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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update and the update is a long one almost triple the size that I usually write pls if possible give me big comments.
I would like to thank loveugeet, Gcs-girl, Monali, Waheeda, Pooja, Khushi and Ritu for helping me in completing the 2nd thread.
I dedicate this update to my darling sis Pooja (mandymore) dear I always feel guilty that I forgot ur birthday but u know na ur Di is a duffer so after 2 whole months I am giving u a gift in the form of this special update I hope u will like it. Love u loads darling muahh
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PART 19

This was the first time that Maan's heart felt cared and loved. He crushed Geet in his embrace and placed a loving kiss on her forehead as he was unable to voice the happiness and satisfaction of his heart through words

Maan tightened the hug and Geet gifted him the peace of his heart by taking him in the magical folds of her love

From that day onwards Maan and Geet's relationship took a beautiful turn; Geet kept on doing small and simple things for Maan but these simple things were enough to bring a significant change in him

The arrogant and selfish MSK had transformed into a loving and caring man. Every morning Geet would give Maan an ice cold shower and every night she would make him drink his almond milk without fail. Maan would also find out some way or the other to tease Geet' the situation was such that he could not even bear a separation of few minutes from her

He didn't even realize when his concern and attraction for Geet got converted into love

It was now 6 months since Maaneet's marriage and today was the last day of the shoot; during these 6 months the entire unit had turned into a perfect family and each one of the members were emotionally attached to one another

Everyone decided to organize a small party and celebrate the completion of their movie all the preparations were done and in the evening a small party was organized at the director's farm house

As Maan and Geet were returning back from the shoot Maan saw a beautiful saree in one of the shops he immediately messaged his secretary and ordered him to purchase the saree and place it in their room before they reached home

Geet: Maan aaj shaam ko party mein bada maza aayega humari puri unit hogi wahapar haina? [Maan today our entire unit will be present at the party it would be so much fun]

Maan: Haan Geet maza toh aayega par I hope Director saahab kuch achha menu rakhe warna mujhe bhukha rehna padega infact parathe khakar kafi din ho gaye hai kaash koyi mere liye party mein parathe banaa de [Yes Geet but I hope the director decides a good menu otherwise I won't be able to eat anything infact I would love to eat parathas as it has been a long time since I relished on them]

Geet: ohho parathe Maan waise bhi aap kafi mothe ho gaye ho issliye aapko paarathe nahi khane chahiye infact aap dieting karlijiye hehe [Oh really Parataas Maan as it is u have gained a lot of weight so I feel u should do dieting instead of eating parathas hehe]

Maan: Achha masti sujh rahi hai abhi batatha hoon [Oh really u r in a naughty mood let me punish u for this]

He started tickling her

Geet: Maan nahi pls sorry aap jaante ho ye meri kamzori hai [No Maan pls don't to this u know this is my weakness]

Maan: Offcourse Geet tum toh meri chuimui si gudiyaa ho [Offcourse Geet u r my delicate doll]

He continued tickling her and Geet started laughing she hugged Maan lovingly when she could not control her laughter Maan responded back to her hug and started caressing her back

After some time they reach KM. As soon as Geet enters their room she sees a packet which was gift wrapped

Geet: Ye packet yaha kisne rakha? [Who kept this packet over here?]

Geet: Issmein toh mera naam likha hai kholkar dekthi hoon [It has my name on it let me open and see]

It was the same saree that Maan had purchased for Geet

Geet: Kitni khoobsurat saree hai ye' [This saree is so beautiful]

Maan: Ye saadharan si saree tab khoobsurat banegi jab tum isse pehnogi [This ordinary saree will look beautiful only if u wear it]

Geet had tears in her eyes

Geet: Maan ye saree aapne mere liye kharedi? [Maan u purchased this saree for me?]

