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cherry227

@cherry227

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

o man! this is so much different than the regular stories... so much rough stuff... very very crude but equally exciting! poor khushi , first day in the city and she witnessed a murder 😲

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Japonica

@Japonica

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Ha, ha Munchy. This is terrifc👏. If he weren't so nasty and callous, I'd say your Arnav is hilarious. 😆

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booksfreak07

@booksfreak07

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Turns out Vikram was right!
Nice first meeting, right in the thick of things. I can only imagine how khushi must feel... Amazing setup!! Way to go, munchy!!

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nia252

@nia252

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

arnav in yellow...fantastic

really looking forward for future updates...loving it

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Sarina2012

@Sarina2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Holy crap... R u serious??? THAT bad??? Woa... Gosh am cringing on the last paragraph but then don't we always when u decide we should lol!

Seriously, this has to b like the most gruesome meeting of Arnav and khushi. *a chill down my spine*

Okaaayyy so your aakash can never get along with arnav. Thank god at least nani n them acknowledge his efforts. Arnav saying Devi maya cracked me lol!

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Homairah

@daydreamerr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

I've never read any of your stuff before but omg I just came across this and I'm totally stunned and completely in love with it already! This is such a completely new take and I've never read anything like it before! It's gonna be brilliant seeing Arnav's character unravel through this FF and can't wait for their next encounter, their first being as thrilling as it was!
And it's safe to say that my mouth formed a perfect 'O' when I read the last bit of Arnav coming out after his 'turn' with the prostitute omg. Fabulous work! :D

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

arnav s a real villain...n he believes in DM...wow
...cant wait for the next part

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

NARAYAN Nagar!!!!

Hilarious!!!!🤣

k reading on now..

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zarmina asad

@zarmyna

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Jaw dropping intense.
How this world we live in, raises people who can be worse than animals!
Wish I could figure out who to sympathize with! The victim or the culprit, for both have been beaten down by life!

Good job!

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arta

@arta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

poor khushi got scared to death ,i hate this garima
for the others i will wait and see what's bring the next updates to coment on them..
diferent from your other stories but too intresting at the same time