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Posted: 13 years ago
o wowieee...thank god neha believed him...n patched up with him...
n pooja and diya...haye...what a bhabhi and what a sis...super cool...bhabhi and nanad ki jodi to hit hai boss...
n tanya chipkali...kitni innocent ban rahi hai''veer mujhe nahi pata''...witch...
n that trail room scene...maza a gaya...
n shubh uncle are koi inhe badam khilao taki inhe thodi akal aye...aur tanya ko bhagaye aur neha ka grah pravesh karaye...
but chalo ek baat achi hui kam se kam dhruv ne thodi himmat to dikhayi...
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
reso jii..
wil edit now...
~~EDITED~~

yeyayayayayyayayyaaa...
patch up ho gaya,
di meri katti wali warning se der gyi,
yeh di der gyi, 😉
di ne meri baat maan li,
dekha, main kinna dangeruos bacha hoon,😈

ab agar aap kahoge ki maine yeh tumhari daant se nhi balki stry likhne k liye kara h, tho main phirr bhi yahi manongi ki meri vajah se neer mile h, meri wanring se,...😳
coz, har jagah mujhe aapna credit lena bhot pasand h...
mujhe aapni tareef sunana bhot psnd h,,,😆
i lov it.

so, meri poja,pooja the babhs, (modern form of bhabhi)
sooper cool she is, she came to console her dewar, lovd dat scene...👏

dhruv ne bhi himmat dekhayi, lovely ...
rudra bechari sapna ko dhruv k kaam ki vajah se time nhi de paya...😭
bechari biwiyaan...pati office ko jyda value dete h...

veer came to her office, so romantic, he lovs her so much,
she cud not sleep, n finally trusted her heart, her love.😳

tintokali, u idiot, S@@L!...satynashi...i hate u, 😡
tumhara tho murder pakka h,...acting kr rahi h veer k samane innocent bana ki.
veer, usse ek kich kr chata do...😡

woie, diya n pooja roxxx...
chaa gaye tussi dono...
haye, kya brilliant idea h inn ladkiyon ka...🥳

ladkiyan roxxx, n rulzzz...

trial room scene,
haye, kinna hawt n romantic,
sooper amzing
lovd that reading.☺️

sahi ho gya sab,
but jiss dinn tintokali mer jaye,main bhagra karungi , pakka,

but ab iss shubh unkle ka kaun screw tight kare, 😡
haath dho kr piche pad gye h veer ki shaddi ke...

bhaag kr shaddi tho karega nhi,
neer wil neva accept it.🤔
ab tho mom dad se lad jagd ke shaddi hogi

jo bhi hoga
sooper excited for it😍

lov u di🤗
ud soon...



Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
one more thng i reembr,

maine kuch socha h,
but aap naraaz mat hona ki main aapki stry k saath chedd khani kr rahi hoon

jahan tak mjhe yaad h, neha ka bhi ek bhai h-harsh...

aap unki pairing tintokali k saath kardo...
voh pakka iss tanya ko sudhaar dega,

sudhrne ka ek chance tho sab deserve karte h na!...
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Posted: 13 years ago
rashu neha ka bhai bhot smart n sweet h or uska naam harsh nhi aaditya h tintokali use deserve nhi karti
usse to koi apne jaisa hi milna chahiye na or milega bhi in coming update n aditya ki story v bhot jaldi start hogi with some one vry sweet girl
i think ab tk tum samajh gyi hogi ki mein kiski baat kar rhi hun
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

one more thng i reembr,

maine kuch socha h,
but aap naraaz mat hona ki main aapki stry k saath chedd khani kr rahi hoon

jahan tak mjhe yaad h, neha ka bhi ek bhai h-harsh...

aap unki pairing tintokali k saath kardo...
voh pakka iss tanya ko sudhaar dega,

sudhrne ka ek chance tho sab deserve karte h na!...


are nahi aditya agar us chipkali k saath chala gaya toh humari pyari si diya ka kya hoga...
dekho agar dhruv k liye pooja hui...rudra k liye sapna hui...veer k liye neha hui...aur chipkali hui humari villan...toh simply logic yahi banta hai ki pooja aur neha ke bhai ki setting veer,rudra and dhruv ki behen se hi hogi na...

well us chipkali ko bhagane ka sochna hai toh ek tarkeeb mere pass bhi hai...us chipkali ki setting us karan k saath kara do...i mean chipkali bhi villan...aur wo karan bhi villan...jodi kamal ki hogi...😉...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

rashu neha ka bhai bhot smart n sweet h or uska naam harsh nhi aaditya h tintokali use deserve nhi karti
usse to koi apne jaisa hi milna chahiye na or milega bhi in coming update n aditya ki story v bhot jaldi start hogi with some one vry sweet girl
i think ab tk tum samajh gyi hogi ki mein kiski baat kar rhi hun


yup sirf rashmi hi nahi hum sab bhi samajh gaye...aditya k liye sirf humari pyari aur bhai ki setting karane wali diya hi achi lagegi...koi ainvayi chipkali nahi...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome finally patch up ho gaya tahnx dear for making dem happy again.

Aise behen aur bhabhi bhagwan sabko de...

Ab aise time pe kyu rok diya?? Dis not fair , mujhe jaldi next part chahiye,plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey sweetie...both the updates were awesome...enjoyed it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow luved how neha support veer n her positive thinking...
up soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

rashu neha ka bhai bhot smart n sweet h or uska naam harsh nhi aaditya h tintokali use deserve nhi karti
usse to koi apne jaisa hi milna chahiye na or milega bhi in coming update n aditya ki story v bhot jaldi start hogi with some one vry sweet girl
i think ab tk tum samajh gyi hogi ki mein kiski baat kar rhi hun



okay...

diya n aditiya...

😍

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