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waterunder11

@waterunder11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

read it! I like this bad arnav. im not entirely sure what happened with khushi. did something happen that made the guys mother ask for her and or is it that the guy is bad and they will no matter what to get khushi so her dad said lets move? update soon!

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Aashifa

@curledup

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Well wasnt that amazing? loved each and every bit of it! the subtle difference you showed between arnav and khushi was amazing! marvelous! the way it all seems like innocence meets darkness! I love it! the narration and the picture in my head all match! b e a u t i f u l! I cannot wait for the next chapter! If you can please do pm me :D

-Aashifa

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Anaya S.S

@nabnab

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Munchy back so soon!!!!

Very interesting start...Arnav as a gangster and ruthless as ever

Got nothing else to add other than looking forward to this story:)

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merrydock

@merrydock

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

hi munchy, glad you'er back so soon. wow Arnav is a Bhai. and not a brother Bhai. intresting, and he just shot a gut in cold blood. OMG HE SHOT A GUY IN COLD BLOOD!!!!!!!.

I'm sure Khushi will just hate him. but still looking forward to the next chapter, this one was really short😭 .

😆😆😆 Arnav works for Happy Singh,

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Woah.

She is leaving Lucknow cos of lowlifes and Arnav is one of those or at least it seems so at the first glance...very interesting!

Specially so because Arnav here is very different from all other fictions! Do continue soon! The last part was fab.

And please add me to your PM list. :)

*Edited

You said its already on a blog...can you give the link? :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

awesome start munchy loved it our boy is a killer can't wait to read more

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Ooh! Intriguing! Can't wait to read more!

Awesome start!

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

That was brilliant, Munchy! Please continue soon! I am in awe again! :( And my bf said I look like a vegetable, staring at the screen as if its gonna come to life :(