OS: Sweet punishment.

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purplekid

@purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Loved it, Haffie! Please continue soon, and thanks for the PM!

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naveena

@naveena_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

It was very good plz pm me

Edited by naveena_arhi - 13 years ago

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

The title got me all excited because I love your dark and angst ridden OS.Boy, was I surprised after reading this! Loved this fluff piece as the others! :D

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blah_blah3

@blah_blah3

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Awh that was so cute!

Wonderfully written

Thanks for the PM...

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•Jessie/Jessica•

@.Enchanted_Soul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

So romantic! I loved reading it 😳

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gauri khan

@arshisangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Awww it was so cute :) lyk u said i was smiling throughout ☺️ i am a fan of romantic rain scenes and with arshi it was jus perfect man...u r such a brilliant writer and lover ff's u write. thx for sharing dear 😃

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nims6

@nims6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

i loved that...so sweet..and ...actually youa re good at dark as well the opposite...

Edited by nims6 - 13 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

You should, absolutely never stop writing fluff , this was super sweet. He wanted to see her in the rain *Awww* and we all know Arnav in the rain would be a sheer delight.

But a fabulous job by the *Queen of Darkness*.

Awaiting BMBB eagerly 😊

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LAKSHMI

@barunslakku

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

awesome,...thanks for the pm😊

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

A happy OS? No Angst at all? Hello, is that Haffie or some ghost inside the dark queen? 😆

I called u the queen of darkness and here u come with a happy romantic all blushing OS.. Ah.. Chinnu's effect, I understand! 😉

Whatever happy u write, the dark OS's lingers in my mind too strong to believe that this one is yours too! Your fault for making those darker ones stronger!

With this OS - I liked it, loved it, blushed for it, smiled for it, felt romantic cos of it! So, you get what I felt at end of the update now??

The part where Arnav said it's her punishment for making him to do something - I thought it is gonna be angst.. But now I'm wondering what mischief Kushi had done!

The punishment was indeed a punishment! For Arnav mostly and tiny bit for Kushi.. He couldn't stand to see her wet and she couldn't enjoy the rain completely(Not that she's complaining)😳

Loved it Haffie!

Thanks for the PM!