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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for being late
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Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samantha1987200

Omg... thank God you posted... I opened IF today 5-6 times, just to see whether you have updated or not... and man i'm lucky...😊

😡I'm glad ki tension thodi kam hui iss part mein... i liked it alot😊

Bas us Tanya ka bhi kuch kar do, public humiliation or something... she totally deserves it😡

Plz ud soon😊

Love
Tc😊

im glad that u like my story samy...
thanks for ur lovely comment
will update soon
love u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

o wowieee...thank god neha believed him...n patched up with him...

n pooja and diya...haye...what a bhabhi and what a sis...super cool...bhabhi and nanad ki jodi to hit hai boss...
n tanya chipkali...kitni innocent ban rahi hai''veer mujhe nahi pata''...witch...
n that trail room scene...maza a gaya...
n shubh uncle are koi inhe badam khilao taki inhe thodi akal aye...aur tanya ko bhagaye aur neha ka grah pravesh karaye...
but chalo ek baat achi hui kam se kam dhruv ne thodi himmat to dikhayi...
continue soon...
luv u...😊

thanks ridz for ur supercool coment
will update soon
luv u😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

reso jii..
wil edit now...
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yeyayayayayyayayyaaa...
patch up ho gaya,
di meri katti wali warning se der gyi,
yeh di der gyi, 😉
di ne meri baat maan li,
dekha, main kinna dangeruos bacha hoon,😈

ab agar aap kahoge ki maine yeh tumhari daant se nhi balki stry likhne k liye kara h, tho main phirr bhi yahi manongi ki meri vajah se neer mile h, meri wanring se,...😳
coz, har jagah mujhe aapna credit lena bhot pasand h...
mujhe aapni tareef sunana bhot psnd h,,,😆
i lov it.

so, meri poja,pooja the babhs, (modern form of bhabhi)
sooper cool she is, she came to console her dewar, lovd dat scene...👏

dhruv ne bhi himmat dekhayi, lovely ...
rudra bechari sapna ko dhruv k kaam ki vajah se time nhi de paya...😭
bechari biwiyaan...pati office ko jyda value dete h...

veer came to her office, so romantic, he lovs her so much,
she cud not sleep, n finally trusted her heart, her love.😳

tintokali, u idiot, S@@L!...satynashi...i hate u, 😡
tumhara tho murder pakka h,...acting kr rahi h veer k samane innocent bana ki.
veer, usse ek kich kr chata do...😡

woie, diya n pooja roxxx...
chaa gaye tussi dono...
haye, kya brilliant idea h inn ladkiyon ka...🥳

ladkiyan roxxx, n rulzzz...

trial room scene,
haye, kinna hawt n romantic,
sooper amzing
lovd that reading.☺️

sahi ho gya sab,
but jiss dinn tintokali mer jaye,main bhagra karungi , pakka,

but ab iss shubh unkle ka kaun screw tight kare, 😡
haath dho kr piche pad gye h veer ki shaddi ke...

bhaag kr shaddi tho karega nhi,
neer wil neva accept it.🤔
ab tho mom dad se lad jagd ke shaddi hogi

jo bhi hoga
sooper excited for it😍

lov u di🤗
ud soon...



thank u swthrt for ur amazing lovely n long comment
loved ur comment😃
han dear mein bhot dar gyi thi ek rashmi naam ki ladki se isliye meine jaldi se unka patch up kara diya...khush🤣
dear its a story kuch bhi ho sakta h but jo bhi hoga exciting hoga just wait n watch😛
will update soon
thanks for lovely comment
love u😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi


yup sirf rashmi hi nahi hum sab bhi samajh gaye...aditya k liye sirf humari pyari aur bhai ki setting karane wali diya hi achi lagegi...koi ainvayi chipkali nahi...😊

shittt man sabko pta chal gya ridz ko bho omggg😲ab kya hoga mere suspense ka😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

Hey sweetie...both the updates were awesome...enjoyed it...

thank u dii love u muaahhh😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Awesome finally patch up ho gaya tahnx dear for making dem happy again.

Aise behen aur bhabhi bhagwan sabko de...

Ab aise time pe kyu rok diya?? Dis not fair , mujhe jaldi next part chahiye,plzzz

thanks dear for ur comment
will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo



nhi yeh pagal do khoonkhaar janvr...
milkr pata nhi kya tahelka laayenge...

iska sirf ek hi upay h,
inka murder...😡
bas,😡

arey rashu mere pass isse bhi accha rasta h 😆bhot jaldi pta chalega don't worry
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

wow... funalyy the misunderstandings are gone 😊...

thanks for ur comment😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

nice ud riya...

finally misunderstandings khatam ho gayi...
luved diya very much in this ud...
ud soon..
luv u..

thanks mayuri
loved ur comment
will update soon
love u😃

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