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Posted: 13 years ago

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I was stalking, I will be back to comment after reading😆

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My heart was beating fast from start to finish😆 and as my mind literally dipped into the gutter the update came to an end☺️ 😳 😔. Khushi the seductress and Arnav the ever willing hunter of his prey. So Anjelica did try to make a pass at ASR? Women eh, they just can't stand to see a hot looking man. Loved the update very much😃. The deflowering of the mirrored room that never interested Arnav before today😆.

Edited by april2003 - 13 years ago

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nancy_ipkknd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1002

He was not yet here but she was already ready to receive him... Wow!! I read it a few times to make sure I am reading what I am reading...As usual you write beautifully with so many fine nuances...Infact I re-read the last 5-6 updates to make sure I am not missing anything...😉

you are making me wish it was night here already so I could read your next update...

Ah...that comment was meant for your previous update..and I now see that you have posted another one (rubbing hands in glee). I will go to reading it 😃

*Edit for the current update*

Wow Maya what was that!! it was so utterly sensual!! I was and still am totally spell-bound. The way you have described Khushi's outfit, the devastating effect of her outfit on Arnav's senses...Wow!! just wow!! I hope the beast within Arnav growls in the next chapter and I hope Khushi silences him well and good...

Nancy

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Arathy-V

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Posted: 13 years ago

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it was worth the wait..!! use of words btween them are often quite less but very effective..this FF is gettin sooo gud tat EVEN I WANT TO MARRY...😆...wish i was couple of years older😉..hey bhagwan,giv me a husband lik Maya's Arnav...oh yes i heard u god..i knw one has 2 b a khushi 2 get an Arnav😉

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I am gaping like a gold fish.

That was hot, teasing, sexy, seductive and I want more of that! So you better continue from here after all WW is meant to be sexier and edge-ier! ;) :D

The first para was just brilliant! Amazing is the only word for it.

It started with your fun appraisal of Arnav..."To use the language of poets, he ardently loved her. To use his language, she was the inescapable clause in the contract of his life." and ended with this poetic thought - "After all, was it necessary to ask one's own heart what it needed to beat today?" Just amazing and completely perfect! <3

And Khushi...your description makes me think of that poster of Mahi Gill from that movie of hers Sahib Biwi aur Gangster...wow! Arnav sure has in her all the surprises in the world!

Brilliant job, Maya! :D

PS - I cant believe I forgot Angelica...I blame you. ;) :p

Anyway...why do I have a feeling that she making a pass at Arnav and Arnav not mentioning it to Khushi (I know he is otherwise occupied right now but not mentioning it over the phone call...hope he mentions after they...ahem) will create problems?

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago