MG-MY LONG FORGETTEN LOVE(Updating)

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angelwords

@angelwords

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Chapter -14

wat i killed her... No no this cant happen...he is telling lies... No no... I cant kill her... If i loved her that how can i kill her... They all are telling lies... Geet geet please tell me Ki haven't done something like this... I was blank.. I felt like something pricked my heart... It felt so lonely... Like something very close to me left me... I started him..waiting him to say that he was lying,.. But nothing that sort happened... He dragged me out of the house near a tree and started laughing... I was very scared of his laugh...

he said" you remember this place... " i was confused.. Why he is showing me this... I started him..." you don't remember this place... This was the place where you with your own hand buried geet body" ... Whole land slipped,.. I was shocked... No no this cant happen... My geet cant leave me... She said she is with me... No no...tear came out of my eyes... I cant kill my geet...i bent down on my feet... And begged him" please say its false"... He laughed.." you drama will never finish na... U khuarana.." he went away...

tears were coming out of my eye... I screamed"geet you cant leave me" ... I started removing the sand from land... To take my geet out... Adi held my hand.." sir please come" ..i said" adi please bring my geet"...

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wat it the end?? Will maan leave?? Or something still left??

hope you like it

do comments

and hit like button..

waiting for replies ...

want big big comments or no updates...

Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Me first
Nice update dear
Continue soon

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Smily

@angel_smily

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

nice but short part

thanks for the pm

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

very shocking ..what have actually happen...this cant be true..oh god.pls cont soon.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

very short and shocking update...

what Maan killed Geet...

and he buried her also...

why that man is saying like this...

waiting for some mystery to open up...

thanx for pm...

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

oh its was shocking.. is Geet is really dead?

waiting for next part.. thanx for pm😊

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mandeep

@mandy15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

superb dear:)

but it was too short...:(

loved it:)

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

it was short yet quite engrossing and shocking!

waiting for a long part now
continue soon

Edited by doublecross - 12 years ago

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maaniqra

@maaniqra

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Nice update dear
Continue soon

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Wow its so gud to see you back.

Missed U buddy.

And the update,hmmm chhotu hai but too emotional.

Maan's condition is really sympathetic.

Waiting for d truth to be revealed

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