaar's side and atul taking his saali's side was very cute, the bond between AA is also shown very well, that's one more thing I like abt ur writing that you see things through every character's perspective, and it's really hard to do it when there are so many character in a story... So hats-off to you for that...
And finally the ridz and rohan convo was also very much sweet yet heart crushing... Feeling really bad for rohan too as the one girl he luvd all his life is in luv with someone else and is so much miserable and he can't do anything to help her out...
You know na Asma, that we all are gonna kill you for that last part where ridz tells him to kiss her... But den again i guess it's all justified from ridhima's pov, as she know she can't be with armaan as he is already in luv (which she doesn't knows that it's her only) and she's engaged with rohan and soon going to be his wife so it was the sane decision for her to take...
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Now plz don't bring armaan there all of a sudden to hear what ridzy said to rohan, poor armaan won't be able to take it... But then again i guess you are gonna do it... You know after reading this part i'm just waiting to read the next installment... Plz update that today itself...
Update soon!!!
Take Care!!!
Luv Ya!!

hey dis is a shocker!!!!
please don't do dis.. I mean how can riddhima tell rohan to kiss her..
where is armaan?!??
do update d part soon.. can't wait to know wat will happen...

hi dear

yaar awesome part per yeh kya kar diya itna bada shock kaise ridz rohan ko kiss karne ke liye keh sakti hai yeh tumne dosri baar mujhe shock diya hai please dont do this yaar no kiss at all aur armaan kahaan hai mujhe armaan ko dekhke bohot rona aaya please usse itna hurt mat karo

anyways but writing yaar kya tumne zabardast scene likha hai armaan ke bedroom mein mai to rone lagi yaar poor ridz but usse mein gussa hoon how can she do this i know armaan ne usse ignore kiya but this is not her salution salution yeh hai ki wo usse baat kare ab please next update mein armaan aur ridz ko atleast milao wo dono ek dusre se baat to kare

hey superb part.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
And waiting 4 d scene when AR face eachother.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Cont asap.
T.c.

Finally an update...Though it's an installment wo bhi such a short one but wo kehte hai na something is better than nothing...So Chalegi... Really loved...But Now its height yaar.I can't see AR in pain now...they both are suffering so much...Plz make them confess their love soon...Now Atul is also start realizing then AR feel very special for each other. And yaah,Its true that I like Rohan a lot,he is a sweetheart but I can't see him with Ridzy yaar...I don't want him to kiss Ridzy...Ab jaldi se isse complete karo..Really want to know more...Thanks for the PM...Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

sad instalment.

Asmaaa..y r u making me cry with every part yaar? 😭 y r u doing this? y r u torturing us like this along with AR? 💔u always leave me in tears...NO LIKES & COMMENTS from me on the parts (and also on new thread which u will be opening soon) till u make AR meet and smile in VnV *glaring* And yes, i am serious abt this. Hope u will update soon

Hi asma
Its awsome plzzz yar inko mila do
N i feel bad for rohan also
I hope u will update soon
Love ya

Nice update!