AFTERMATH - RTMC SS - Part VI pg 15 *Completed* - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good update... Aww poor Veer... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww AWESOME update:-) :-)... I loved it.. Cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ud plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part..

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok...

so i m back wid ma useful rubbish...
ud ws sooperbo, i loved it.

kamaal ka h...

veer ne sahi kaha,- opposite attracts...
tum veer tum n anu , veer anu ho...
so kuch tho diff. hoga hi na?


d way u presented dat scene.sir k iche eyes wala, ws too good...
amzing jii

bichara veer, itna accha romance karta h.but phirr bhi anu vaps safai pr aa jti h...

acche bache i tarah saara kaam kr diya veer...wow...

ananya touch...ohhh hooo...

cool ud, enjoyed it.

ud soon
lov u
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Very nice update loved it
Veer n Anu's cutcute fight are fab
Poor Veer got one new work
Anu sometimes u rude on Veer , sweetie
but loved thir Nokzok
Update soon
waiting
lov u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys!

Thanks to all those who pressed the like button and/or commented!

@samantha1987200 & geetap -Thanks for commenting for the first time. Really appreciate it!

Well, I really don't know why I suddenly slip into Hindi whenever my story nears its end. So this part has a little bit of Hindi. If anyone has any troubles I'll be happy to help

Happy reading! 😃

PART V
After an hour or so, she finished cooking dinner and called out, "Veer, dinner's ready. Lay the table." Veer did not reply, so she again called out, "Veer!" When no one responded, she went to the living room and saw that Veer was sleeping on the couch with a file in hand. She smiled and kneeled on the carpet, near his head and softly called, "Veer, wake up. Dinner's ready!" He did not budge. He seemed tired and sleep-deprived. 'Must be due to workload and today's chores' she thought. 'He's looking so exhausted and I moronically burdened him with more work' she scolded herself. She looked at her husband sleeping innocently and gently stroked his hair. He smiled a little at her soothing touch and slept comfortably. Anu called him again, but he did not wake up. 'I know the perfect way to wake him up' she thought and was lowering her mouth towards his, when a sudden tone startled her. She quickly got up to pick Veer's cell phone before it got cut.

Veer slowly opened an eye to see Anu going towards the bedroom to pick up his cell phone. He silently cursed the caller. He could bet that Anu was just going to kiss him to wake him up when that stupid caller had rung. Actually, he had woken up when Anu started stroking his hair but decided to play along and he was just about to be rewarded when...'He sighed with disappointment and again drifted back to sleep.

Anu picked up Veer's phone and went to their bedroom to not disturb Veer's nap while she was at the call. She pressed the answer button without looking at the caller. Before she could even say Hello, a male voice boomed from the other side. "Veer! How much time do you take to pick up a call? Ok, forget all that and listen...'"

Even after 10 minutes, she was still on the phone. And Veer's stomach was growling with hunger, he couldn't even sleep anymore. So he woke up and washed his face and hands and then set the table until she returned.

Ananya came back in the living room and smiled seeing him awake. "Achha hua tum uth gaye...'main tumhe khane ke liye kab se bula rahi thi."

"Haan...'who thodi aankh lag gayi thi...'chalo khate hain...'mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai."

They sat on the table and she served them.

"Arre wah'...fried rice aur chilli paneer...'kitne dinon se ghar ka khana nahi khaya."

Anu smiled looking at his happy face.

"Veer...'"

"Hmmm.?"

"Woh...'I'm sorry...'tum itne thake hue the fir bhi maine tumhe itna kaam de dia...'sorry" She said apologetically

Veer smiled and said "koi baat nahi...'waise bhi maine ghar ko zoo banaya that toh thik bhi toh mujhe hi karna chahiye na?" To this Anu gave him a mysterious smile but didn't say anything, so he continued, "Haan..'par next time...'dhamki mat dena...'mujhe bohot darr lagta hai." Both laughed and Anu kissed him on his cheek.

They were enjoying their dinner when something caught Veer's attention. "Anu, who tumhare muh pe thodi gravy lagi hui hai."

"Achha? Kahan?" She asked placing her hand on her face trying to remove the mark.

"Woh left pe"

"Yahan?" Touching her left cheek

"Haan..'thoda niche'...nahin nahin thoda aur left pe...arre wahan nahin thoda right pe."

"Uff Veer...'tum mujhe confuse kar rahe ho." She huffed

"Achha ruko...'main saaf kardeta hoon." Hiding a smile, he touched the left side of her lower lip with the pad of his thumb and slowly swiped the gravy off her face.

Anu shivered as she felt him caressing her lower lip gently with his finger. After cleaning her face, he took back his thumb and sucked it, tasting the gravy. Anu watched wide-eyed as she realized his deliberate provocation.

"What? I don't believe in wasting food." Veer grinned in response seeing his wife blush a deep red.

For the next few minutes she didn't look up from her plate while Veer steadily gazed at her knowing it was bothering her. Her scarlet face clearly told him that.

Finally not being able to tolerate anymore she looked up and spoke, "Veer! Stop it!"

"What did I do?" He gave her an innocent look.

"You very well know what you did and what you are doing."

"Nahi toh..'I'm simply eating."

"Veer! I'm telling you stop it..'nahi toh...'" Veer raised his eyebrows.

Now provoked beyond measure, she kept her spoon and started hitting him.

Veer grinned and easily held her flailing hands and pulled her onto his lap. Before she could say anything he kissed her. He slid his tongue inside her mouth that had opened in protest and kissed her deeply, fully tasting her. When she finally caught on and felt her wrists free of his grasp she pulled him closer, her hands in his hair.

When they finally broke apart, both were heaving and their faces were flushed.

"You know..'" Veer said first.

