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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: polly_03

khushi :

commenting on the 24th october update, hey bhagwaan yeh sab kya tha 😲?? i mean, teasing aur leg-pulling ki bhi koi hadd hoti hai, yeh dono kaha se kaha pahunch gaye 😲?? thank god jo Vikram na sab sambhal liya*shakes head at the entire drama* !! update soon.😊





thnx guyz😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Amor: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 6



Raghav n vikram bck to thr room, raghav was not talking to vikram.

V: Kya hua?

R: Tum bich me kyun aye.

Vikram need to be strict with raghav to handle his mischiefs.

V: Kunwar, aap ajmer k hone wale bhavi raja h, aapko iss tarah ka vyavhaar shobha nahi deta.

Raghav gave a strange luk to vikram n then burst into laughter.

V: kyu has rahe ho, humne koi vyang kiya kya?

R: Ye vyang hi to tha, jab tum ho to main maharaj (he again starts laughing).

Vikram smiles n says (seriously): Kisi bhi raja ka ye sapna hota h k uska putra hi raja bane.

Raghav luk at him n he can clearly see the pain of loosing his father at young age, he moves towards him, hold his shoulders n luk directly in his eyes.

V: Kya hua tumhe?

R: Aapne ye kaise soch liya ki ajmer k bade kunwar k hote huye chote kunwar rajgaddi par baithenge.

V: Humara vo matlab nahi tha raghav.

R: Vo jo bhi ho, aj se hum ajmer k bhavi maharaj ki agya manne ka prayas karenge.

Thy smile n hug each other tightly.

In Ajmer, jahnvi's father has arrived to meet someshwar, thy were sitting n talking abt jahnvi n raghav's marriage, it was a secret meeting only thr confidential ministers (one from each side).

S: Aap yahan aye hume bahut prassanta huyi.

Suryabhan: Hume to ana hi tha, humari jahnvi ke jeevan ka prashan h.

S: Aisa lagta h maharaj Koi samyasya apko vyathit kar rahi h.

Suryabhan: Haan, hume apne guptcharon se gyat hua k aap apne bade bhai k putra vikram ko ajmer ka yuvraj ghoshit karne wale h, agar aisa h to hume jahnvi aur raghav k sambandh par vichar karna hoga.

Someshwar takes a pause, think n says,

S(smiles): Are nahi maharaj, apko kisi ne galat suchna di, raja ka putra hi raja banta h, kunwar raghav hi ajmer k yuvraj h, vikram bhi humare putra jaisa h bas putra nahi hai.

Thy smiles n someshwar leaves the room.

On the way to his room, Suryabhan(siya's father) ask him as to why he said so about vikram when he luves him just like raghav, thr's no difference between them in the palace neither in the heart of ajmer n he himself want vikram to be the king.

S(smiles): Suryabhan ji, humara 1 nahi 2 putra hai, aur rahi baat rajya ki to maharaj ye baat bhul gye hain k vivah ke paschat kannauj bhi ajmer ka hoga aur humare dono putra raja banenge, rajneeti ki baaton ko samjhiye.

Thy smiles n leaves.

In gurukul, siya n jahnvi's room.

Siya was ashamed on her behaviour that she lied like that n more above she was angry on raghav's behaviour.

Jahnvi console her.

J: Tumhari koi galti nahi hai siya, ye sab vo rajkumar ka kasur hai.

S: Janti ho hum rajkumari nahi hai.

Jahnvi was shocked.

S: Humari rani maa chahti h ki humara vivah unke putra se ho, humare pitaji maharaj sa k mukhya mantri hai, humari maa hume janam dete hi hume chod k chali gyi, rani maa hume bahut pyaar karti hain, humare kunwarji shiksha k liye gurukul me hai.

J: Oh no kunwarji.

S (shy): Manjao siya.

J: Waise siya, kisne kaha tum rajkumari nahi ho, apne kunwarji k dil pe raj karogi to huyi na rajkumari.

S: dhatt.

Thy luk at each other n giggles.

J: Waise tumhare kunwarji kahan k rajkumar hai.

S: Ajmer ke.

J: Kya?

S: Kya hua tumhe.

J: Hume kuch nahi hua, ab tumhe hoga.

S: Matlab?

J: Matlab ye k ajmer ka vo rajkumar isi gurukul me hain.

Siya jump with excitement: kya? Par tumhe kaise pata?

J: Are tumhare ane se pehle, ajmer se doot aya tha apne rajkumar k liye sandesh leke.

S: Tum sach keh rahi ho, tumne dekha humare kunwarji ko.

J: Oye hoye bekarari to dekho, nahi humne nahi dkha par tumne to dekha hoga apne un ko.

S: Nahi.

J: Kya? Tumne nahi dkha, matlab tum nahi janti vo kaun hai.

Siya makes poor face.

J: koi baat nahi, humdono milkar tumhare kunwarji ko dhundh lenge.

Thy look at each other n hugs tightly.

Next Day Evening After classes...

Some boys get to know about wat hapen in yudh kala class where siya n raghav were alone, thy were spreading rumors...
Siya was passing from there n thy comment on her, she ignores at first but it continues for few minutes n that time she can't handle that...
Tears came in her eyes n she ran from thr, raghav saw her running with tearful eyes...

R: are kya hua (he tries to stop her but she dn't listen)

Raghav moves towards those boys...

