New OS: An Ocean Of Regret PART 3, Page 10 UPDATED - Page 7

Hey just discovered this os, loved all 3parts and I'm glad they got a happy ending

loved it! do you plan to continue or is this the end?

loved it thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Awww Thank Youuu Sooo Muchhh Avi for giving it a read and leaving such a sweet comment behind 😳

Actually this one was one of my very first pieces of writing and I thought it wasn't good enough to be continued or to PM ppl so I just left it 😆 Anyways glad to know you liked it 😳

you know you really need to start accepting that you write really well! you are one of the few people on IF whose writing i love😊

OMG! you described Arnav's pain so well... i really feel bad for him...this is what awaits him... we were all for a redemption track... we wanted Arnav to feel sorry for his wrong doings... but now i think i won't be able to see our dearest Laad Governer suffer like this 😭

Dumbledore says in HP1 (here i mean Harry potter not Hari Prakash😛)
Don't pity the dead but pity the living and above all those who live without love...

i really don't know where Arnav fits... he was loved as much as anyone could be and he loved As much as any person could but still hatred made him live without love...

i really hope he's able to live happily ever after with khushi 😊

loved the update 😊

PS: and yeah... our creativity is always enhanced manifold when we have a test at our doorstep... its a tried, tested and established fact😛

So you FINALLY decided to complete it. Phew. Beautiful. Loved the way you described Arnie's guilt and remorse through his bodylanguage. And how Khushi understood his torment, his feelings. Why she didn't give a damn for the apology. The basic definition of love. When words aren't needed to converse. When your eyes are enough, heartbeats are enough. Loved it.

Aww..tht was so sweet & wat a perfect ending :)

Originally posted by: Warda98

Nice

Thanksss 😳

Originally posted by: Riima_Azraa

can't belive I missed this!!!😲

gonna be reading it when I get some time insha'Allah

I just loved the enthusiam you show towards my work! It flatters me so much! 😆 Love you for that ❤️

Originally posted by: snoopy84

Just saw this OS in your index loved pleased that they ended up together and it was sweet when they confessed their love to each other.

Awww glad you liked it! So It was a good idea to make an index after all 😉

Originally posted by: sarra0

Hey just discovered this os, loved all 3parts and I'm glad they got a happy ending

Awww glad you liked it sweetie! 😳 yesss, tried to give them a happy ending cos mostly ppl can't bear a sad one 😉