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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: meera30
Oh god!

The anguish deepens with every chapter, Rae. I don't know how these two are alive and the other two that hold these two prisoners of their memories..i don't even want to think about them

And he laughed.

I can imagine a manic laughter from a broken man as I read this line. Its scary and sad at the same time.

And one day I'll die
With you in my mind

Heart wrenching words and more apt that any others could be!

Nisha and her father Alessandro - cannot wait to find out more there.

I liked the fear in Nisha's mind about whether he will be able to keep up his promises in the face of his families demands. I would be scared too. He is hardly able to stand up to them. Or maybe the reason hasn't been strong enough yet!

I found that song just an hour before updating and I just fell in love with lyrics... :)

And you caught the laughter spot on. It was meant to be all that.

Thank You, Meera! :)

More on Nisha and her relationship(s) in the next chapter. :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti
This update is damn good... the anguish of Arnav Singh Riazada was very aptly described. I could actually visualise Arnav in the same mood, being self-destructive in anguish.

Hope his tormented soul gets some reprive.

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: icegurl789

heartwrenching update!
my heart goes out to khusi...n arnav surely deserves it!
hope u show khusi as stongwilled,focussed and independent being taking a stand for her decisions in her life!

Thank You! :)

And I am glad you are still thinking about Khushi...

And keep reading to know how Khushi is in this story...

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: -Zara-
wicked update!!! loved that arnav was repenting. really sad but satisfying. sorry i'm a sadist like that, lol.cant wait for khushi to be in the picture, but patience is a vitue,lol
xxx

Thank You! :)

I am quite sadistic in these matters as well... ;)

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#655

Rae, you are an awe-inspiring writer.. I've no doubts in that!

I've read complicated FF's but nothing was this complicated.. How could you write as if you are answering my questions but in reality you're not! Brilliant!

Arnav is so vulnerable here.. Wish Kushi would see him like this and whatever the fight was or the misunderstanding or the ego was would be cleared and they start to love each other once again..! I know it's just a wish and would not happen, at least for now😊

Arnav laughing, sobbing... I could imagine how maniac it could be.. all the reactions..

The way you justified taking alcohol, if Kushi and Nani could control, why not alcohol.. And I would say yes.. Poor soul.. It is tormented already and still tormenting for his lost love!

Thanks for the PM dear!

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Archie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#656

okay finally made a step to comment on this beautifully written piece.
for a wonderful writer it requires a good reader who can pen down his views too..
yes it took me a lot ..i mean a lot time to come n give my review since i dont write much..
followed this story a long back say what hmm 2nd part or more..
was little bundled with thoughts abt characters n story.
u see curtains were raising slowly..
at one pt. i thought second couple will be armaan ridhima..
actually i came across this ff through ur index where u hav written OS on them too..
so was taken by surprize to see a new characters but then u did mention AR*smiles*.

as the story as unwrapped i m just taken by surprize n wonder..amazed at ur creditablity to write so cordinally..

this part is one which made me to praise you.
since the way arnav feeling were portrayed were soothing..
yes his heart was in torment but as a reader it was calm for me to see his love towards khushi n repentence took.
seems to wrote so much..
never gave such a big review before.
u see good writers bring a writer in a reader too *smiles*
.n actually i just end up saying good work..write more..n blah blah..hardly even 2 lines..
i give you the complete credit for this comment ..
keep up the work with continuing soon..
n yeah plz pm me if possible :D. for future
updates n if you reply to this comment..!

tc..
archie :-D.

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anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#657

See I told you! You would write chapter after chapter of angst and I would sob and it happened!! Lol, for real though this was amazing! My heart breaks so much for Arnav. He's at his darkest and he is no longer the man we see in the show. The old ASR would take what he wanted without considering his family but I guess Kushi turning him into Arnav is making him listen to Nani. I also feel for Nisha, she was ready to have a marriage of convenience but the pressure to be better than her father (just like Arnav) keeps her away from what little happiness she can find in this bad situation. I can't wait to read what Kushi has been up to. Are we going to see Sharman anytime soon?

P.S. Honeybunches!! I use that all the time!

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#658

Rae...a beautiful poignant chapter...written brilliantly👏 as I could visualize the entire scene. The pain, the anger, the regret, the memory, the guilt, the resolve, the hope, the love... a love that refuses to fade with time!!

And these words...so fitting!!😭

Slow regrets
That live in the dark
And I wrote them all down
But I know them by heart
I've counted the cost of this loneliness
And I've paid for the crime

And one day I'll die
With you in my mind