Maan caressed her face lovingly and wiped her tears with his fingers

Maan: Haan maine socha itna haq toh tumpar banta hai mera aur waise bhi main chahtha tha k uss party mein sabse zyada khoobsurat meri patn'. [Yes I think I have this much right on u and as it is I desire that the most beautiful lady at the party should be my wif']

Geet's heart skipped a beat as soon as she heard the incomplete word'she wanted Maan to complete the incomplete word but Maan rectified his statement as an unknown fear crossed his mind

Maan: Mera matlab hai k main chahtha hoon k party ki sabse khoobsurat ladki meri Geet ho [I mean I want my Geet to be the most beautiful lady at the party]

Geet: Aapki pyar bhari ek hi nazar kaafi hai aapki Geet ki khoobsurati ko nikarne k liye [Your one love filled look is enough to give an unmatchable glow to your Geet's beauty Maan]

Maan's happiness knew no bounds when he heard your Geet from her mouth oh it seemed so perfect'

Geet: Maan chaliye ab jaldi se taiyaar ho jaaiye hum eek ghante mein farmhouse pauchna hai [Maan we should get ready soon as we have to reach the farm house within 1 hour]

Maan: Hmm'

Maan goes to the washroom and takes a quick shower while Geet dressed up in her saree and as usual the first thing that she applied was her sindoor she felt so complete with it that she did not use any other makeup on her face

She complimented her look with a diamond earing and a diamond bracelet. The only ornament that was decorating her neck was her mangalsutra

She was all ready and was just about to leave their room when Maan stepped out of the washroom. He was completely mesmerized by her looks it seemed the beautiful night sky had arrived in his house to bless him with the magical light of the moon

This is how Geet looked ( I tried to mix Geet's pic with the saree so that you'll can visualize her in it)

Geet blushed as Maan was not ready to remove his gaze from her beautiful face

Geet: Maan aap taiyaar ho jaaiye main bahar jaakar baithi hoon [Maan u get ready I will wait for u outside]

Maan: Mujhse dur kyun jaana chahti ho Geet vaada karo k mujhe chodkar kabhi nahi jaayogi yuhi mere nazro k saamne kadi rahogi [Why do u want to run away from me Geet promise me u will never leave me and will stay in front of my eyes forever]

Geet wanted to dance in joy as this simple statement of Maan had given her immense happiness before she could give a reply to Maan her cell started ringing

The call was from the assistant director

Geet : Maan Assisant director ka call hai aap taiyaar ho jaaiye main unse baat karke aathi hoon [Maan the call is of the assistant director u get ready by that time I will talk to him]

Geet was about to go when she stopped for a second and looked directly into Maan's eyes

Geet: Geet aapki amanat hai Maan aur aapki amaanat ko aapse koi nahi judaa nahi kar sakhtha khud ye Geet bhi nahi [Geet is your possession Maan and no one can separate me from u not even this Geet]

She gave a shy smile and left the room. Maan got all his answers from this simple confession of Geet

He started getting ready for the party

Geet: Kya? Party ka menu nonvegeterian hai par Maan toh pure veg hai [What the menu of the party is nonvegetarian food but Maan is a pure veggie]

Shekar (assisnant director) No problem Mam main abhi vegetarian food order kar detha hoon [no problem Mam I will order vegetarian food right now]

Geet: Nahi iski zarurat nahi hai aap ek kaam kijiye bus jo saaman main bolthi hoon aap uss saaman ko ready rakhiye main khud aakar Maan k liye unka manpasnad khana apne haatho se banaungi [No need of this u just keep the ingriedients that I tell u ready I will myself come and prepare Maan's favourite food]

Shekar: Par Mam [But Mam]

Geet: Shekar pls do as I say I will be there within 20 minutes

Shekar: Okay Mam

The call ends.

Geet: Maan aapko parathe khane thena ab aapki Geet khud aapke liye apne haatho se parathe banayegi [Maan u wanted to eat Parathas now ur Geet will herself prepare your fvavourite food with her own hands]

Geet goes to the room and informs Maan that she is leaving early due to some important reason and she will be waiting for his arrival at the party. She was somehow successful in convincing Maan and she took her car and drived to the venue

Farmhouse

All the ingredients were ready and Geet started preparing parathas for Maan; here Maan was getting restless without Geet he too left for the party immediately

Geet wanted to complete her cooking before the arrival of Maan hence she was doing all her work at a very high speed; as she continued working by mistake she kept her hand on the hot pan'she screamed in pain due to the burning sensation

Maan had just arrived at the farmhouse and he immediately rushed to the kitchen after hearing Geet's sound

One of the boys rushed to get the first aid whereas a girl was trying to soothe her pain by putting ice cubes on her palm

Maan: Geet kya hua tumhe? [Geet what happened?]

