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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR



I'm really sorry yaar.
gud night



Why are you sorry..Please its not your fault..Main bhi na troubling you unnecessarily
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sjain



Why are you sorry..Please its not your fault..Main bhi na troubling you unnecessarily



kitni baar kahoon ki u never trouble me Mahua.
plz aise mat kaho yaar.
Tere liye kal ek bada sa installment update karoongi.pakka.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR



kitni baar kahoon ki u never trouble me Mahua.
plz aise mat kaho yaar.
Tere liye kal ek bada sa installment update karoongi.pakka.





Nahi tujhe bhi guilty feel karing I am really sorry
I understand that if you couldn't write kuch reason hoga ..but still asking for update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sjain





Nahi tujhe bhi guilty feel karing I am really sorry
I understand that if you couldn't write kuch reason hoga ..but still asking for update


update demand karna tumhara janamsidh adhikaar hai darling.😆
I really love u when u ask me to uodate.I find it really cute.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR


update demand karna tumhara janamsidh adhikaar hai darling.😆
I really love u when u ask me to uodate.I find it really cute.



But aaj wrong tha na apne matlab ke liye asking for update..Please don't take it in wrong way
& very sorry couldn't put my comment as well

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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Mahua we r friends yar.U can surely ask me to do anything for u if u r upset.
update toh badi choti si cheez hai.
I can never take u wrong yar
plz stop saying sorry
kal ki update pakki
don't worry about the comment,u can do dat wen u r in a gud mood.
cheer up love
don't be so glum
I want my real Mahua back.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

@ Mahua we r friends yar.U can surely ask me to do anything for u if u r upset.
update toh badi choti si cheez hai.
I can never take u wrong yar
plz stop saying sorry
kal ki update pakki
don't worry about the comment,u can do dat wen u r in a gud mood.
cheer up love
don't be so glum
I want my real Mahua back.



I was just feeling bad that for my own reason I asked fr update so apologised
Yeah trying to cheer up ..But mood hai ki bas
Thank you for understanding me

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG I should be apologizing first for commenting so late well but also you too completed this chapter in 52639874581975236 months HMPHH I know you got your exam sand all I understand but as a reader I have right to be angry with you so I am an thodi si..

Now coming to VV , this chapter , update..SIGH seriously I feel as if I have forgotten all the languages & feel so lost at this moment WOAH ..crazy I was dreading ..yeah you read it right HUH.. I was terrified when finally I decided to put my thoughts about this chapter ..From where to start & what to write ..I am so attached to this story that sometimes I feel frustrated when I want to read update but don't have anything to read & what makes it so addictive is that it is so painful passionate sad & heart breaking too ..I am sure I have told you this before as well but can't stop myself from metioning it again..your writing has become different so much more polished since the start of V&V..& I am glad with this..you have started expressing Armaan Ridhima in a much better way..every line of this update pained me but it was worth..in my mind I was like "OMG the way Asma is building the intensity of emotions in this story the confession of AR will be breathtaking HUGE something that will make every reader cry with happiness" *giggles* the self-confrontation scene of Ridhima was lovely , her miseries confusion..felt every bit of it..Even I am satisfied the way you are handling this case thing ..quite amusing *smirks* & bringing fun friendship moments in between adds humor in it.. good to see Rohan gelling well with gang..coming to AR moments simply blissful so soothing & full of love How I get carried away with them HAYEEE..the way Ridhima gets angry on Armaan is so cute I love it..But everytime when reality strikes either Armaan or Ridhima it hurts deeply..Best best part of the update I read that part quite a few times..AR terrace moment heart wrenching , soulful ..for a moment I felt he will spill the truth HUH.. He was so disturbed OUCH I really wanted a hot romantic moment ..Ermm may be something like Ridhima comforting Armaan & may be a kiss or so *grins* But you toh enjoy torturing me PSHT..But one thing I was awed by Armaan's self control *giggles*..AAH that back hug was MUAAH & their conversation touched my heart so sweet..I just hate when either of them cry UHH so upsetting & had tears in my eyes thinking her concern, care for Armaan such moments gives me such weird shitty feeling How a fiction story affects you I really wish she shares her feeling with someone SIGH ..That chair thing was DUHH what kismat mann..this is all so complex..their way of showing concern silently is so adorable..But anyway what ever happens I love how easily Ridhima gets back in to her usual self & was successful in stopping Armaan

DAMMNN lord I am sure you were not expecting this BIGG comment & even I was not expecting myself to write something like this *rolls eyes* HUH Ab bas I am tired now I need break TADAA Go update I ain;t commenting on next chapter anytime soon.

PS just a thought about new installment Why I have this feeling that Armaan will see her in this kissing position OOPPSS

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Posted: 12 years ago
The next installment will come around 1 am
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Posted: 12 years ago
Long wali update 3 am pe milegi.
Was teaching Chemistry to my bro till this time.Stupid boy has to come and learn everything today only.Agh! Brothers can be so irritatble at times.
I'll put up the installment for sure tonight but now I'm extending the time till 3 am as just now only I've started writing.Sorry guys.

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