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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter-13

Nupur is peacefully sleeping in her seat. Mayank smiles looking at her and remembers what he has done in the kitchen. Mayank went to kitchen to make some coffee and added sleeping pills which he found in medicine box kept on fridge, he came and gave her the coffee which Nupur happily drinks and as a result she is sleeping peacefully and getting kidnapped by him. Mayank laughs imagining what she might have done if she is not sleeping and comes to know that she is getting kidnapped.

Mayank thinks 'I never know that kidnapping such fun filled game' looks at Nupur with a smile 'that to the girl who is tagged as Hitler in her gang. Let's see how she will react once she gets conscious.'
Mayank almost reached the farm house when Nupur gets up from her sleep. She is feeling light now because of the good sleep she has. Nupur opens her eyes and first sees a row of green trees and a pleasant atmosphere. Nupur smiles thinking it is a dream and closes her eyes again.

Mayank who is observing Nupur's every move says "Miss Queen Victoria ki sleep katham hogaye"

Nupur thinks still with closed eyes 'by god Mayank's voice what is he doing here.' Nupur remembers how Mayank came to her house and then taking her to the car. Nupur opens her eyes and looks at Mayank then observes her surrounding then again looks towards Mayank and says "may I think that y-you have kidnapped me."

Mayank give her a lope smile saying "too intelligent Miss. Bhushan. Yes I am kidnapping you"

Nupur sits straight glaring at Mayank "why?"

Mayank with cool and chilled mood "because you have read the CD, until and unless my plan is not successful I cannot trust you. Tho majboori ma kidnap karna pada."
Nupur "agar mujhe tum hare CD ka saat kuch karna hota toh kab ka karchuku hoti, why now and where are you we?"

Mayank puts his finger on his lips as if he is thinking "point to noted, but what to do I cannot trust you after knowing that CD is with you. just last three days later you are free and we are near to Nainital."

Nupur "Nainital by god, How many hours I have slept" checks her watch.
Mayank "nearly 6 hours."

Nupur with confused look "how? How can I sleep so many hours"

Mayank "donot stress your brain. I have mixed sleeping pills in your coffee" he says so casually as if he has mixed some sugar in her coffee.

Nupur gets angry but tries to keep her voice in check "so how many days I am going to be in your hostage."

Mayank "today is Friday, share market is on leave due some reasons. Saturday and Sunday no share market. So on Monday I can execute my plan. Till then you are my hostage"

Nupur tries to argue "but my family what will you tell them. If they came to know that I am kidnapped they wonot leave you" she tries to threaten him.

Mayank gives her a very relaxed look "I bought you cell, till now no one called. If they called you it is your headache to tell them whatever you want. I am least bothered because they cannot do anything for 3 days and more over if they give complaint against me it is your lose not mine"

Nupur "how?"

Mayank "simple, your's and you boyfriends jobs are at stack. Moreover I will reveal how you came to my farm house and theft my important documents. "

Nupur "this is blackmailing."

Mayank "I don't care. My business is important for me. And more over everything is your fault not mine. Who asked you to come to my farm and stole my CD. "

Nupur keeps an angry and helpless baby face "I did not steal, it is by mistake fallen in my bag and by the way who told you that I read your CD I told you that it is password protected then-"

Mayank "you only, Miss. Intelligent said about the document CD contains."

Nupur makes a 'O' with her mouth.
Mayank continues "otherwise I would have believed you and left with CD but when you admitted that you have seen the document in the CD. I cannot risk my 6 months plan. You left me no choice then to kidnap you."

Nupur making a sad baby face "so I have no choice but to stay hostage in Nainital with you"
Mayank nods his head as yes.
Nupur "my dresses. What will I wear."

Mayank points to the back seat where there is a bag. Nupur takes her bag and opens it to find her dress but what caught her eyes is her pink inners makes her blush with embarrassment even to think Mayank has packed her personal things. Mayank who caught her expression dropped his eyes to see what Nupur is looking at and turns to other side to hide his smile clearly knows what is going on in Nupur's mind. Immediately Nupur zips her bag and throws it back and glares at Mayank as if she is ordering him to stop his smile which he is trying his best to hide from her. Mayank "ok so here we are in my farm house."