Geet tried to hide her hand behind her back

Geet: Kuch nahi Maan [Nothing Maan]

But Maan went ahead and took pulled her hand; he was shocked to see her palm

Maan: Geet ye kya halat banadi tumne apni main kuch der tumse dur kya chala gaya tumne khud ko nuksaan paucha diya? Kisne tumhe ye haq diya k tum meri Geet ko takleef pauchau? [Geet what is all this I was not there with u for few moments and look what have u done with yourself? Whoi gave u the authority to give trouble to my Geet?]

Geet forgot all her pains after hearing this sentence from Maan

Shekar: Maine toh pehle hi kahatha Maan Sir k hum restaurant se aapke liye vegetarian khana mangwa lethe hai par Mam ne hi zidd ki k wo khud aapke liye apne haatho se parathe banayengi aur parathe banane k dauran hi unhone apna hath jala liya [I had already suggested to get vegetarian food for u from the restaurant but Geet Mam wanted to make parathas for u with her own hands and while doing so she burned her hand]

Maan was shocked he looked at Geet with immense love and tried to measure the depth of her love which she possessed for him; without thinking twice he scooped Geet in his arms and walked out of the house. He placed her in the car and ordered the driver to take them back to KM throughout the drive Maan kept Geet in his loving embrace and did not leave her hand even for a small moment.

As soon as they reach KM Maan once again scooped Geet in his arma and took her to their bedroom. He placed her on the bed and sat besides her. He took her hand and looked at it with immense love. He had tears in his eyes as he felt he was the reason behind Geet's pain

Maan: Tumne mere liye khud ko itni takleef pauchayi [U went through so much pain because of me]

He took her hand near his lips and started placing soft loving kisses on every area of her palm; he was not ready to stop he was trying his level best to soothe her pain

Geet: Sirf aapke liye nahi Maan humare liye'.humare rishte k liye' [Not just for u Maan I did this for us'for our relationship]

Maan raised his head and looked directly into her eyes' today the blindfold of his eyes got removed completely...yes he was able to read the language of her unsaid and unconditional love. Geet knew he had finally realized her love and she wanted to write this truth on his heart permanently without wasting a second she confessed

Geet: I love u Maan

These 3 words that made way through her lips were the most priceless possession of Maan.

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ys2mOM9tJJk

MUSIC

He kept on looking at Geet as if he was in some kind of a trance unable to take his heated gaze Geet lowered her eyelashes and with a shy smile on her face she went and stood besides the window

She looked at the moon'the moon was hiding behind the clouds and automatically a reddish tinge made way to her rosy cheeks as her loyal friend gave her the message that today is the auspicious night when both of u will become two bodies and one soul

Her heart beats increased as she realized that Maan was approaching her. She closed her eyes as soon as she felt Maan's warm breath on her back

She felt an electric current flowing across her body as Maan started decorating her back with gentle soft kisses

She gulped her saliva as Maan's hand made way to her belly and squeezed it with raw passion'with the help of his long finger Maan started making patterns on her belly button as his lips continued their mission of placing sensous kisses from the entire path of her back to the nape of her neck.

Kehthe hai khuda ne iss jahah mein sabhi k liye

He was just about to mark her sensitive area with his love when out of shyness Geet tried to move ahead but Maan was quick he stopped her by holding her shoulder possesively

Kisina kisi ko hai banaya har kisi k liye

Geet's legs were paralysed as Maan's fingers made way to the nape of her neck and started lingering there shamelessly giving her a tickling sensation

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishara maano

Maan reduced the unnecessary distance that was acting as an obstacle towards the beginning of their blissful journey 'he rubbed his stubble on her soft cheeks and gave a natural reddish blush to them by decorating her cheeks with a series of wet hot kisses

Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi k liye

Maan entangled his hand with hers and pressed it tightly as if trying to indicate the depth of his love

Kehthe hai khuda ne iss jahah mein sabhi k liye

Geet rested her head on his chest and gave him access to her delicious neck. Maan licked the entire length of her neck and bit her shoulder aggressively'Geet let out a moan' he never knew that his name would sound so melodious'he bit her once again in the same area expressing his happiness

Kisina kisi ko hai banaya har kisi k liye

Geet once again moaned his name and this was enough for Maan to know the desires of her heart; he wanted to love her and he promised himself to give her the share of his love that belongs only to Geet'yes only his wife. He bit her earlobe and forced Geet to turn around and face him.

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishara maano

Her eyes were still shut...her trembling lips were narrating the feelings of her heart'her warm breaths were intoxicating the entire atmosphere'oh she looked so pure so adorable

Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi k liye

He rubbed his nose with her nose; this was an unexpected action from Maan'Geet immediately opened her eyes and was totally captivated in the ocean of love that was flowing through Maan's eyes

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta

She hugged him immediately as she wanted him to know that she belonged to him every part of her skin' every breath of her soul was only his' this hug of hers not only expressed her submission but also expressed her desires' her desire to be loved by the man who resides in her heart'yes the man who had the right to claim her body and her soul

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta

Maan understood the depth of her love ' he wanted to shower his wife with the most memorable night of their life'he guided her fingers towards the buttons of his shirt and gave her the signal that he was all hers and there was no need for her to stop from claiming him

Kaise hum jaane hume kya paata

Geet started unbuttoning his shirt with her trembling fingers; every touch of hers was awakening the passionate lover in Maan' he inserted his hand inside her blouse and unhooked her bra without any further delay

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Geet gasped with this sudden action of Maan she was expecting him to remove the dori of her blouse but before doing that Maan had removed the hinderance of her secret cloth which was protecting her womanly curves from this world

Tu humsafar hai phir kya phikar hai

Geet had worn a strapless bra'Maan held one edge of her bra and slowly started moving his fingers in the form of an inner circle as he gracefully managed to touch the edge of her right curve. By this time Geet had successfully unbuttoned Maan's shirt she was also completely lost in his well toned chest she started caressing his manly form with her loving touch

Jeene ki wajah yahi hai marna issi k liye

Both of them were busy feeling each other but Maan was giving Geet a dose of unlimited pleasure as one of his hand was busy feasting on her soft curves in the pretext of removing the burden of her bra from her chest'since Maan did not remove her blouse from her chest he was getting a strong access to her beautiful bre**t

Kehthe hai khuda ne iss jahah mein sabhi k liye

As soon as his finger touched the tip of her curve Maan pulled Geet strongly by holding her waist with his other hand and let out a loud groan. Geet scratched his chest as raw desires were driving her crazy

Kisina kisi ko hai banaya har kisi k liye

Maan started teasing her nip**e by twisting and rotating it inbetween his finger and his thumb. Geet bit his earlobe aggressively as Maan took one complete curve of hers in the grip of his strong hand and without stopping for a second he started kneading her soft delicious secret forcing her to increase her demands

Oh oh oh..hmm'hmm'hey hey'.

Geet started placing hungry kisses on Maan's chest and allowed her fingers to mark her dominance on his back'she was gifting him a sweet blend of pleasure and pain by marking him with her nails as well has caressing him with her loving touch

By this time Maan's fingers had successfully reached her second curve with the help of his small finger Maan started writing his name on her nip**e'Geet was moaning his name continuously as the experience that she was going through right now was more beautiful than a dream

Her throat was completely dry she wanted Maan to satisfy her thirst'her hand travelled from his back to his hair and clutched it with full force and she successfully managed to lift Maan's head'Maan was busy tasting the sweetness of her upper chest and this small action of Geet had interrupted this process'he was forced to look into her angelic eyes and his heart was successful in understanding the need of his wife

He started tracing her lips with his tongue'Geet closed her eyes immediately to live this moment. Maan started placing small pecks on every inch of her lips right from the corner of her upper lip to the edge of her lower lip'he did not leave any area of her lip untouched