Anu raised her brows in response.

"You taste like chilli paneer and fried rice."

She rolled her eyes and said, "You too."

He grinned, "I know" And pecked her lips.

When she was about to get up from his lap, he tightened his arms around her, "Stay...'please?"

"Then how will we eat?" She quirked her brow.

"I'll feed you...'especially after seeing how clumsy an eater you are; I think it is better this way." She slapped his arm but then settled in his lap.

"My clumsiness turns out to be a good thing for you, doesn't it?"

"A very good thing, sweetheart, A very good thing" He smirked.

They fed each other enjoying the company after a long separation.

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Next part will be the last one
Comments welcome!
Thanks for reading!
Edited by glossyglassy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update as always n romantic tooo😳😳😳

loved it thoroughly

Veer was sleeping on the couch with a file in hand. She smiled and kneeled on the carpet, near his head and softly called, "Veer, wake up. Dinner's ready!" He did not budge. He seemed tired and sleep-deprived. 'Must be due to workload and today's chores' she thought. 'He's looking so exhausted and I moronically burdened him with more work' she scolded herself. She looked at her husband sleeping innocently and gently stroked his hair. He smiled a little at her soothing touch and slept comfortably(veer sote hue kinnna accha lagta h i imagine rajat here...or mujhe yeh scene bhot accha laga😃...bechare ne kinna sara kaam kiya bechara veer)

Anu called him again, but he did not wake up. 'I know the perfect way to wake him up' she thought and was lowering her mouth towards his, when a sudden tone startled her. She quickly got up to pick Veer's cell phone before it got cut.(oho...that stupid phone😡 n idiot caller isi time par call karna tha...let her kiss her husband yr😉...koi inko romance bhi nhi karne deta)

Veer slowly opened an eye to see Anu going towards the bedroom to pick up his cell phone. He silently cursed the caller. He could bet that Anu was just going to kiss him to wake him up when that stupid caller had rung. Actually, he had woken up when Anu started stroking his hair but decided to play along and he was just about to be rewarded when...'He sighed with disappointment and again drifted back to sleep. (haye😲...yeh veer kitna bada drame baaz h ...😃 aise karte h kya apni wife ke sath😕 or he enjoyed...waise mujhe bhi bhot maza aa rha tha🤣)

"Achha ruko...'main saaf kardeta hoon." Hiding a smile, he touched the left side of her lower lip with the pad of his thumb and slowly swiped the gravy off her face.

Anu shivered as she felt him caressing her lower lip gently with his finger. After cleaning her face, he took back his thumb and sucked it, tasting the gravy. Anu watched wide-eyed as she realized his deliberate provocation.

"What? I don't believe in wasting food." Veer grinned in response seeing his wife blush a deep (lovely scene...😳 anu blushed its too lovely☺️...khaba waste nhi karna chahiye this is the moral of this scene🤣)


and last part is awesome...n romantic...but its too short yr


long one milega kya😃next time


update soon

thanks for pm

luv u

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tejjo

awesome update as always n romantic tooo😳😳😳


loved it thoroughly thank u sooo much

Veer was sleeping on the couch with a file in hand. She smiled and kneeled on the carpet, near his head and softly called, "Veer, wake up. Dinner's ready!" He did not budge. He seemed tired and sleep-deprived. 'Must be due to workload and today's chores' she thought. 'He's looking so exhausted and I moronically burdened him with more work' she scolded herself. She looked at her husband sleeping innocently and gently stroked his hair. He smiled a little at her soothing touch and slept comfortably(veer sote hue kinnna accha lagta h i imagine rajat here...or mujhe yeh scene bhot accha laga😃...bechare ne kinna sara kaam kiya bechara veer)

Anu called him again, but he did not wake up. 'I know the perfect way to wake him up' she thought and was lowering her mouth towards his, when a sudden tone startled her. She quickly got up to pick Veer's cell phone before it got cut.(oho...that stupid phone😡 n idiot caller isi time par call karna tha...let her kiss her husband yr😉...koi inko romance bhi nhi karne deta) woh phone call important tha...next part mein pata chalega..

Veer slowly opened an eye to see Anu going towards the bedroom to pick up his cell phone. He silently cursed the caller. He could bet that Anu was just going to kiss him to wake him up when that stupid caller had rung. Actually, he had woken up when Anu started stroking his hair but decided to play along and he was just about to be rewarded when...'He sighed with disappointment and again drifted back to sleep. (haye😲...yeh veer kitna bada drame baaz h ...😃 aise karte h kya apni wife ke sath😕 or he enjoyed...waise mujhe bhi bhot maza aa rha tha🤣) abhi Anu usko itna tang karti hai...uska bhi farz banta hai ki woh bhi kuch kare...😆😉

"Achha ruko...'main saaf kardeta hoon." Hiding a smile, he touched the left side of her lower lip with the pad of his thumb and slowly swiped the gravy off her face.

Anu shivered as she felt him caressing her lower lip gently with his finger. After cleaning her face, he took back his thumb and sucked it, tasting the gravy. Anu watched wide-eyed as she realized his deliberate provocation.

"What? I don't believe in wasting food." Veer grinned in response seeing his wife blush a deep (lovely scene...😳 anu blushed its too lovely☺️...khaba waste nhi karna chahiye this is the moral of this scene🤣)

haha...lovly moral...bilkul sahi seekh li hai is instance se...😆

and last part is awesome...n romantic...but its too short yr


long one milega kya😃next time

Waise toh part V was longer than part IV...yaa next part will be longer...but it will also be the last one
Hope u'll like it also

update soon

thanks for pm

luv u

Thanks for ur lovly comment
Luv u...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww dear:-):-) AMAZING update:-) Awww Veer is so Cute:-) loved it:-)

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