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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samantha1987200

Aww... such an amazing update😊... poor Veer and Neha are gonna be separated :( ... hope Tanya won't create any problems!!!!

Plz update soon😊

Love ya
Tc



thanks dear for ur lovely comment😃
lets see what happens next
will update soon
love u too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Neha is really very supportive...veer is very lucky to have her.

Hope their separation will do some positive in their lives.
Lovely update dear..continue soon.

will update soon
thanks for ur comment😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

very nice ud riya...

3 months veer neh ke bina kaise rahega😭
feeling bad for both of them...
ud soon
luv u😊

thanks mayuri for ur comment
love u too😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 50

neha reached a jaipur hostel on time but she was very sad to got separated with him for such a long period...since their relationship started this was the first time when she went away from him for 3 months...she opened the doors of her room n stretched herself on bed to get rid from the tiredness...

on the other hand veer busy in office n thought about her...he was missing her badly...but tanya was very happy...she looked siddarth n shubh came towards his cabin..she thought something n sat next to him quickly...he still busy on laptop...she started very lovingly-''veer kam hi karte rahoge ya khaana bhi khaoge''he looked at her surprisingly-''what????''
she again continues with lovely smile on her lips-''lunch ka time ho gya h chalo kuch kha lo phir kaam karte rehna''n put his files aside

shubh n siddarth smiled to saw them together...shubh-''sidarth kya tum bhi wahi soch rhe ho jo hum soch rhe h''shubh-''ji bhai sahab''

shubh -''to thik h ab to rajesh se baat karni hi padegi or jald se jald hume veer ki shaadi bhi karni h''then they leave without disturbing them

she looked at doors n smiled...then she opened the lunch for him he still staring her surprisingly-''isko aaj hua kya h pehle to kabhi mujhe lunch ke liye nhi pucha to aaj kya hua h''to himself

she put a spoon n about to fed him with her hand when he stopped her-''nhi mein apne aap kha lunga tum jao or apna kaam karo''she still smiling..he was more confused to saw her face expression..she again offered him but he again refused it...she was furious n said-'agar neha hoti to bhi nhi khate''

he looked at her-''lekin wo nhi h or yeh hak sirf uska h or kisi ka nhi tumhara bhi nhi''he leave the cabin sadly

she throw the spoon on plate n said to herself angrily-''usse tumhaari jindagi se utha kar bahar fek diya h meine veer ab tum sirf mere ho''

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day passed n veer became more sad becoze no one here from which he shared his feeling ...

after two months

rudra n dhruv returned from their honeymoon...shubh n siddarth decided to gave a surprise to veer...

he sat in the room when his phone rang...it was a unknown number..he picked it up-''hello''

on the other side-''hello veer kaise ho tum''he felt happy to heard her voice after two months-''neha...tum thik ho na or wapas kab aaogi i miss u so much plsss jaldi aa jao ''

she felt very sad-''veer mein thik hun mein bhi tumhe bhot miss karti hun har waqt tumhare baare mein hi sochti rehti hun..tum thik to ho na''he said-''tumhare bina kaisa ho sakta hun...neha ek baat kahu''

neha-''kaho na''

veer-''ab tumhare bina nhi ji sakta mein''she was almost crying-''mein bhi''he sensed that she was sad n disapointed-''accha thik h tum phone kaha se kar rhi ho''

neha-''aaj subah se tumhe bhot miss kar rhi thi to abhi lunch mein bahar aakar tumhe phone kiye kisiko pta nhi h agar kisine dekh liya to bhot dant padegi''

he smiled-''mein tumhe dant nhi padne dunga tum jao or apna dhyaan rakhna i love u''

she also smiled with a tear-''love u too bas i mahine baad mein wapas aa jayungi tum apna dhyaan rakhna or khaana time par khaa lena''then she disconnect the phone...he looked at his phone n kissed it