Music

Geet started responding and kissed his lips generously'Maan pulled her closer by holding her hair and started sucking her lips paasionately

The intensity of their kiss increased and very soon they stepped into their paradise as they started tasting the secrets of each other's mouth'

Both of them were now sucking each other's lips desperately'Geet bit Maan's tonge as Maan removed her bra completely from her curves with the help of his hand that was lingering shamelessly inside her blouse

He removed the grip of his second hand from Geet's hair and within a matter of seconds he unhooked the last 3 buttons of her blouse from the front with the help of his free hand'he threw her bra on one corner of the room and started massaging both her curves by taking them within the territory of his hungry hands

Geet pulled him closer and their kiss touched a beautiful destination; they kept on exploring each other's mouth without any hinderance. The passion kept on increasing as Maan continued to pinch her nip***s and evoked a new set of desires in Geet'their first kiss was turning out to be the most memorable moment of their life

Oh meherbaani jaate jaate mujhpar kar gaya

After sometime they ended their kiss due to lack of air Geet was too shy to face Maan she hid her face in his chest. Maan blew air on her face as Geet started kissing his nip**e.With the help of one of his hand Maan slid the pallu of the saree from Geet's shoulder and with the other hand he started removing the remaining hooks of her blouse from the front

Gusartha sa ek lamha daaman bhar gaya

Geet bit his nip**e like a true tigress as Maan started sliding her blouse from her shoulder. He successfully unhooked her blouse completely but intentionally he did not open the middle hook of her blouse and hence Geet was only partially exposed her beautiful curves were still hidden from his passionate gaze

Tera naazara mila

He separated Geet from himself and started marking her angelic face with his love by kissing her forehead, her eyes, her cheeks, her chin and every inch of her magical face

Roshan sitara mila

He started moving in a downward direction by gifting hungry smooches on her delicious neck'as soon as he reached the valley of her curves he gifted his tongue with an unmeasurable pleasure as he started licking her valley with his tongue simultaneously giving pressure to both her bre***s forcing them to kiss each other

Takdeer ki kashtiyon ko

Whenever his lips used to come in contact with the bulge of her partially exposed bre***s he used to express his dominance by decorating her soft bulge with aggressive and passionate love bites

Kinara mila'

Geet was going weak in her kness she was supporting herself by holding Maan's shoulder. Maan diverted his attention to her beautiful peaks which were already hard and were clearly visible through her blouse'he took his lips towards her peak and observed Geet's reaction oh she was desperately waiting for him to claim them as his 'she continued to moan his name as now it was becoming really difficult for her to control her burning urges

Sadiyon se tarse hai

But Maan had other plans with one quick movement he removed the saree completely from her lower body now Geet was left only in her petticoat and her partially exposed blouse. He started playing with her belly button and drugged Geet with his intoxicating passion by sucking the sensitive area of her belly aggressively

Jaisi zindagi k liye

She bent down a little and started feasting on Maan's back. Maan lifted his eyes and all of a sudden a new set of desires aroused in him'since Geet was in a bending position her curves were now completely visible to him and this one look was enough to bring out the animal from Maan

Teri saubat mein

He untied the dori of her petticoat in one quick move and inserted his finger in her sensitive feminine portion and started stroking it aggressively. Geet gasped with this sudden action of Maan and lifted her head singing the tunes of his aggressive love

Duayein hai ussi k liye

Maan pulled her by holding her waist strongly and removed the last hook of her blouse with the help of his teeth. The beautiful curve of her chest was now ready to be feasted by Maan. He took one of her curve completely in his mouth and without stopping the stroking activity of her vag**a he lifted Geet in a sideway manner with the help of his free hand and took her to the bed

Tera milna hia uss rab ka ishara mano

Geet ripped off his shirt completely as Maan continued to taste the delicacy of both her feminine secrets. Maan stopped for a second and observed the rhythmic patterns of her chest'oh she was sweating but these very pearl drops on her body were making her all the more desirable

Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi k liye

He rubbed his stubble in a horizontal direction from one curve to the other curve. The touch of his rough stubble on her delicate buds were giving her a prickling sensation.

