WW About Last Night (Apr30-May08 2012)) - Page 105

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was hot sexY seDuctive and i am craving for more !!

"To use the language of poets,
he ardently loved her. To use his
language, she was the inescapable clause in the contract of his life." it was amazing! perfectly written!
how do u do it maya, after every chapter, i crave for more and more and esP after such a chapter! hats off to u maya for such amazing work :D
and moving bk to khusi she is the goddness of seduction! i could totalY imagIne the whole scene in my guTterlicious head!
and angelica, me not likes her! and dont tell me he *ahem * did it with her *fingers crossd *
Amazing maya... i LOVEEED it <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was hot! Loved it! Amazing as always!
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Posted: 13 years ago
There's fire all around - be it Yash-Anjali or Arnav-Khushi. Totally loving the chemistry they share. And your words...LORD!

Mesmerising...what else can i say..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

~Reserved~

P.S. Edited my comment on pg 127.

~Edited~
May 5 part 1
It has been said that those who are waiting are bad judges of time. A minute seems like five. An hour, an age.- so true! What a wonderful line to start a wonderful chapter!
She had dared not ask Anjali at dinner whether she had heard from her brother; it was unnecessary. She knew he would have called Anjali, confirmed their arrival, enquired as to their comfort, and asked about his wife and his wife's fat thumb.- how well she knows her husband!
His reply came instantly as though he too was seated cross-legged on their bed with brushed teeth, washed face and braided hair: 😉

I was keen.

--So what was the problem?

I am always keen.

--I repeat. I don't see the problem.

Shouldn't I be less keen?- so glad she came out with what exactly bothered her last night!

--Is that a serious question?- totally expected Arnav to reply like the way he did!

Let me call you.

Don't. I can't speak about this.- Shows how uncomfortable Khushi is to talk about it. And m glad Arnav didnt persuade it.

--Answer is NO. Don't ever change. Remain keen. - What a nice,short n precise reply!

It doesn't put men off?

--What men?!- LOL! Arnav's response😆

You. You are not put off?

--The opposite.- No he's turned on!😉

Promise 1 thing.

--Only 1?

Work on your airport goodbye.- awww! She expected n certainly deserved a better farewell than just a "go!"

Promise 2 things.

Only 2?😛

--Don't doubt what's good between us.

Agreed.😊

Don't do anything to make me doubt you.

That's impossible!

--I'm ASR. I ask for the impossible.- so true!And he accepted that he did doubt her.👏

F**k Off.

--You like that word. Admit it.(I can totally imagine Arnav smirking while typing this msg)

Teach me more bad words.(Like I've said earlier,the bold Khushi never fails to amaze me!)

--I will.😛

G'night Uncleji.- Khushi will be Khushi,always! Period.

Edited by Smita.M - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT! i couldn't fall asleep becaus ei felt like something is missing so here i am awake at 11:30 PM to read ur update! and yaar every second waiting was worth it! fantastic update, i loved the fact that their spark is always there! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Phew!! *fans self*
I am like slowly overheating here! Hahahahha great update as usual Maya!

Oh man! You are slowly killing me here! Teasing us all with these short, fabulous updates!! Do update soon! I can't wait to read what happens in the story! :D :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏U know I got up at 530 in the morn and the first thought was read ur update...it's very very addictive.. Kudos👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is true mating of two equals. I love how you equate what a poet would say versus what ASR would say. Perfectly in character.

Loved Khushi's outfit and the inspiration pictures.

Waiting for more...we are so spoilt with two updates of this a day!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Caught up with the last few updates together so had lots to read :-))

Yash sounds suspiciously like Arnav! Hmm no wonder Anjali is attracted to him! We tend to gravitate towards what is familiar. And I guess after the betrayal at the hands of a sickly sweet Shyam, a man with her brother's brusqueness but commitment to Khushi, would be infinitely more welcome! Not to mention the desire to be found desirable!

I am a firm believer of sex being a very important part of your married life but do these two do anything else? Lol! Though I love the fact that your Khushi is not scared of exploring and experimenting with her sexuality!



However must compliment you on the way you write! I get frazzled, a tad irritated with Arnav because passion and no amount of love can be a substitute for respect, understanding, equality in a relationship. It just is not sustainable without resentment setting in at some point. But your writing is so compelling that I wait to read, curse Arnav, want to whack Khushi for giving in & then wait for the next update, lol!

Great concept - the whim-shams- and kudos to you for having the creativity to keep coming up with updates!
Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was seduction at its best!

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