New OS: An Ocean Of Regret PART 3, Page 10 UPDATED - Page 9

verry sad but nyc :)
awesum job

Originally posted by: Avi64

you know you really need to start accepting that you write really well! you are one of the few people on IF whose writing i love😊

Awww That is sooo very sweeet of youuu! I'm sooo touched! Thank Youuu 😳 The love I've recieved on this forum is just so amazing that I find it hard to believe... Love you ❤️ and Thanks for such regular comments! They mean a lot 😳

Originally posted by: Avi64

OMG! you described Arnav's pain so well... i really feel bad for him...this is what awaits him... we were all for a redemption track... we wanted Arnav to feel sorry for his wrong doings... but now i think i won't be able to see our dearest Laad Governer suffer like this 😭

Dumbledore says in HP1 (here i mean Harry potter not Hari Prakash😛)
Don't pity the dead but pity the living and above all those who live without love...

i really don't know where Arnav fits... he was loved as much as anyone could be and he loved As much as any person could but still hatred made him live without love...

i really hope he's able to live happily ever after with khushi 😊

loved the update 😊

PS: and yeah... our creativity is always enhanced manifold when we have a test at our doorstep... its a tried, tested and established fact😛

Hahahaha! First of all your P.S. cracked me up 🤣 "Its a tried, tested and established fact!" Hehehe! Very true! 😃

And sooo glad you liked it!! I thought I didn't do as good a job with the 3rd part as I did with the other two! 😊

Awww! I love dumbledore too! He's Awesome! Yes Arnav's hatred and mistrust is making him live a loveless life! And you're right about the redemption track, Like Khushi can't see Arnav in this state, we can't either! After all, we love him too 😆 Thanks for commenting 😳

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

So you FINALLY decided to complete it. Phew. Beautiful. Loved the way you described Arnie's guilt and remorse through his bodylanguage. And how Khushi understood his torment, his feelings. Why she didn't give a damn for the apology. The basic definition of love. When words aren't needed to converse. When your eyes are enough, heartbeats are enough. Loved it.

Awww thank youuu for such a lovely comment! Glad to know you loved it 😳 and I thought it would be better if Khushi understood him rather than not forgiving him cos she's always known that he had trust issues... She knew he did wrong but his realization was all she needed to forgive him 😳 Thanks for Commenting hun 😛

Originally posted by: zaniax

Aww..tht was so sweet & wat a perfect ending :)

LOVED it!!! Thanx for d pm.

Awww glad you did! And yes tried to keep a happy ending cos most ppl can't bear sad ones 😉 Thanksss 😳

Originally posted by: Fazila~

Good job...im glad shes fine...even reading sad OS or FF gives me tensions hahahahhaha

Hahahaha! Yes! I prefer reading happy ones too 😉 but just had to finish this one off and see, I gave it a happy ending 😳

Originally posted by: Msserialfan123

Absolutely adorable Os!

Thank Youuu 😳

Originally posted by: swetha_ch

Beautiful OS!

Thanksss 😛

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Haila! U never PMed me this OS!!!

</div><div>But u know what? I had already read the 1st 2 parts😆

It was brilliant!!!

Arnav's pain, anguish., regret, remorse everything is beautifully written

That bullent should have been 2 way...1 bullet idhar se nikli aur dusri uski taraf se...he too should have gotten injured...

He escaped unhrt!!!! How unjust...Grrr! I hate these guns😆

Good u've given it a proper ending...it looked kind of abrupt with the 2nd part

Thanks claireDD!!!!

Fari always needs someone to wake her up for updates...1st Iqra n now u😃

Thanks for the PM

Hahahaha! I love your 'Haila' 😆 and yesss, you didn't get PMs for this one as I wrote this one before we came to know each other 😳 and I doubt I sent out PMS for this one 😉

You wanted my hottie to get injured too? How rude! 😆

And yeah, I had never thought of ending it at part 2 but just got so busy with my SS that didn't get time to complete this one😛

Hahaha 🤣 someone reads to wake me up for updates? Waise that is kinda true 😉 Hehehe! Glad you liked it though 😉 and Thanks for commenting 😳

P.S. Ufff! I haven't commented on your OS and index!! 😳 will do it in a bit Insha'Allah 😃

Originally posted by: farheen75

Lovely os...u r such a fantastic writer that whole u r making us laugh with your light and funny story of ASR's junior secret diary u have made us eyes wet with this heart warming and emotional story.

Awww Thank Youuu Sooo Much for such a lovely comment Farheen! Means a lot 😳 And I never told you the reason I sent you a buddy request, its cos my name's Farheen too so I wanted to be your buddy as you're the only Farheen I've met on this forum😆

Originally posted by: Aliya_hzsn

Smiley star this is Soo Beautiful...
Was so emotional, Especially Part 2 when arnav regrets and Khushi is restless...Aww i loved it so much!!
the Pain, the Love all expressed Beautifully...!!

Awww Thanks Aliya! Glad you liked it hun 😳 and part 2 is my favorite too 😳 you can call me Fari btw 😛

Originally posted by: pakpearl

I read d 3 parts in a go...I wonder,Fari,.how I missed 2 read it before😕...it was simply beautiful😛

Awww Thanks Di! And you probably missed this one cos I wrote this one before we came to know each other so you didn't recieve a PM if I sent them out, which I highly doubt I did 😉

So nice to know that your is Farheen as well and guess what my nick name is fari as well and thanx a lot for making me your buddy...by the way r u from Pakistan as well?