She was melting like a candle in front of her passion. Her moans were setting fire to water as he was satisfying every core of her body with his possessive touch

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

He started decorating the border of her nip**e by giving her gentle small bites in a circular fashion as if declaring to the world that he is the only one who can see, touch and love these rosy buds

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

She curled her toes as Maan shifted her panty with his long finger and allowed 2 more fingers of his to cross the barrier of her hard flesh and enter the territory of her wet juicy core

Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata

His 3 magical fingers were creating havoc in her private region as with every passing second Maan went on increasing the intensity of his stroking activity

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

After tasting the sweetness of one of her feminine buds Maan diverted his concentration to her second nip**e and once again marked her soul with his love by relishing on her softness generously

Tu humsafar hai

He rolled his tongue in different patterns and enclosed her nip**e within the territory of his tongue. Geet bit her lip and Maan let out a manly satisfactory groan

Phir kya phikar hai

She dug her nails aggressively on his back as Maan started sucking her bre***s by cupping them in the loving folds of his hands.

Geet was completely out of her wits as she was sailing in a heavenly boat of desires and pleasure

Jeene ki wajah yahi hai marna issi k liye

By this time Maan's fingers were completely drenched with the juice of her hot and wet feminine fluid

His heart was now desperate to drink her delicious juice

Kehthe hai khuda ne iss jahah mein sabhi k liye

To accomplish this mission he started moving in a downward direction and along the entire path he kept on showering her with open mouth kisses and hungry smooches

Kisina kisi ko hai banaya har kisi k liye

As Maan was busy tasting her navel Geet's fingers automatically travelled to the zip of his pant and without any delay she unzipped the chain and started feeling his manhood

Maan let out an animalistic groan and lifted her right leg in a vertical fashion and placed it next to his neck

Oh..oh'.hmm' hmm..hey..hey

Her moans were out of control she started screaming as Maan was busy relishing the sensitive area of her thigh

The touch of her fingers on his manhood had made Maan completely wild; he shifted his gaze on her secret lips and his eyes started burning in passion

He ripped off the last piece of cloth that was blocking his view to claim his beautiful wife and slammed his hungry lips on her wet core

Words dried in her throat as she stepped into a paradise with this action of Maan' Maan pulled her secret lip with his teeth as he wanted Geet to sing his name and satisfy his desires

Oh Maan'

After hearing his name; his passion reached its peak' he went on sucking, licking and kissing every deep secret of her core

Music

She held the sheet in a tight grip as Maan became more demanding

She knew that her heart won't be able to bear any futher distance; she wanted him within her right now

Maan understood her need and within a matter of seconds he undressed himself and claimed her completely by entering herr in one quick go

She screamed as sharp pain hit her but Maan soothed her pain by placing loving kisses on her angelic face

Slowly the pain got converted into bliss and pleasure. She parted her lips and Maan immediately captured her petals giving rise to a soul searing kiss

He continued to rock her in a rhythmic tune healing all her pains all her loneliness by making her a part of not only his body but also his soul

This was the happiest moment of Geet's life God had blessed her with his godliness by converting every dream of hers into an unforgettable reality

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So Guys how was the twist? Was it a happy shock? Guys it took me a lot of time to write this update pls give me big comments and let me know if the SR scene was it better that the SR scene of Maaneet in DMG or not? Your comments will help me to improve as a writer while penning down such scenes pls it is a humble request give me big comments I promise to give regular updates of this FF if the response is good..silent readers atleast give a smiley as a comment if the update was good.

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PART 20: Page 32
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY !
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT !
oh Maan please don't break her heart or I'm going to have to break your face !
Edited by lil.mizz.smexii - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
update its better than dmg but i like that maan in dmg very much and here i hate his selfish nature this time he is loving geet care concern but when nt will come what will happen



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
update😳
loved it

sorry for the double post dear
Edited by kamiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
awesome update
what an twist mind blowing priya hatts off dear
oh lala what a hot udate never came across thsi much hotness in a update
continue soon yaar
precap seems good

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