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Posted: 12 years ago
what the hell?
maan killled geet ?
plz try to give little long update abgar ye posible nahi he to atleast jaldi jaldi de do is dtory ko complete karna ...
updates r very short ...
plz reveal all the truth soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing dear
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 14
nice part...
what?
thats shocking...
cont soon dear...

PS - plz edit ur title...else less comments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc updates!
just give long updates na!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter -15
Long update for you all.. Enjoy and give long long comments... Thanks for lovely comment...and likes,... Still hoping for better response...

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"book two ticket from HP to Delhi." said adi.. I heard again" ya in name of maan singh khuuuraana"..
I was like a lifeless soul... Longing for my geet...why this all happened to me... I kept hand on my heart hoping geet will come to me and it can't feel her... But how will i face her... I feel i have lost everything i had,..tears were rolling out of my eyes... My heart and brain were playing different games... I don't know wat should i feel,... I cant bear this pain more... I will face geet.. I closed my eyes and called her but no one came.., she promised me... That each time i will call her she will come to me... She broke my promise... Please Geet come back to me.. Hear me... Understand me... Geeettt... I screamed aloud "mishhhtyyy"..
I had sudden in my head... I held my head tight to reduce this pain... I closed my eyes as i wasn't able to bear such pain... I heard some faint voice and there were also some unclear picture.. I saw a boy hugging a girl from back.., girl was fighting for something.., boy refused for it... She was having cute pout.. I heard " ap bahut dhusstt.. Haan dhust danav ho... Maan please na Babu"... It was me and geet...we looked like a perfect couple... I replied " i love you mishty"... I screamed this name... It belongs to my Geet... I gave her this name.. Where are you Geet?? My,heart cried. .. I still wasn't able to see her face,... I heard " maan ap mujhse pyaar nahi karte ho,...i knw.. Chadho i am going"... She was going to leave... She started walking away... I was going to catch her when... Adi bring me out of my memory,.. "sir, we are ready to make our move... Hope you are fine sir" he said out of concern for me... I nodded...
We reached bus station...adi was loading our luggage.. And here my soul was crying... I am feeling miserable... Why me?? .. How can someone murder his own life..??... Yes Geet is my life... In 2-3 day she made me hers... I felt strong connection with her.. Wats happening ??.. Suddenly i felt pain in my head... I heard some strange voices again.. "maan finally its getting better between us" i gave her drink and i saw her leaving.. I saw some tablet in my hand... Its sleeping tablets... Have i mixed it in her drink?? But why?? ... Wat is happening...
I was brought back when Adi called my name... We went inside the bus.. I was looking outside the window with no hope.. I want to end my life.. Its useless without Geet... I heard the bus conductor shouting "bus will move in some minutes.. All the passenger make it fast"... My life is totally messed up... Today i feel so alone ... A tear escaped from my eyes... My heart was crying loudly geeettt... Please come back... You kill me,punish me but just come back... I hate this lonelyness... Plz come back mishty...
There was a jerk.. and i came to know that the bus started moving.. When some strange sound captured my attention... I heard some payal song.. I looked towards source... I saw a strange figure... A small whisper came out of my mouth "Geet".. I stood up and started following that figure.. I quickly jumped out of the bus.. And started running after the figure.. I heard Adi shouting but i ignored... All i want was Geet... I started running after her... She was dressed like an angel..
She started running inside the village.. And i kept following her.. Calling her aloud... "Geet plz stop".. But she ignored and kept on running...i was madly following her... This time i won't allow her to leave... She stopped... She did not turned back.. Her back was facing me.. I slowly moved close to her... When she disappeared...
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Next- truth revealed !!
is Geet alive??

Next part will hopefully be 2nd last part,.. Hope you enjoyed this journey...leave big comments ... Thank you all the reader for liking my story...
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Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update please update jtkh also



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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago



what is happening...

if Geet is alive then how can Maan see her as spirit...

who was that man so angry with him...

Maan started having visions of his past...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
love the update. it was a nice part.

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