kriyaansh ( u still in my heart ) SS - Page 46

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear . . . Can u plz update the index . . . I'm unable to locate the updates from 4th part . . . 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum update aroma...

really nice !!!!!

chal ab jaldi next update de ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates dear...waiting for next part...thnx for the pms...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: yogini64

Hey dear . . . Can u plz update the index . . . I'm unable to locate the updates from 4th part . . . 😳


dera update k bottom pe check kro ...next update ka page no diya hey ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys os ka link kriya in b/w life and death ...

message karne ka time nahi hey ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx aroma 4 d link... Acha hua tere thread me aayi varna pata hi nai chalta...
Ab ff bhi jaldi update kar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Done wid the last 2 updates . . . 😃
story is going superb . . . .
rinni ko kriya ka bhoot dikh raha hai . . . 🤣
achha hua taani isme kriyaansh ko milvana chahti hai 😛
I hope newyork ki academy me bhi 'fire-exit' hoga 😳 . . . . . Coz kriyaansh ki private baat honi rehti hai na... 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: yogini64

Done wid the last 2 updates . . . 😃
story is going superb . . . .
rinni ko kriya ka bhoot dikh raha hai . . . 🤣
achha hua taani isme kriyaansh ko milvana chahti hai 😛
I hope newyork ki academy me bhi 'fire-exit' hoga 😳 . . . . . Coz kriyaansh ki private baat honi rehti hai na... 😆


haha right ... but kuj change hone wala hey so wait ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok guys i'm back again ... tum logo ko pkane k liye ... or bla bla ...

after selection ... everyone want talk to kriya ..
sw : guys kriya k paas chalte hey ...
sh : ha chalo ...
ther saw kriya in bb court ... kriya also waiting for them ...
all girls run toward kriya ...
neha & vish gave kriya a tight hug ...
neha : tum kha chali gyi thi . why tumne hme btaya nahi ...( start crying ... are jaar j rona ...kyu chalu kar deti hey .)
kriya : i'm sorry guys ..
sw : sorry kyu bol rahi ho . hame reason btao tumhare jane ka ..( j hui naa baat swayam .)
at last kriya tell them whole story ... ( but wait kriya ne shivam k bare mein nahi btaya ...)
sh slap kriya .( relax guys dheere se . tum log b na .)
sh : mana ki tab hum dost nahi the iska matlab j nahi k tum neha or vish ko b na btao ..vo tumhare dost hey ... or tum hamesha doosro k bera main scohti hoo apne bare mein nahi . tum itni ashi kyu ho ...
kriya : kya karti us waqt jo sahi lga wo mane kiya .i'm sorry guys .
viky : kriya u r true friend ...
they all gave a group hug ...
voice : mere ane se pehle hi the end ho gya ...( o god again voice .)
viky : tum .( while hide behind neha ..)
kriya : viky tum jante ho ise ... my sleeping beauty aroma .
viky : j .j ... tumhari dost hey .
kriya : ek min viky khi ... aroma ..( o no kriya ko pta chal gya ...)aroma : mene kuj nahi kiya .( ab muje koi bcha lo ...).
kriya : really kuj nahi kiya...matlab tumne viky ko pareshan kiya ...aroma : marna mat ...sorry viky ...( dekh loo gi baad mein ...)
aroma : to kriya ne sab kuj bta diya . matlab ab us shivam ki band bja sakte hey ...
kriya .: wait ..(ab kya fayda us ne bol diya ...)
all : shivam ...
taani : j shivam kon hey ...
vish : baad mein btaati hoo pehle j shivam ka kya raaj hey .
niles : ha kriya bolo ..
aroma : main btati hoo ...footloose se pehle shivam ne hi kriya ki mom ko btaya tha kriya k dance k baare mein ...
bharat : is shivam ki to main ...
amar : ha shole ge nahi use ...
girls : right guys ...
aroma : guys i have idea
everyone : kya ...
aroma : pehle chalte hey . phie btaugi ...(scah bolu to koi plane nahi hey ... aroma to aroma hey ...)
kriya : guys tum log jao main ati hoo ...
sw : ok kriya ...( they all leave ..)

kriya finding rey every where ...
kriya : rey lha gayb ho gye ... kab se doond rahi hoo... { guys guess what rey kha hey ...fire exit no ... kriya k thik pishe ,...}
rey : muje bohat kuj pooshna hey tumse kriya ... bohat sare swalo ke ans chahiye aaj ... mene 2 saal wait kiya hey ... oe aaj muje har que ka ans chahiye ... or bina ans diye main tume jane nahi dooga ... wait main vese b nahi jane dooga ...* self talk *
kriya : * self talk * muje pta hey mene apko bohat hurt kiya hey ... main apke har que ka and doogi please ... rey ... kha ho ...( suddenly kriya realise some one follow her ) ... but who ...kriya take out small mirror from her bag ... yes it is he ...rey mere pishe pishe a rahe hey ... jahi sahi moka hey ... ( lo a gya fire exist but with funny twist ...)
kriya pull rey into fire exist is se pehle ki koi unhe dekhe ...
kriya : ( without turning toward rey ) ... kab se apko find kar rahi hoo or aap ho ki bina kuj bole mera pisha kar rahe ho ...
rey : no response ...
kriya : rey main apse baat kar rahi hoo ...
{ kriya turn ... o my god . rey to faint ho gya ... karlo baat itni der se skele baat kar rahi thi ... bichara rey . actually dono ...)

scene shift ...
aroma and all standing front of shivam house ...
sw : to aroma btao plan kya hey ...
aroma : am aammm...
sh : aroma plane kya hey ...
aroma : guys koi plane nahi hey ...
( j lo koi plane i nahi hey . kua aroma ...)
all : what ...
viky : tumne to bola tha plane hey ...
aroma : vo to mene ese hi bol diya ...
all : pagal ho kya ...
aroma : ha poori tra se ... ander chale ...
taani : koi plane nahi hey to andar j ke kya karna he ...( muje plane ki kya jroorat saytaan hoo ... dar kesa ... )
aroma : tusi log scohde bohat ho ... are jado kuj karna hunda ta kardo ...
vish : ha par ander kese jaye ge ...
aroma : ladder se ...
girl : what r u mad ? wait u r mad...
aroma : chill kuj nahi hoga .. main hoo na ...
neha : par karna kya hey ...
aroma : nothing .. bhoot ...
rinni : kha hey bhoot ...
aroma : hum hey na bhoot ...
finally aroma open the door everyone enter in the house without making any noise ...
aroma : girls bhoot banne k liye ready hoo ...
boys : or hum kya kre . pehle light cut kro then enjoy kro ...
( vese rinni sab ko bhoot bna rahi hey morning se ab khud bhoot bane gi ... lol )
sw cut the power supply ...( guys imagin girls in bhoot wala awtar hoe funny na ...)
next post con...

Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved it ...
ye page 43 se sedha 68 ata he kya??
i mean 48 k baad 68 ata he kya??
mujhe dekh k kuch aysa hi lag rha he..
now coming again to the update..
i loved it..
awww thats soo sweet of taani..
i loved the way u presented her...
and haye pagal hen kya ye kriyansh?/
har waqt har cheez sapna nhi hoti...
mene suan tha pyaar me log pagal ho jate hen..
and lo ji aj dekh bhi liya..

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