AFTERMATH - RTMC SS - Part VI pg 15 *Completed* - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
it ws just AWESUM!!! 😃

had a gr8 tym readng it...
i cud actually imagine evrythn...😍 n trust me.. IT WAS SO NOT CLUMSY!😉
I jst luvd it👏 n hope it gets evn bettr..😉

dis is 4 u 4 dedicatng it 2 me...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
heyy loved it i cant wait for the next part your doing an amazing job :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
lovely part...

loved the options veer was thinking...😆

waiting to know what does veer has to pay with...😉

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
res

may b dis time THE LATEST!''
chalo, kahin se tho superlative hoon!...
first nhi , last hi sahi!

so, just for dis ud of urs...
''jab jago tab savera,
jab na jago, tab andhera...''

lets start wid ud,,,...
it ws really awesome as usual..
really loved it.
veer, ne raat ko party ki thi!, any ko bina bataye!!.
jiss dinn galti se pata chal gya uss, dinn bhot dantt padegi boss!

voh jo usne, aapne consequences ke options soche the na usne , voh bade ache soche...
kya variety thi by god!.
bhot dimaag lagaya h tumne vahan , dikhta h...

anu is more favorite thn veer in her in-laws.
ab voh tho ho gi hi na!,
mc rt se jyada cute jo dikhti h!

sahi main, made for each other lagte h yeh log...
bas ab yeh cgm main aayein yah kahin aur, ek saath aayein...

oye hoye!!...
mc in bath robe!!...of course damn irresistible...
arrey dont wry, tum full throtle romance de sakti ho...
hum rtmc, sab k sab bade naughty ho chuke h!
don't wry...pata nhi kyun, aaj kl rtmc bold hi acche kagne lage h humme!!

veer, ne anu ka mazak udaya...yeh lo, anu ne bhi udaya!...
chodti thode na anu yeh mauka!..tit for tat.
very cute dey r ,
loved them
chalo veer ko sab kuch chalega except her silence...
how, romantic.!!!

do write soon,
lovd ur writing here too!
waiting for next

lov u!
love murat

pata nhi, kab aayenge, yeh bhi nhi pata, kya ek saath ayenge!!
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
awesome start n part 1,2, 3 are also gud
sorry for being late

send me pm on next upd :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
story.. was sweet cute and funny😊
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
hey Ritu...

Beautiful update... Ye Veer kabhi sudhrega bhi... sahi kehti hai ANu... kabhi nahi sudhrega ye ladka...

Serves him right for spoiling the house in just one week... ANu bhi na... bathrobe me hi kaam karna shuru kar diya...

Nothing efffects Veer so much like his beautiful wife...

Update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Hi guys!

Thanks to all those who pressed the like button and/or commented

I'm a li'l pressed for time'...have some important exams coming up...so I won't be able to reply personally

I'm happy that few people especially mentioned liking Veer's 'bear the brunt' list...it's actually my favourite part of the story

I'm glad you liked the romance and didn't find it clumsy...boosts my confidence😃

@rashmi-I think only u noticed that Veer had a party the day before...well what happens when Anu comes to know is for you to read and know😉

@princesspriyart-(What's ur name dear?) well this story has only humans...no rats 😆

And I wouldn't dare kill Mickey and Jerry again...I got a lot of 'angry' and 'cry' smileys last time

@mayuri-Good to see u back again! Keep reading and commenting

@aroojm- Hey! New reader! Thanks for ur comment! Keep reading and commenting

Well I think the next part's a bit sappy...but I'll let you decide

Happy reading!

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PART IV

"Anu" Veer said pulling her closer by her waist.

"Hmm?" she responded.

"I really don't understand how we're together." He said.

Anu looked up at him questioningly, "Matlab?"

Veer explained, "I mean they say opposites attract but we are so similar,"

"Except the cleanliness dept." Anu intervened.

"Yeah that," Veer rolled his eyes while Anu sniggered "but both of us are mischievous, believe in payback, passionate about our work, share our interests and much more. So'how?" Veer stated his thoughts.

Anu wound her arms around Veer's neck and said, "You're right but you forgot our most important commonality."

"What?" he asked quizzically.

