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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#551

"Nisha, Arnav and Khushi would
answer that question without a
moment's hesitation.
No one." i loveD ths line !!!
and nani doesnt like khusi? and is shyam dEaD ;)
thank you rae for adding sanjeevani here, it took me back to those day and i ended up watchIng few episodes!
i loveD the way she correcteD the receptionist! nisha has a spunk ! :)
and is she gng to say yes or no? AHHH , i am curious!
great update rae! loveD it !!

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Inaya Haya

@lilmzsunshine

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Oye!!!! that was succchhh a cliff hanger!

Come on - say no Nisha, say no ... do it, do it, do it!!!

Okay - I like that Arnav is asking her, shows contemplation on her part. And I like the angry Armaan.

Waiting for more.

-S

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Your characters are really awesome. The way you knit them in the story is very good, just like reading a novel on a lazy sunday afternoon. Now really looking forward to what is the back story between Sharman and Nishi and why Khushi is not with Arnav and why Nani is so against Khushi. Update soon.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: Psychedelic
Wheee! :D

*edit*

Well.. When you started with "Is that clear? Any questions?" It was like you were asking us that especially since it followed that A/Note :P

Nisha.. Circumstances have made her put up a cold and indifferent front. But she had to try hard not melt when confronted with some solace from a person like Dr Keerti. I'm really really really curious about what happened in the past!

All fake.
But then who cared?
Nisha, Arnav and Khushi would answer that question without a moment's hesitation.
No one.
Why would all three of them not care? Were you talking about not caring for Anjali?! Or is it a general statement cause they are all in some sort of denial and putting up a facade?
Loved how she put the receptionist in place. She's attended Boarding School and is now with her grandparents. What about her parents? You mentioned her Dad. But there seem to be issues at various levels. Abrupt end. I wanted to know what she says. :(
Thanks so much for updating Rae! Ur a sweetheart! 🤗

Hahahaha! I didnt think about that! Issmart you are! ;) :D

I have cleared your doubt already but once again, this answer by the three wouldnt be aimed at Anjali or directed towards her, it would be a sort of philosophy they now seem to believe in.

@Bold - Hold on to it. Thats all I am saying. ;) :D

Thank You, Varsha, for such a wonderful comment and the amazingly accurate gif! :) ;)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: appy_12
res!

See?? I'm here!

Nani doesn't like Khushi??? Why?? Don't say 'reasons'! Ok, Nani hates Khushi.. Anjali sees something amiss in her Chhotey'e eyes! And she isn't very happy with this alliance.. I'm guessing Shyamu is no more.. At least with regard to your FF?

Nisha, Arnav and Khushi would answer that question without a moment's hesitation.

No one.

Loved those lines! Awesome!

And wow. Keerti's thoughts made me go back to Sanjeevani days.. Rae! I love you so much for bringing Sanjeevani in here!

Oh, and Nisha Francia spent her growing years taking 'classes'? I'm liking this girl.. The way she snapped at the receptionist and crossed her legs. Well, I can see her as the lady ASR.

And this could all go right based on her answer. What's she gonna say? Mostly yes, because they're doing it for their family already!

Hmm.. Rae darling! This freaking awesome!

Continue soon, ok?

Shyamu...that question will be answered soon, I guess. ;) :D

And about the rest...lets let the updates do the talking... ;) :D

And yep, Nisha took a lot of classes...more on that in the story as it unfolds, thats all I am saying. :)

Thank You, Appy! :)

Glad you liked it.

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Thanks for the Pm, sorry I could not leave a comment for the update yesterday. The characters and the plot are shaping up nicely, along with my curiosity to understand why they are in the situation they are in.

Also do Kushi and Sharman have any connection in your FF?

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: Poonam786
Gosh, the angst in every scene is palpable.. So much pain.. To the extent that they're all pretty much dead inside.. :(

Very nice update.. And I hope you update again soon.. Really want to read more.. Khushi's story, and Sharman's.. Am very interested to know their back stories.. And of course, am looking forward to the time when all four will come face to face.. I can imagine Nisha's facade cracking a little, and the ice queen spitting some fire.. :)

Thanks for the PM.. :)

Awww!

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it...and the ice queen, hmmm? I have a feeling Nisha deserves it...or maybe she doesnt, who knows? ;) :D

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: harshnee
luved it. continue soon. looking forward to the next update. thx a lot for the pm

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: Gargee
You know you're a Brilliant story teller right? Yeah? Good... Glad that's out of the way!

Now. The Update.

May I suggest you changing your name to 'Voldemort'? Evil Woman! You left us there? Really, Now!

First you write such a Chapter- and then leave it without Nisha's response- Why? Do you not Love us? Please- Please!- Update soon?

Oh... I bow to thee Lord- or Lady rather- Voldemort 😆 That really was a brilliant update!

Thanks for the PM- but do know that I waiting for the next chapter- eagerly!

Hahahahaha! I love how you give me sort of back handed compliments! Lol!! Voldy...no, thank you, I have a nose.

Yes, yes...I know - PJ but what to do. :p

And there had to be something for the next chapter, right? So Nisha and I conferred and decided to withhold her response till the next update. ;) :D

Thank You though! :)

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Awww!

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it...and the ice queen, hmmm? I have a feeling Nisha deserves it...or maybe she doesnt, who knows? ;) :D

Hehe.. I got the ice queen vibe from her interaction with ASR's secretary/receptionist person.. The whole 'that's Dr. Oberoi' bit.. 😆😆