OS: Sweet punishment.

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Awwwaa... That was really romantic ❤️,nicely written .👏 👏 👏 You should write stuff like this more often . 👍🏼

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

i am surprised! not a dark angry arnav! but this one was also very good!

keep it up dear!

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luv_arshi

@luv_arshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

😳 awwwhhh... hww cuutteee it wass...<3<3 da kiss scene made me blush..hehehe ( coz i was imagining myself in khushi's place...😆😳 ) nd u shud evn cntinue writing romantic OS's... nd i do aGree wid da names u got.. u r seriously such an amazing writer dt i can sit nd read ur FF's or OS's for many times.. PS:- i think nw u shud update BMBB.. :p hehe nd thnc for da PM..

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Sreeja Nair

@sreeja_rox

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Just loved it yaar too gud!!!!Khushi getting punished to stand in d rain and she throughly was happy inwardly😆
And omg she loves thunder😲And d last part was so damn romantic.You definately are gonna write more of it!!!!😊
P.S. Please do update vampire's obssession soon!!!!I seriously want 2 read it