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after 15 days

there was a grand party in malhotra house...for the dhruv n pooja's baby..everyone knows about that she was pregnant...so shubh organised a party for his grandchild

everyone was happy...sharma's n singhaniya also arrived at malhotra house...pooja welcomed her parents but missed her lovely sister...guests came n congratulate to dhruv n pooja ...elders gave theirs blessing n wishes to her ...veer also very happy but he missed his love..his neha

shubh n siddarth discussed something when tanya heard it n felt on 9th sky...

after sometime

shubh excused all n said-''welocome everyone aaj hmare liye bhot khushi ka mauka h bhot jald hmare ghar ek chot mehman aane wala jiske liye yeh party di gyi h...par uske alawa ek or surprised h hmare pass aap sab ke liye...

veer.n his family members little surprised ...

shubh continues-''veer hmare pass aao''he moved with confused face towards him...then he called tanya she was very happy as she know everything...

shubh-''aaj hmare pass aap dono ke liye ek surprise h''siddarth came nearer to veer-''hume pta h tumhe hmara surprise bhot accha lagega''he was still confused

shubh-''surprise yeh h ki aaj tumhari or tanya ki engagement h''he was damn shocked n stunned...rudra,dhruv,pooja,diya . nivi were shocked to heard this

his eyes filled with tears..but he was silently looked at his father who was ery happy...

siddarth hugged him-''hme pta tha ki tumhe hmara surprise bhot accha lagega''

shushma came with two rings...rajesh n her wife was very happy ...he control his tears...diya rudra,nivi also looked at him with teary eyes

pooja came nerer to dhruv-''dhruv kuch karo na ...veer to neha se pyaar karta h to mana kyun nhi kar rha usse roko na''

veer looked at his father-''papa mujhe aapse kuch baat karni h''siddarth-''kya hua veer tumhe yeh sab accha nhi laga''with worry face...

veer-''nhi aisi baat nhi h mein kisi or se''but shubh stopped him-''veer tanya ko ring pehnao''siddarth also smiled at him-''chalo jaldi se tanya ko ring pehna do''

he still standing blankly...shubh n sushma angriy looked at him..she picked up the ring n gave in his hand-'ring pehna do beta''tanya happily extended his hand...his hands were shivering shushma put her hand on his shoulder..he looked at her she nods her head to proceed..he sadly slid the ring in her finger..a tear came from his eyes..he wiped it quickly..no one noticed his face n everyone start clapping

now the tanya's turn ..sapna gave her ring while smiling as she didn't know about veer n neha...she put the ring n looked at him...he closed his fist n pulled back...siddarth said him to extend his hand...he hit his hand on the corner of table n his hand start bleeding...siddarth again said-'veer pana hath do''he pulled his hand which was bleeding badly..everyone was shocked to saw his hand

nivi quickly wrapped the clothes around his palm...-''yah kaise hua''he lowered his eyes..tanya knew the region but how cud she back off..she put the ring in his other hand finger...veer rushed out from there shubh n siddarth were confused to saw his strange behaviour

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in his room

he sat on couch n throw the ring outside the window...he was crying...now he wanted her badly...he missed her more than everyday...his mother came n hugged him-''sab thik ho jayega veer''

veer-''kaise thik hoga mein tanya se shaadi nhi karunga bas''

nivi wiped his tears-''veer tumhare papa ne yeh rista joda h hum unko mana nhi kar sakte...or bhai sahab bhi kabhi nhi manege..par hum unse baat karne ki koshish jarur karenge''

he hugged his mother-''maa mein kisis or se shaadi nhi karunga''she hugged him back

