WW About Last Night (Apr30-May08 2012))

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1021

woww tht was hottt to the extreme...luv it...:)

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1022

Maya...you are n amazing writer...there is a freshness in every update that seems to new and independent in its own context. As your reader, I am never bored, or not attentive, for you capture my total attention and int he last update, my breath as well!! TREMENDOUS!!!!👏 No matter how risque your scene is, there is always class and refinement about it...it never comes of Raunchy!! 😃

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queenie11

@queenie11

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#1023

My goodness...this chapter couldn't possibly get hotter - your description of the scenes were breathtaking - it read like a screenplay

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Nikita

@nikita_88

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#1024

Awesome update!

This line was amazing: inescapable clause in the contract of his life 😆 No better way to explain Arnav's thinking!

Khushi - Truly has a innate way of seducing Arnav!

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1025

Phew that was hawt...Khushi is a seductress😉

Did Arnav have something to do with Angelica??(is that her name??)

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1026

That was hawt!!!!!!!! Continue soon 😉

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nims6

@nims6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1027

So necessary was she to Arnav, that he had absorbed her into himself and that made him often careless about understanding her. After all, was it necessary to ask one's own heart what it needed to beat today? ahh...i loved these lines...actually i loved all bt these lines were amazing...this update was soo sensual...khushi never fail to impress her husband...amazing.. bt...tbt my heart sank at the name of angelica...

He thought about Angelica and her bold overture last night

what does it mean...pls say that nothing happened last night...

reading through your update i feel like im the characters ...and nw im khushi..andi cant think anything bad about anyy of them...pls clear my mind...so i can clear my head...

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1028

that was sensuous... I don't know how you come up with such awesome ideas every days... seriously can't wait for the next update...

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1029

I loved it. I love how Khushi is daring and shy at the same time. I loved the dialogues. I hope he tells her about Angelica's bold overture... Amazing update.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1030

why was he thinking of angelica when he had his wife in front of him seducing him... hmm interesting turn of events.. it so true that arnav is so hard to understand...