~Good Bye~ ||ArSha OS|| *Next part-pg 12* - Page 20

Originally posted by: kvarsha

loved the update alottt... thnks for pm😃

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

heyyy suprb update,,,,,,lovely,,,,,she feeling kumar sicknees hehehhe dats was so cute,😆😆,thnkx 4 d pm,,,,,n suprise kya hai jaldi botao

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

amazing ending thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

Awwweee..this ws a Fan end surbhi !!!!

Really...am sooo glad to say that u write so beautifully nd wid ur whole-heart.. !!!!

Thanq for ur amazing OS !!!!

pls aur likh na gal...

Originally posted by: ekiholo

Awesome update
Shakti missin shaks
Kunwar surprise visit 2 ny...
hey waiting 4 da surprise!!

Originally posted by: basket_101

awww Kunwar sickness!!

that was adorable!!

i think i have that every friday to sunday :P

but seriously.. it was awesome!

im so glad u decided to write this 1st part..

as u said in ur reasoning, this part depicted both of their feelings and how special they are for each other (:

great job! <3

loveeedd it! :D

Originally posted by: puja_arsha

awesome end...luvd it...👍🏼

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Nice update 😊 Thanks Mahak! 😃
par yaar i wanted it more, can u just continue it more? 😍 awww...I do want to write but then it will just drag and not go anywhere in particular.. Plus, I didn't want it to be so predictable..so I left it open ended..
Shaks was happy n satisfied bcz she reached at d place where she wanted to go n fulfill d dream of her parents n obviously she made a lot of gud frnds 😃 Right!
But d only thing she is missing apart of her family is Kunwar indeed, too much n she wanted to meet him, talk him n see him as she was missing him terribly. Yeah, she misses him terribly. It's been over a month..
N wen she tried to cal him his phone was switched off n it pissed off her mood, but d best part was Kunwar's surprise entry wen Shaks was unable to imagine n believe that he can b here.😍 Yeah, everything came back to normal when he ended up at her door step! Just so mejical..! 😉
And wen she realized n accepted it she was in his arms showing how much they missed each other.😳 Yeah, that was beautiful. Glad you loved it..

Originally posted by: dildostidance19

finally you updated and ended it on a happy note...😃

sorry for the late comments i was out of town..😔

but awesome update..

shakti having Kunwar sickness...aww...😳

and he actually come to NY..love it...

but what is the good news..?

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

nyc it was but itne jaldi khatam kyun