~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 67

Originally posted by: appy_12

because she was not only the victim of Shyam Manohar Jha but also of Arnav Singh Raizada.

Wow! Each one of us picked different parts of the update as our favorite lines. That only shows how amazing you are! :D

Loved this update Rae! I was busy downloading 'Zindagi Na Milegi Dobara' or i would've been here sooner!

Nisha Frnacia Oberoi's father Alessandro did something very wrong, right? I know this chapter was all about Arnav, his repentance, the process has started you said. But I'm more interested in the girl. She doesn't deserve this, she doesn't want it too.. And she knows, she is aware of these things. Still, she's doing it, to appease her grandparents so she can redeem her father?

There's a lot more to her story, right? Apart from her being in love with a man named Sharman..

Hmm.. I'm loving this story Rae. It is good to see Arnav repenting. We're all sadistic in this respect, I think people will concur.

Continue soon.. And you're bringing Khushi in the next update? Awesome! :D

Loved it! :)

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

Too bad she wasn't there to listen to any of his cries.

Wow, This was just so emotional. The way you described Arnav and what he was feeling. How he was regretful of how he treated her, the words he said, the actions he took and the way he acted around her. If only he could go back in time I'm sure he would change a whole lot of things.

Nisha, Oh Boy, What a dilemma. The promises they made only a while ago making them think how about if one of them broke it. The way the dinner progressed, the awkwardness, but the fact that only one person sensed this does scare me. I mean do they not know or can they not see the tension between the two and how they act?.

I can't wait to read Khushi's side now and also Sharmans. You have truly done this chapter justice Rae. Don't worry about it you have the talent and the gift of reaching out to your readers, and dragging them into your story.

👏

Originally posted by: Ri_luvs_ArShi

That was a sad but great update.

I am not liking the fact how easily Nani can give Khushi's place to anyone.I mean can't anyone see how unhappy Nisha and Arnav are.I loved it how you described Arnav's feelings and his guilt.

How much he hoped she was happy and satisfied and well without him there to corrupt her life.

These lines brought tears in to my eyes and I am having a feeling that in your FF,Khushi won't come back to Arnav easily.

Originally posted by: KaaminiJha

I cried.

I think it's proof enough that the update was an amazing one...

Thanks for PM.

Originally posted by: mistyrains

This is one of those chapters that makes a tug at your heart, bringing back whirlpool of memories with every word and makes you smile, sadly.

And you have done a flawless job at it.

Arnav's agony, his helplessness is so piercing, that I can't begin to imagine what Khushi would be going through.

Update soon, really looking forward to the next chapter.