New OS: An Ocean Of Regret PART 3, Page 10 UPDATED

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Haila! U never PMed me this OS!!!

But u know what? I had already read the 1st 2 parts😆

It was brilliant!!!

Arnav's pain, anguish., regret, remorse everything is beautifully written

That bullent should have been 2 way...1 bullet idhar se nikli aur dusri uski taraf se...he too should have gotten injured...

He escaped unhrt!!!! How unjust...Grrr! I hate these guns😆

Good u've given it a proper ending...it looked kind of abrupt with the 2nd part

Thanks claireDD!!!!

Fari always needs someone to wake her up for updates...1st Iqra n now u😃

Thanks for the PM

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@Fazila~

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Good job...im glad shes fine...even reading sad OS or FF gives me tensions hahahahhaha

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Lovely os...u r such a fantastic writer that whole u r making us laugh with your light and funny story of ASR's junior secret diary u have made us eyes wet with this heart warming and emotional story.

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Aliya_hzsn

@Aliya_hzsn

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Smiley star this is Soo Beautiful...
Was so emotional, Especially Part 2 when arnav regrets and Khushi is restless...Aww i loved it so much!!
the Pain, the Love all expressed Beautifully...!!

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

I read d 3 parts in a go...I wonder,Fari,.how I missed 2 read it before😕...it was simply beautiful😛

Edited by pakpearl - 13 years ago

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ASYA12

@ASYA12

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

ooh first comment of the day and this goes to u...
wonderful as usual..
really liked it!!!!...😊

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

LOVEDDD IT! every single time you post a OS its just SO good i loveee how it didnt get too cheesy that was one of the best things lol and it was awsome how he felt bad and didnt have words to comprehend it but as a reader i could just sense it that there was so much in his head lol

another brilliant piece as usual!

and thanks for the PM!

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
amazing update.loved it

keep writing

Thank Youuu 😳

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

loved it! do you plan to continue or is this the end?

I'm afraid this is the end hun 😉 Glad to know you liked it though 😃

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

loved it thanks for the pm

You're Welcome dear 😳 and Glad to hear you enjoyed it 😊

Originally posted by: NIDIZ
loved it

Thanksss 😳

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

oh wow this was beautiful...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome os can't believe i missed it loved it very emotional and well written loved asr remorse at not trusting khushi and khushi awaking and think the are lying to her and that he is hurt loved it thanks for the pm

Awww Thanksss for such a nice comment with an awesome pic! 😳