One boy : ayegye rajkumar, aaj kal aapki bahut charcha hai gurukul me

R: Hum samjhe nahi

Another boy : are ab humse mat chupaiye, hume sab pata h ... vo yudh kala aur rajkumari... thy look at each other n laughs...

It makes raghav angry he stares them badly n thy stop laughing ...

R: Agli baar se bolne se pehle ye dekh lena ki tum kiske baare me baat kar rahe ho

He leaves in anger...

Came out of the hall n search for siya here n there (thy still dnt noe each other's name)

Siya was stitting under a tree in a corner, thr was dark, he reached thr n saw her sobbing...

He feels bad... n dnt know from where to start...



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R: vo...

Siya look at him, her eyes were filled with water...Raghav dnt noe y but it pains him a lot...

"Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale"


She was sobbing n looking at him continuosly, like asking him some unknown questions...

He sat by her side... look at her...

R: Aap roti huyi achi nahi lagti...

She look at him...

R: Vo humne kuch nahi bola kisi ko kuch bhi...

S: vo log bahut bure hain...

R: hmmm...par aap itna ro kyu rahi hai aapko to talwaar chalana bhi aata dikha deti unhe...

She smiles... n wipes her tears... her smile gave him sum relief...

"Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya

Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya
Bheed mein logo ki woh hain wahan
Aur pyaar ki mele mein akela Kitna hoon mein yahan"


S: Humara vivah nischit ho gya hai... agar ye sab humari rani maa or kunwarji ko pata chal gaya to kya hoga ?

she look at him for help...

R: (although he dnt like wat she said): Aap chinta mat kijiye, vo log kuch nhi bolenge ab.

She gave him sweet smile...

R: ab chale , kaafi andhera ho gya, aapke kunwarji ne dekh liya to humara kya hoga...

He teases her...

S: Nahi humare kunwarji bahut ache hain...

He stands n gave her hand ... she holds it ...He feels gud...a smile came on his face...

S: kya hua?

She stands n ask him y is he smiling...

R: kuch nahi chaliye...

"Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri ore chale"


On the way towards hall...

R: Aap kaunse rajya se aayi h

S: Ajmer

Raghav was surprised...

R: ajmer??

Siya just thought of asking him abt her kunwarji...

S: Aap jante hain ajmer k kunwarji kaun hai?

R: Kyu aap nahi janti

S: Nahi hum unse kabhi mile nahi, humari rani maa, ajmer ki maharani unke putra se hoga humara vivah...

R(to himself): vikram k saath ?

He was not liking it, but he dnt know the reason either...

S: Boliye na aap jante hain unhe ?

R: Nahi...

S: aap nahi jante (with sad face)

He dnt bear that sadness on her face...

R: Hum kisi se puchkar batate hain...

S : Sach ...

Raghav nodes...

Jahnvi saw her coming n calls her... she moves towards her... after a distance turn...

S: Hum intezaar karenge apne kunwarji ka jaldi aiyega...

She's gone but taken sumthing from raghav... his heart... he keep on looking on the way...

"Shuru ho gai kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na mani meri

Shuru ho gai kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na mani meri

Had se bhi aaghe yeh guzar hi gaya
Khud bhi pareshan hua
Aur mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya
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Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri ore chale "


Precap: Fight, naughty raghav, mischievious siya...




Edited by Amor. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Posted part 6 will pm later
sry for the delay
Edited by Amor. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Owesome Update Di, Janvi is so sweet, JanYa ka Bond mujhe bohat aacha lagta ha, Next Janam mein Yeh Friendship bohat miss karungi,

Raghav n Siya... Kinne Cute ha, Love Them :-*

Song Sequence ekdam superb tha, scenes n lyrics sab kuch just perfect,

'hume humare kunwar jee ka intezzer rehga, jaldi Aayiega'... Anjane mein kya bol gai yeh larki, haaye... Janam Janam Ka Saath Hain, Sab Kismaat Ka Kheel Hain :-)

Do cont soon, LOVE YOU DI :-*
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Owesome Update Di, Janvi is so sweet, JanYa ka Bond mujhe bohat aacha lagta ha, Next Janam mein Yeh Friendship bohat miss karungi,

Raghav n Siya... Kinne Cute ha, Love Them :-*

Song Sequence ekdam superb tha, scenes n lyrics sab kuch just perfect,

'hume humare kunwar jee ka intezzer rehga, jaldi Aayiega'... Anjane mein kya bol gai yeh larki, haaye... Janam Janam Ka Saath Hain, Sab Kismaat Ka Kheel Hain :-)

Do cont soon, LOVE YOU DI :-*



thnkuuu huni 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice part di...loved the scene b/w siya n raghav...
oh ho unknowingly she told him about her marriage with the price of ajmer...😛...but this idiot is thinking that she is talking about vikram...🤢...uloo wo teri baat kar rahi thi vikram ki ni...
n raghav's father lied to jhanvi's father about raghav to sit on the throne...😲...well may be it will became the reason for the conflict b/w these two countries...😕
but i don't want any problem b/w our love birds but kya kare bina problem koi love story hoti hi ni...
n unknowingly she asked her future hubby to her future hubby...😆...are paglu wohi tere kunwar ji hain re...😆
update soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome blossom part

raghav n vikram ka pyaar ka bandhan

but politics kuch panga jaroor karengi

aww siya is sooo adorable

yeh useless boyss

aww song sequence ,is ff ke saare song sequences mujhe bahot pasand hai

omg last part itna adorable tha kya kahu

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