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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

That was stunning. Disturbing as you warn--but stunning!

I especially like how you weave the past with the present. That's difficult to do seamlessly, but you have a skill for it. I think it's because you use visual cues to link past and present.

Like the red and the blood and the bit about favourite colour.

Well done.

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Serendipity1018

@Serendipity1018

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Such an interesting story! I'm so intrigued to see where you will take this! Lovely writing!

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

amazing chapter...

sorry for the short comment

exams!!!!😭

thnx for the pm😊

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

very beautifully written!

there was an eerie calm in the way u described Khushi's pain!

it was truly a brilliant piece of writing!

continue soon :)

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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#765

That was amazing! Loved how you described Khushi's pain! Great update!

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Zania

@zaniax

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Posted: 13 years ago

#766

emotional update but u descrie khushi's pov beautifully.

Arnav shud hav supported her, how can he let her go ?

eagerly waitin for d nxt part.

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anumber1

@anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

I'm making this a Res (even though I know you hate this) because just as I was about to comment, my friend sent me her thesis to edit. So once I finish with that, I'll update this comment. It might end up being tomorrow morning (or tomorrow night at the latest) though so please don't get mad. 😭

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Right, so done editing. OMG!!! A Sharman and Kushi-centric chpater!! So so glad you showed this. I was like, "When are we going to find out about the other 2?" And their pain is so intense! Kushi becoming a cutter fits because she always felt so deeply (when it came to happiness) so her feeling deeply while in pain can only lead to cutting herself to help her deal with her emotions. Great job there! And the happy memory that became a nightmare for Sharman, I really liked what you did there. When happy, people can never even realize that what they're experiencing can ever be a bad thing in the future. I felt so bad for him when he got up and was still looking around for her. 😭 Great job!

P.S. I knew I called you honeybunches at some point but now I can't remember. Lol, I'm glad you picked it up (truthfully, I picked it up from my older sister who likes to call my 2 younger siblings and me random cereal names. Fruit loops, honeybunches (of oats), frosties, etc. lol 😆)

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#768

wow it was awsuuum...loved it..poor khushi is goi g through soo much pain...it was mind blowing n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Shruti

@...shruti...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#769

OMG it was awesome Rae
The way I described khushi's emotions it was just brilliant
I can really feel the pain
Both Arnav n Khushi are suffering since separating but y do I feel that Khushi is suffering more
And that knife thingy was Khushi trying to kill herself ??
Wat would have happened if buaji haven't called her up
Somebody should keep an eye on her she is becoming self destructive
All in all a great update
Continue soon

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#770

Well done Rae👏...I felt her turmoil...and her need and want for it all to END!!! His marriage is taking a toll on her that even she was not aware of!! A pa😭rt of me almost wanted her to go thru with it...hoping perhaps that its news would incite him to react...

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