Stardust #2: OS - Paradise pg 31 (21/01) - Page 2

awwwieee... Its a sad oneee... But guys like armaan deserve thisss...

Hey.. congrats for the second thread...:)

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Awesome. Thanks for the pm

congrats for the new thread...
n that was really a sad os to start wid...
but beautifully done..liked it alot...
so much pain n both bearing it in one way or the other..
but wat he did was wrong she loved him so much..
but now as he repenting so seems he should get a chance...
r u gonna put up another part for this or not...
thnx for the pm...

hey Sanaa!
it was sad but beautiful! loved it!
thnx 4 pm

-Sunita-

Firstly,congo love!
And Now coming to the OS, my my! Sanaa that was WOW! I Loved the whole concept, and yes the fact that Armaan is not perfect here, definetely works! I am just stunned at the way you wrote this, its just wonderful! <3 I mean wonderful in the sense that its so REAL, so deep, and based on such a true fact : we live on fairy tales, but doesn't mean that our life is going to be one. We may forgive, but we won't forget.

So once again a hats off to you for this idea, and what I loved most about this OS was how Riddhima actually spoke out. And she made him speechless. And another thing, unlike your other Oneshots, you have left it incomplete as to people to think and imagine if she finally forgives Armaan. And man, the song at the end totally Fits.

Just WOW. You know, you get better by the passing moment.
I love you <3
Maitree :)

Hey Sanaa :) The OS was just brilliantly written, but a sad one :( But mostly that's the reality, and liked the story. It was simple and short yet amazing :) Did a great job with this one, keep up the great work :D Thank you for the pm.

hei love the part