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Wow!

I cried a heart wrenching cry, my hand was over my mouth the whole time. Itvwas as if I was waiting for her to cut herself I cant take it this is way too much pain for both of them! especially khushi...how could he just stand there? this was so gut wrenching! the way all the emtions weee written was amazing like I have told yoy many times before but I am going to tell you again the structure of all the chapters is amazing

Everything is a m a z i n g everything was captured so stunningly, Arnavs fault is his own he should have stood there like a man and now he is suffering for his own mistake, that was almost a subtle reminder but exelantly put! The way you dealt with this mature concept was s t u n n i n g! this is my favourite chapter by far

wait so sharman was also a coward?

Can't wait for the next chapter :D

-Aashifa

That was some fabulous stuff you wrote, Rae! 👏

Nani was the villain, then! 😡

Poor, poor Khushi! 😭

And Arnav was rendered weak by the situation. . .

😭

Thanks for the pm. . . . 😃

That was definitely your best chapter yet (I figure there are more to come...)

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So I've read it 3 more times since the time you posted it. She wouldn't have gonethroug with it. Not even if the blood hand,t been drawn. Even if she is broken, she is Khushi. And that's a strong girl we are talking about. Even if she is not as overtly strong as Nisha.

And I cannot wait to find out a little more about Sharman. Doesn't feel like Nisha would have loved a lesser man. What happened there?

hey.
once again brillant part.
thoug sharman and khushi's feelings were sad bit..
but i got more closer to the story.

continue soon.

tc

Amazing update.. Khushi's pain of him giving her place to someone else is heartwrenching.. She remembering all those moments.. I was so lost in the update.. Great job.. 👍🏼