IPKKND FF:Perfection Th.3 (Chap 40 Pg 130)Upd:8/12

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lovespell

@lovespell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#961

OMG! I am total speechless. I had to bit back my tears for both arnav and khushi. Ofcourse khushi will fight against his demons. You gave a beutiful insight I must say. Loved the Payash HOT LOVE. I am glad you left the actual part with out names and just revealing it at the end. You left us to our imagination 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉. You know very well of us Gutter Minds👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.

I am totally intrigued to the story. It took a 360 degress turn in the story in just these last 3 episodes. Arnav was able to finally see himself as a descendant of the ultimate aravind mallik who once waved off his sister when voiced her notion. My heart really went out for him.

NK is super. I am totally Fida over him. He stayed like a true friend (lover who can't have his love).

What will khushi do now? Will she be a lady knight who will take the WITCH's help to win over her prince's demons??? I really loved the ending part where payal decided to play her part in her lil' sister life to bring them to peace

I really can't wait. Sorry for the late commenting but thank you very much for the PM

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Aisha

@asha...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#962

RES

I will update soon... ;), can't say it'll be an exceptional comment though

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#963

Well, now...every true knight needed a truly wicked witch, didn't they? A dirty fighter to even the odds, the witch with the answers and the spells and the potions...
How i love this Payal. She is truly one of the best character in this story . She showed such emotions for Khusi that leaves me feeling proud if nothing else.She is not only an elder sister but also a parent to Khusi. Heremotional fight with herself seeing her younger sister in so much pain and still not able to find out the reason of such fate. But yeah she's blessed with one perfect partner named Akash. Who not only learned from surrounding mistakes not to come to conclusion, gave in to his wife's emotional outburst, understand his wife but also tried to make her see Arnav's past which justified some of his action to Khusi.
I know Khusi might not think her relationship with Arnav in a way Payal or akash thinks but i guess what's matter in the end is how she will able to get Arnav out of that past.
Did Khusi know about all this. I guess Akash or Payal should tell her which will help her to understand Arnav a little more..

I really enjoyed Payal n Akash 's part in this story and love you for this whole chapter on them.. 👏

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ipkkndbestshow

@ipkkndbestshow

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#964

Been busy these days..cudnt catch up wid the FF lately :( ...Thnx fr the update... u deserve more appreciation!! i luv the way u capture each nd every detail in ur story..doin justice to every character!! Luv ur writngs!! Thnx fr sharng... update soon :)

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sunny_sarun

@sunny_sarun

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#965

umm ok u knw my mom just asked me that what r u reading on ur pc for the past 3 hours..and i said MAMA ITS PERFECT!!!

ur FF is unbelievable plz plz do pm me when u update

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tasid1

@tasid1

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#966

Pls accept my buddy request.. Love this story.. Hv spent better part of the night reading this in one sitting... Late for work!!!!!! But no regrets.. Just cldnt stop myself... Your writing style s beautiful as s the weaving of the story, te imagery... Well don...again pls accept my buddy request... Pm me on the next update PLZ.

And now for the pressure...

Update plzzz..

Update plzzz..
Update plzzz..
Update plzzz..
Update plzzz..
Update plzzz..

Edited by tasid1 - 13 years ago

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#967

Navin, how about an update?? Please? I have withdrawal symptoms.and do I see a new thread in the horizon?ooohhh Navin. Please update!Come on ladies- after me. UP-DATE! UP-DATE! UP-DATE!

love,
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Edited by V323 - 13 years ago

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#968

need my dose of Perfection urgently... LOl

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sarra0

@sarra0

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#969

Beautiful,

"Khushi, bless her poor heart, was now in some ways the most unfortunate woman alive, as well as being the most blessed. Because Khushi was...the mannat ki chabi herself-she was his key.

That, given the twisted nature of his past, there could never be pure happiness, un-tinged with some darkness, there would always be a faint stain on the perfection of Khushi's and Arnav's lives. There was a reality that would mar the fairy tale "happily ever afters." The reality of Arnav's nature, and the need to understanding the feral beast within him, to tame and reign in his ability to hurt and destroy the very thing which he held most dear. This was the truth--and one that Khushi, depending on her strength, could either fight, or run from.

Given what had scarred Bhai, the depth of that betrayal and the years it had taken to cement hardness over that deep hole within, Bhai, now, was not a man who's emergence from that dark well could happen without a great deal of upheaval and chaos. And like an explorer cursed by Fate to suffer for daring to unlock that which had been sealed, Khushi would now have to pay a price. Both for her daring in unlocking a sealed chamber to find Arnav, and for being the person who was that key. Arnav had become hers, but his demons--they would attack her now, and do it through Bhai. His past would take a pound of flesh from Khushi as a blood-price for Arnav's freedom.

With the opening of his soul, with the lowering of his guard and the emergence of his love had come the other emotions that Arnav Singh Raizada's barricaded heart had contained. Now would come the utter mindless need for the one who made his heart beat. Now would come the deep possessiveness and obsessive impulse to hold on to the loved one. Since Khushi was the person for whom it beat, his heart would demand that Arnav hold onto Khushi at any cost, even if it hurt her as he did it. Even at the risk of strangling whatever it was that made her his salvation.

And as Aakash explained to Payal, trying to put into words what he knew of his Bhai--none of this had anything to do with whether Arnav trusted Khushi. He had to trust her-had he not given her that which made him most vulnerable---his entire heart, and all its secrets , both beautiful and ugly? But that did not mean he knew how to show that trust, or even that he trusted anything or anyone else. "

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#970

Absolutely phenomenal update, it was just beautifully written :)

Payal and Akash take my breath away, so in sync with each other, and understand each other so well, their love is pure and honest. Just perfect.

I love how you've shown 2 contrasting love stories, Arnav and Khushi's who's love is so passionate, obsessive, and full of fear, a love that is stuck in demons and in one's past, a love that for Arnav has become his life, a love that is so powerful it can see no right or wrong. A love that Arnav trusts so much that HE will do anything to keep it.

And you then you have Payal and Akash, who's love is just as passionate but honest with so much understanding.

2 beautiful love stories :)

But Akash just blew me away, his understanding of how Arnav truly feels, just shows how strong their relationship is. The way he shows Payal that Arnav isn't really evil or cruel, just a man who loves too much, a man who's past demons will not let him live his perfect life with Khushi so easily.

Then Payal... the warrior, the savior, the protector... Khushi's protector, her love for her sister, the way SHE understands Khushi is beautiful, she knows her sister too well,, she knows Khushi is not a coward, but a fighter, and She will fight for her love :)

Each character in this story amaze me, each in their own way they blow me away, leave me speechless and make me fall in love with them more after each update :)

Beautiful chapter, Payal and Akash, the heroes of this FF :)

Thanks for the PM.