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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#751

Read the last 2 chapters now. I am still taking slow on Sharman and Nishi love story but you have Khushi's pain down to T. I definitely would feel what Khushi is feeling now if the man I loved didn't for once put me first in his list of important persons. I so wish they show this on the show. I would really love to see Arnav fighting for Khushi in front of his family and defending her. Nice story. I just want to see both of them meet and just the dhamaakedaar confrontation. Update soon.

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#752

Wow that was intense...liked the way you showed Arnav's good and bad points..gave an entirely different feeling...awesome job..thanks for the PM

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barunxoxo

@barunxoxo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#753

the way you've described khushi's pain is just beautiful.it was so intense! you're an amazing writer! you've done an awesome job giving complete justice to her character! update it soon!:)

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dumas

@dumas

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#754

shit khushi is a cutter ( a person who cuts their self to feel to know to try to feel something they hide their pain and cut themselves on their legs or anyplace that can be hidden or explained away) arnav screwed up and innocent girl i just want her to be happy screw asr just let her get someone to bring baby kkg loved the update very heartbreaking and emotional the pain she is going through was intense and perfectly describe loved it thanks for the pm

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#755

Great chapter. All four of them are suffering equally. You have written about the pain of each character extremely well. Kudos!

I will be irregular on IF for the next six weeks or so owing to exams so I might not not be able comment regularly. Feel from to remove me from the PM list. I'll add the PM account again once I am back. :)

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

That was done and handled so well. I completely understood the emotions Khushi was feeling. Well done for handling the situation so well!

I can't believe Arnav was so cowardly...poor Khushi!

I'm intrigued by Nisha and Sharman's relationship...but can't help it but hate Nisha a little (she might be lovely for all I know but I'm a hopeless romantic!)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

That was one hell of a chapter. Easily the best till now.

Firstly, the songs, both by Coldplay and MPJ had the perfect lyrics for this chapter.

When I was reading the initial parts about Sharman/ Nisha, in Goa, I could literally imagine it all happening in front of me. You are beautifully.

And the next whole part about Khushi. I had this really weird feeling all through my head. Something that will happen when things start happening on the show.

It was heart wrenching and I absolutely love the way you have built up the contrast between all the reasons why he had made her the way she was today and the reasons why she had so hopelessly fallen in love with Arnav.

All what hit me in this chapter how Arnav didn't stop her. I mean I'm sure he had his limitations. I'm just really eager to know why.

And she wanted to harm her self, but she stopped on seeing the red. It is truly beautiful how you used the color red, its significance in A/K 's relationship.

Brilliant stuff Rae. Hats off to you :)

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Smita

@..Smita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#758

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Just read part 5 n 6.

Brilliant writing!👏

U have described Arnav,Nisha and Anjali's feelings very well!
Be it Arnav's hesitation to end the relationship,or be it his wanting Nisha to take the step,be it Anjali's helplessness for not being able to solve her Chhotey's problem-everything perfectly described.

Dr Keerti!! The name takes me back to glorious days of DMG!

And then in the 6th part,Arnav's anguish,his guilt,his regret,hisrepentence- man,thats so heart wrenching!

Nani has changed and how!
There's more to nisha's story that what has been laid out till now.I wonder what her father did.

Thanks for the pms!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#759

First of all I love the whole Sharman flashback you had! The relationship they had was clearly shown and then when Nisha left his room packing her suitcase ready to leave had me in wonders that after what did happen between them that made Nisha this cold woman who was just getting married because her grandparents wanted it

He didn't stop her when she stepped out of his life but he didn't stop the tears running down from his eyes either as they looked at each other that one last time.

Oh boy, Why didn't he stop her is the question in my eyes! He had the chance to make it all better, to stop her and ask for her forgiveness but he didn't take it. He let it go. Oh why did he do that. Maybe he thought he was not worthy of her love or the misunderstanding that had taken place didn't even get sorted out? Whatever it is you have described Khushi's part fabulously.

Before she remembered red was his favourite colour and her grip loosened, horrified at how intimately connected he was to her.

Even being not with her, he's still with her physically. Khushi has to go and put this act on and I can only imagine how painful and tiring it must be to hide your feelings all the time. The fact that Khushi has caused blood to come out has me worried. She is seriously damaged and she is not going to forgive Arnav soon and I am glad for that because he seriously needs to repent big time for Khushi! Lovely Update as usual.

Edited by -Chinnu- - 13 years ago