"That we love each other and our love is beyond any theory." She said smiling while Veer stared at her lovingly.

"You know what?" Anu's voice broke his trance.

"Now what?" he inquired.

"I love you" Anu said, a bright smile lighting up her face.

Veer was surprised at her sudden confession but replied, "I love you too" and placed a gentle kiss on her cheek.

They stared at each other drowning in the ocean of love their eyes reflected.

After some time Anu whispered, "I think you shoul...'"

"I should..." Veer repeated placing his forehead against hers.

"Finish..." she continued.

"Finish what?" Veer asked. He anticipated she would say 'kissing' and brought his face closer. "Finish what Anu?" He asked again.

She smiled coquettishly and looked up at Veer's expectant face and said, "I think you should finish...cleaning." She ended laughingly and pushed him back.

Veer looked at her bewildered by her words and spluttered, "What!" He shook his head in annoyance. "You're hopeless, Anu"

"Why, thank you, Veer." She said grinning and continued, "But I meant it. You have to finish tidying up."

Veer made a forlorn face and stood leaning on the wall and watched Anu walking towards the table, where his pile of files lay.

"Now, I don't want to see any of your files in this room. Keep them in the study. Please take along your laptop too. After all this, take a bath." she instructed him with her back towards him.

Here, Veer mimicked her mutely.

"And" she continued.

Veer rolled his eyes and muttered under his breath, "Here comes another list."

"Veer, stop mimicking me."

His head shot up, 'but she hadn't even turned towards him. Did she have eyes behind her head or something?' he wondered.

"No dear, it's just the mirror." She pointed towards the mirror of the dressing table.

'Oh yeah! Of course! The mirror. Why hadn't he thought of that? But wait how had she known what he was thinking?' he thought.

"Veer," her voice again broke his chain of thoughts. "Sweetie, if you didn't know, I know you better than yourself and of course I'm too smart for you."

Veer mentally agreed to the first part but second part, of course not and mumbled, "Ya ya sure" and rolled his eyes.

Anu grinned at his reaction. She picked up all his files and went up to him, "There you go." She also gave him the laptop. She raised herself on her toes and kissed the tip of his nose and said, "Get to work and don't forget to take a bath."

"Sure" he replied. He turned towards the door and mumbled to himself, "Oh god! What times have come? God-like husbands are being treated like slaves." He dramatically shook his head showing his utmost disappointment and carried away the bunch of files leaving Anu smiling at his antics.

She changed from her robe to cotton capris and a cute pink t-shirt. Anu unpacked her bags and decided to do some more cleaning while Veer was doing his work. She entered the living room and saw that Veer had actually put in efforts. He had done what you could call 'primary cleaning' but after her touch the house was back to perfection.

Next she went to her kitchen. It was exactly how she had left it. 'Ah kitchen sweet kitchen!' She sighed. This was the only place which she totally owned. She thought of making dinner as she knew that Veer was longing for home food, and so was she. She set to work to prepare a special meal and in between peeped outside to see that Veer had freshened up and was sitting at the coffee table, working on his laptop. She smiled and got back to cooking.

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So that was the 4th part

I know Anu teasing Veer part might sound repeated but it's too much fun with them...hope you didn't get bored

Sorry for any mistakes...don't have much time to edit
Comments welcome!

Thanks for reading!

Edited by glossyglassy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
very nice update dear

loved it thoroughly

teasing part is always maa fav ...n it was fab dear i just loved it

😆 wow veer kitna romantic h...

or anu kitni naughty h😉

pehle romance phir kaam bhi kara liya veer se so lovely


cute couple😳

loved it

update soon...but long one😕

thanks for pm😃

luv u


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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

oh that was gr8………..👏

opposite attracts……..that's true veer but when two people are in love than nothing matters………whether they are opposites or they are similar……….

liked anu's way of teasing veer……….poor veer anu har baar veer k irado pe pani pher deti hai………😆

n veer is thinking how come she knew what he was thinking……….but veer anu said it right that she know you more than you……….n yes you agree or not but she is smarter than you………😉

n veer-no husbands are not treated like slaves until husbands himself make their wife to make them slaves………n yes u r not her slave……….she loves you…….n you too…….😳

Continue soon……..

Luv u………😊

Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago

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