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his days passed with saddy morning n teary nights to missed her ...after 15 days

she reached at mumbai ..her mother welcomed her daughter with lovely smiled ..she hugged her mother n father

naina-''jao fresh ho jao mein khana lagati hun''

she was very excited ...she want to saw him..hug him but now her mother's hand food wiating for her

after sometime she called veer...he lying on bed n picked up the phone..he was very happy to saw her number-''veer''

veer-''neha tum kahan ho''she smiled-''guess karo mein mumbai aa gyi hun ''

he quickly stood up from the bed wore his clothes-''mein tumse milne aa rha hun''she giggled-''itni jaldi kya h thoda wiat karo''

veer-''mujhe abhi tumse milna h bas''she again giggled-''accha thik h mein aati hun''she changed n went downstairs

naina-''neha khan ja rhi ho''

she was looked at her mother n said-''maa mein wo dii se milne jaa rhi hun''

naina-''abhi to aayi ho jakar aaram kar lo baad mein chali jana...''

neha-''nhi maa jaruri kaam bhi h isliye jana h''

naina-''thik h jao apni dii or veer ke liye kuch gift le jaana''she looked at surprisingly-''kyun''

naina-''tumhari dii pregnant h tu maasi bnanae wali h isliye or veer ki engagement ho gyi h tanya se isliye''her smiled faded n tears came in her eyes-''engagement''


he reached at park where they always met ...he looked for her..she was sat on bench...veer looked at her..she looked more beautiful...her hairs n her black eyes makes her more beautiful...she looked at him with tears..he came closer n about to hug her when she moved backward..he was confused

neha-''tanya meri sirf dost h...mene aaj tak kabhi kisi ladki se pyaar nhi kya sirf tumhare siwa...mein tumse bhot pyar karta hun..mein tumhare bina jee nhi sakta ...yeh sab bola tha na tumne mujhse sab juth...sab juth bola tha tumne mujhe''

veer cupped her face..she pushed him back n shoued on him-''don't touch me..hath mat lagao mujhe...kya kami thi mere pyaar mein jo tumne tanya se engagement kar li''he put his hand on her shoulder-''neha mer baat to suno''she pushed him back-''mene kaha na hath mat lagao mujhe...kitna vishwaas tha mujhe ki tum or sab ladko ki tarah nhi ho..par tum bhi sab ki tarah nikle..pyaar ka natak mere sath or shaadi us tanya ke sath...usi se shaadi karni h to pehle hi bola hota mein tumhaare karib kabhi nhi aati''

veer wiped her tears but she removed his hand-''dhokha diya h tumne mujhe...mein sirf tumhare liye time pass hun h na''veer stopped her angrily-''neha pehle meri baat suno aisa kuch nhi jaisa tum soch rhi ho''

she moved back-''kya sunu or kyun mujhe tumse koi baat nhi karni tum sab ladke ek jaise hote ho''tum bhi or sab ki tarah mujhse nhi sirf meri body''before she say something more he slapped her-''shut up just shut up''...she was crying while he tried to console her control her...he came closer n cupped her face-''neha meri baat to suno''she removed his hands n rushed towards her car n leave...

he still standing with teary eyes-''ek baat meri baat to sun lo plsss''
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Posted: 13 years ago

lag hi raha tha yeh tanya kuch garbar karegi, veer ki engagement ho agye but he is so sweet usne engagment ring rite finger mein nahi phene😊, neha and veer both are so sad. and so am i😭...plz continue soon...thanks for pm and ud.

Edited by geetap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very sad update:-( ye kya ho gaya:-( Veer and Tanya... Oo that tanya is so mean:-xhate her:-x Awww.. My Veer:-( poor Veer:-( Neha ne to uski baat hi nahi suni:-(...
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Posted: 13 years ago
That Shubh nd his wife are real psychos i mean they liked dat tanya, wat d hell

and here neha is not listening him, well she is hurt but i m sure veera will convince her, after all they love each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭😭
ud soon...
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago

haawww...that was a very sad update...

feeling sooo bad for veer n neha...

they r suffering soo much..

cont. soon..

thxn for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
no no no nooo... this shudn't have happened...😕😕
very sad update...
😕

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