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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: Dazzling_Smile
I loved it ...
ye page 43 se sedha 68 ata he kya??
i mean 48 k baad 68 ata he kya??
mujhe dekh k kuch aysa hi lag rha he..
now coming again to the update..
i loved it..
awww thats soo sweet of taani..
i loved the way u presented her...
and haye pagal hen kya ye kriyansh?/
har waqt har cheez sapna nhi hoti...
mene suan tha pyaar me log pagal ho jate hen..
and lo ji aj dekh bhi liya..

jahi to baat hey thanks for lovely comment

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#462

j shivam kitne aram se so rha hey ise j nahi pta ki iski waat lagne wali hey ..

all girls standing front of shivam with candel in bhoot wala awtaar ... ( ab sab apni apni positions pe hey haha ..)

aroma : shivam... utho shivam ( are kamine uth kumbkaran ki aulaad .. )..

shivam : kon hey ... j darwaja kese khula hey ...

tabi hall se payal ki awaj ati hey ..

shivam in hall : j kya ho rha hey ,... light kyu band hey ...( dar k mare heart attack a jayega ise ...)..

rinni and simmi candel le k shivam k agey se nikalte hey ...

shivam : k...k ...kon hey .(dil mein to bol rha hoga mummy bcha lo muje ...)

vish : bhoot ho main ,,,

shivam : b...b ...bhoot ..( mummy kha ho ...)... tum kya chahte hoo ...

neha : vese to khoon pena hey muje par tumhara khoon ...

shivam : please muje shor do tum jo kho ge main kru ga ...

taani : to ganna gao ...

shivam : main kabi btlao ta nahi par andere se darta hoo main maa ... tujko sab hey pta hey na maa...( shivam tu to gya ...)

aroma : chalo ab dance kar k dikhao ...( bakra no 2 ... is se to dance karwa k rahoo gi ...)

shivam : d ...d.dance ( kyu sunai kam deta hey kya ...)...

aroma : dance kro warna ...

shivam : karta hoo ... shivam dance like cartoon ... boys pta nahi kese hasi control kar rahe hey ...

shivam please ab to shor do muje...

aroma : shor dege pehle bolo main gdha hoo ...

shivam : main gda hoo ...

sh .: ab j bolo main pagal . ... hoo

shivam : main pagal hoo ...(at last shivam b behosh ho gya ... aaj ki raat hamesha jaad rahe gi ...)

scene shift ...to kriyaansh ...

flash back ...

when kriya pull rey rey ka head takraya diwaar se result aap ke samne hey ...)

kriya : j maine kya kiya ... rey utho please ...( finally rey ko hosh a gya ...)

rey : yumne itni jor se kyu khicha ...

kriya : sorry galti ho gyi ...

rey : tumse hamesha galti kyu hoti hey ...

kriya : sorry ...

rey : sorry nahi milegi ..pehle j btao ki tum gyi kyu muje shor ke ...

kriya : main btati hoo na rey ...

kriya told whol story to rey ...

rey : tumne pehle ... ( nahi nahi itni b kya jaldi hey thori masti ho jaye u know main saytaan ...)...par phir b maafi nahi milegi ...

kriya : u don't love me ...

rey : ( kitni cute hey j ... rey focus focus ... )...nahi i love some one ... but not u ...( j main kya bol rha hoo ...)

{ rey ka marna k irada hey ...}

kriya : rey jooth mat bolo ...

rey : main jooth nahi bol rha ...( o god main kya kru she is soo cute ...)

kriya ... kae lo acting rey ek baar ny to pohco ... phir dekhna ...

please guys listen this song

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sdl4HmfKEI0

but rey leave ( muje to NY pohcne ka intjaar hey ... sorry battcutter ..)

ok guys mene lanbi update ki update jese b hey par muje comment chahiye che gali hi do ... but comment kro ...

guys j link kriya in b/w life and death os ka hey

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57345112�

do read and comment on it

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#463

Yaay 1st one to comment
dhinka chika dhinka chika
Arre wah aroma...itna bada update...love u
amazing part
chalo sab ko sach pata chal gaya...acha hai
aroma tu sach mein bohot badi shaitan hai...kriyansh scene was nice..bechara rey lag gaya usko...
(As always i love wat u write in brackets)
but the best part was BHOOT...
Tera idea bohot mast tha..roflll has has k mera pet dard kar raha hai..
Kya daraya shivam ko..pehle song then cartoon dance..rofl
finaly ek aur bakra...
i dnt know how boys control their laughter
thanx 4 d pm
waiting 4 the nxt part..

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Lovely update aroma.

I was laughing while readin this wholeupdate.

tunne aapne comment bich mai bahut ache se kaha.

Shivam ka ganag dance aur fir gadha.deserves it.

Rey ko itna bada chot ki woh faint ho gaya.tu bhi ab faint ho jaa jaldi se.

Thanks for the pm.

Lovely update.

Nice song.

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#465

res

unres..

OK OK 1st let me breathe...

hehehehhehehe..

hahahahhaha.. ok ok..🤣

hehe ok let me 1st stop rofling around..🤣

Oh God!! that was hilarious..🤪

hahahahhaha...

God i cant stop laughing..🤣

fire exit ka scene esa bhi ho sakta he kya????😆

hehehehhehe Full On DHAMAKA !!🤪

rey fainted...🤣

and then BHOOOTTT!!!

hahahahahha OH GOD!!!🤣

plzzz saveee meee !!!

i will die laughing !!!🤣🤣

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 13 years ago

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#466

Awesum updt aroma...

Luvd it...

Shivamz scene ws awesum...it ws so funny..lol🤣

Kriyansh wer cute...

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#467

awesome update ...loved it very much

it was superb update...

poor vicky aroma ko dekh kar kitna darr gaya 🤣🤣🤣

what a plan torture shivam...superb aroma

the song tujhe sab hai pata meri maa 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

and dance hahahah i can well imagine monkey dancing🤣🤣🤣

and kriyansh scenes in fire exit were awesome

waiting for the NY trip

continue soon

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#468

wow thank god finally sab ko sach pata chal gaya n bhoot ka idea was amazing...creatives ko shivam ke saath kuch aisa karwana chaiye...pls update soon