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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

That was...powerful and I completely didnt recognize Arnav as we know him so good job.

And the last part was...disturbing but well in line with the story, so good job.

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

U have uncanny knack of showing Arnav ruthless in most of ur ff

Some times like him

Some times hate

I don't how u manage to chnage him in the end

Bu it's all worth it for the awesome tortured emotion erupting out of his soul

Oh my od the more I read tormented stuff the more u want to know how he survived like that

Amazing writer...

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

wow wow munchy! you never fail to amaze me!
arnav character is realLy dangerous and dark!
and khusi, she looks scareD! brilliant update!
looking forward to reading more
thanks 4 the pm :)

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

W-O-W! That was some Chapter!!!

So Arnav's became a Gunda so that Akash can have a proper education- Anjali works at the Bakery, Nani knows what Arnav is up to... Garima is a B*tch and so is Payal? And Arnav believs in Devi Maiyya huh? Wow.

Loved it! Keep Going please!

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Munchy, I did say this earlier- no one writes a 'bad boy' like you do. I have so far loved the way you have drawn out Arnav's character- tough, ruthless and terrifyingly scary. Such a big jump from the Arnav of the Genesis.

I loved how you submerge yourself into the plot- the language, the ambience and the sequences are so typical of the underworld in India. Esp the language- which is so integral when you are writing a story on the underworld.

So Kushi and Arnav meet and how do they meet, wow! That scene was so intense and Kushi's terror was so well captured. the sequence at the end when the guys take turn to f**k the woman was scary, but then these guys are normal ones are they?

You never shy away from showing the darker aspects of life- showing things as they are, which is why you stories are so gripping.

Thanks for the PM.

Best line of the chapter- "they always want a good f**k after they've killed someone."

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 13 years ago

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

So Arnav's a really big jerk here! Their first meeting wasn't bad.. if you put aside the cold blooded murder in front of her eyes and the thhal she forgot there! :P Not bad, yeah! ;)

And here also Aakash and Arnav don't like each other?? Man, what's with you and Aakash! You hate him!

So, Garima hates Khushi.. Payal doesn't have balls.. Buaji is indifferent. Hmm..

Poor girl.. She fell in love.. What happened to her was.. sad. I shudder to think what might happen to Khushi if she fell in love with Arnav.. Will the 'enemies' do this to her??

Great update Munchy! :)

ArHi couldn't have had a better first meet, given their history of hit and fall i arms RabbaVes in the show!

And What the! He thanks Devi Maiya! :O

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

brilliant update. you have brilliant ways to unfold the scene. wow very scary. arnav scared the hell out of khushi. woh he scared the hell out of me. i feel sorry for khushi. out of frying pan into the fire indeed. thanks for the pm.

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

interesting... very interesting... do continue soon!!! this is amazing!

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

omg, this Arnav in your FF is dangerous and WHAAT? He believes in Devi Maiyya? 😆 did not see that coming! Khushi looked scared, poor girl. I want moree :P hehe, continue sooon! :)

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

Yayyy!! Munchy's back!! I missed you girl! Well your updates to be precise ;) :D hehehe :D I got so happy seeing your pm!! Every time i logged on IF i'd hoped that i'd get a PM from you abt a new FF! Yayyy! Finallyyy! :D Me sooo happy!! :D

And wow! What a start!! Talk abt being hooked! Can't wait for da next update! Continue soon! :D