Nupur turns to otherside with same angry but takes a deep breath to see the farm house. It is simply beautiful. The greenery around the farm house, the pleasant atmosphere of Nainital and mainly the farm house. It is looking like a palace to Nupur. Nupur tried to open the door but it is locked, she turns towards Mayank to open the door which Mayank does with his remote control. Nupur goes out of the car and runs towards the garden. It is a huge garden with different types of trees and plants. There is a pool which is connected throw garden and the farm house. After pool and garden there is a valley whose view is breathtaking. Nupur never know that hostage has these advantages. She slowly goes to the edge of garden and looks down into the valley. "If you have checked it out can we go in?"

She almost lost her balance when suddenly hearing Mayank's voice so near. Mayank catches her with her waist and pulls her towards him. Nupur can see clear panic expression on Mayank. He really panicked when Nupur almost lost her balance as she is standing at the very edge of the valley from the garden, though there is a fence but it is damaged due rain, If Nupur slips also she won't fall in valley but Mayank donot know why he suddenly panicked to see Nupur losing her balance.
Seeing his fearful expression Nupur "main teek hu Mayank, nothing to worry" as if she is smoothing his fear. Mayank donot know why he panicked and Nupur donot know why she wants to take away Mayank's fear. Both are still unaware what they are feeling for each other.
Nupur continues keeping a funny face "so what if I fall, your secret of the CD will go with me-" before Nupur can complete her sentence Mayank puts his fingers on her lips to stop her talking further. Nupur felt a shiver under down her spine, she donot know if the shiver is due to Mayank fingers on her lips or due to cool breeze from trees. Even Mayank experienced a current passing his body due to the touch of Nupur's cool and soft lips on his fingers. Controlling each other's heart beat and praying that the other person donot see how much they are affected by each other, slowly Mayank removes his fingers "oo, let's go in-inside it is very chilled outside."

Nupur nods her head and flows Mayank who is leading her way towards the farm house entrance.

Mayank shows Nupur her room at the corner which is next to his room. Nupur goes to her room and sees that her bag is already placed in her room. Thanking Mayank for being a good host, she thinks what to do next. If she tells her family that she is kidnapped then they will panic and god knows what they will do. So it is better she takes the initiative and tells them some story before they find her missing. Nupur gets an idea takes her cell and calls Samrat. The phone rings but Samrat is busy in his work to notice the cell.

Nupur "by god Samrat, pick up the phone''" to Nupur's luck Samrat lifts the call at the last ring.

Samrat "hey Nupur how are you, how is your health."

Nupur "I am fine Samrat and by the way where are you?"
Samrat "I told naa I am going to science exhibition so I am here."

Nupur "Samrat, will you do one help without asking any questions."
Samrat "ofcourse Nupur tell me"

Nupur "Samrat if anyone of my family calls you, tell them I am with you."
Samrat panics "why?" slowly raises his voice "oh my god Nupur are you in some trouble, tell me I will come there. Where are you, at home?"

Nupur closes her eyes and opens it taking a deep breath "relax Samrat, I am absolutely fine. Nothing to worry just go ahead with you exhibition. I will explain you everything once I return on Monday. Trust me I am perfectly fine. Just that I cannot tell you where I am."

Nupur donot want anyone know about where she is, she donot want anyone to think bad about Mayank, she feels to protect him thought what he did is not right in one way but still feels protective for him.

Samrat still panics "oh Nupur please tell me where are you. I am so worried please." Nupur closes her eyes and in frustration says "by god, apna boyfriend ka saat bagka honeymoon pa ayehu'"

Nupur stands still when she hears a voice from her back saying "oh really!!!"
Edited by preethimadhavg - 13 years ago
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lovely 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
just awesome...super lyk...👏👏
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lovely updt
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lovelyyy
eagerly waiting to read further
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part...Just excellent...
Loved mayur moments...
Cont soon..
Thnx fr the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
The best line...
of the whole ff...


by god, apna boyfriend ka saat bagka honeymoon pa ayehu'"


lovely lovely.. update..
though mayank had kidnapped her..
still she felt protected towrards him...



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Lovely update n ajibo garib kidnapping wid mixed mayur feelings
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