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@fanAR

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#311

this is amazing FF , I will leave proper comment tonight .

I loved it

p.s thanks for updating PB too :)

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Came across this gem of a writing Piece accidentally and fell in love with it instantly. I've been a silent reader till now, but had to say something today to commend ur great writing skills. The way u made us hate, like and then love Arnav was just great. All the characters were so well etched and their misery, happiness and pain shown beautifully. I just read the last two parts and can't stop crying. That's how much u made me fall in love with this wonderful story. Hope u come up with more wonderful stories soon. Again must say a great job done. Plz pm me when u come up with a new masterpiece.

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@...Pwincess...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#313

I STILL miss this FF :( I keep re reading it

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

I read the last chapter days ago but couldn't comment. It has been coming back to me - every time Arnav thought it would be too late. For a while I hoped nothing would go wrong and munchy would produce a miracle but that thought now only produces a hollow smile. 'Because love is never eternal nor pure' This story hasn't been an easy read. I've had to take pauses between reading a chapter and I really would not like to be in such a situation. It has forced me to think.

Arnav's love for Khushi and his demand to Devi Maiyya that he dies in Khushi's arms and with her fidelity might have come true but it gives a really heady feeling and bad churning in the stomach. It is ironic how she will 'always' tell their child that she loved him but never told him the same. I hated it when buaji compared Khushi's situation to her own and in turn Arnav with fufaji. I didn't like it an ounce because Arnav could never hurt Khushi in that way.

And it is so surreal that now that Arnav is gone and Happy Singh is gone too and there's no debt on Arnav's side I feel that Devi Mayyia's debt to Arnav has increased manifolds.

I loved it. I've cried loads and thought about all of it in places no one would expect me to and although I'd like to complain of not getting a happily ever after, i cannot because i was not promised one.

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#315

Zabardast ff👏👏

three days ago i started reading yr ff pandora's box & finished it this afternoon. It was a fiction i have never read before & you should forward that ff to karan johar or aamir khan , it doesn't deserve to be belonged to a mere IF. I cried & smiled & then cried again reading every single chapter twice. You should publish a story book on pandora 's box, i will treasure it.

But why did you end it up abruptly. I thought aranv being a lawyer & kushi a strong girlwill fiht together for the justice of both hindus & muslim who sacrified everything but only given pain. Please , plz continue that ff of yr or make a sequel of that ff. Arnav & kushi in that story doesn't deserve an ending limited just behind closed doors. The characters of thats tory are big, so plz continue asequel of that ff plz

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@Arshixx

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

I've come across this FF pretty late but I've heard amazing stuff about it off other people and honestly, I'm hooked since the first chapter. I kind of know what's to come in the next chapters etc. but I still wanted to read it because I'm in love with your writing style!

I love your style of writing and portraying character's emotions in all your FFs but I'm quite hooked to this one. I've sent you a buddy request so I could continue reading it on the blog.

Looking forward to more :) x

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