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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#981

Originally posted by: desir

mai koi blackmai emotional blackmail nahin kar rahii hun bas pyaar thoda zayada hai naa aapke ar se tou bas dill ro diyya hai oonka dard mehsoos karke

Main apke nahin Mahua ke emotional blackmail planning ki baat kar rahi thi...
I know jana how much u love AR and when I was writing this part,I remembered u and felt that u might get all emotional after reading this part and this is what has happened.
So how was the whole installment?
Still waiting for ur comment on NSDT n ur reviews on the last installment of previous part.I hope you may get some free time soon to share ur reviews with me.😃

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simran gupta

@AR_FAN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#982

hey asma
nice installment
but plz no kiss plz
it will not b tolerated
plz yaar armaan riddhim ka ek seen to sath rakh

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sjain

@sjain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Shukr manao 6 pages long update hai,2-3 page long hota tab maza aata.
Critic ki bacchi,comment de na.
Jitni jaldi comment milega utni jaldi main abhi hi next installment likhna start kar doongi.😈

No ways no tricks with me ..Comments tomorrow abhi onle reading time ..comment karne ke liye mood shood banana padta hai ..mahol set karna padta hai

Good night ..& Better if you start writing 2nd installment right now ..so that it becomes easy for you tomorrow

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sjain

@sjain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#984

Originally posted by: desir

han aur aab tou thread bhi complete ho jaayega just 7 pages more tou humein aur ar ko smile karna tou banta hai yar thanks so much mahua thankks

Oh no thanks I am always their for US READERS *grins looking at Sky*

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#985

Originally posted by: sjain

Yes so to compensate for all the times she made you cry or sad she is suppose to pay penelty by putting LONG installment tomorrow..I aam so not leaving her with out update No worries ..but I am making my "V&V readers union" to nikalofy morcha against Sky so SUPPORT me

I'll try to complete the whole part tomorrow if possible Mahua but I know I will be unable to do that coz I myself have invited some family friends for dinner tomorrow.I'm the cook not mum this time,so I'll be able to put an installment only.
yeh SKY kya cheez hai?
Morcha Ahaan!!😆

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Niketa

@desir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#986

mai naa aab virtue and vice kii jagah nsdt par comment karungi kyonki aap yahan par itnaa roolati hai mujhe kii merii comment karne par vision hii blur ho jaati hai aur aaj kee parte kee baare meiin bas yeh hii keh saktii hun ''tujhe haq nahin den sakti mai tujhe keh nahin sakti aapko mohabbat kee baare meiin isiliiye chali hun mai khudd ko tabah karne terii iss sachii aur pak mohabbat meiin'' yeh aapki riddhima keh rahii hai jahan aapnein humein rotaa choda hai aue batao kya kahun mai

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: sjain

No ways no tricks with me ..Comments tomorrow abhi onle reading time ..comment karne ke liye mood shood banana padta hai ..mahol set karna padta hai

Good night ..& Better if you start writing 2nd installment right now ..so that it becomes easy for you tomorrow

Acha comment ke liye mahol banana padta hai,fir toh likhne ke liye aur bhi zyada ache mahol ki zaroorat hai right?😆
I'll start calling u Mahua nakhrewali if u don't give ur comments by tomorrow.😈

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#988

Originally posted by: desir
mai naa aab virtue and vice kii jagah nsdt par comment karungi kyonki aap yahan par itnaa roolati hai mujhe kii merii comment karne par vision hii blur ho jaati hai aur aaj kee parte kee baare meiin bas yeh hii keh saktii hun ''tujhe haq nahin den sakti mai tujhe keh nahin sakti aapko mohabbat kee baare meiin isiliiye chali hun mai khudd ko tabah karne terii iss sachii aur pak mohabbat meiin'' yeh aapki riddhima keh rahii hai jahan aapnein humein rotaa choda hai aue batao kya kahun mai

Nahin jana aisa sitam na karna,apko pata hai na ki how eagerly I wait for your big long comments on VnV.
NSDT aur VnV ke comments ek doosre se compensate thode na honge,donon jagah reviews chahiye mujhe aapke.
Is installment ke liye apne jo yeh khoobsurat line likhi hai na,isey main kya kahoon..It's soo beautiful and describes Riddhima's state soo amazingly..
I love u so much jana for making me feel soo good everytime I come up with a piece of some imaginations of mine.
Muah!
A warm hug to my jana who has got tears after reading this part.
Muah!