~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 57

Originally posted by: mistyrains

Once again, beautiful song choice, never heard any song by her before. This is not exactly related to the update, but you must post songs with every update, it makes the story more endearing 😊

I like how you perfectly you described Nikita's hesitation, as well as the others, though it is sort of sad, and I'm really eager to know the reason behind it.

Nani's cold behavior, her adamant words are striking in this chapter and so is Anjali's helplessness. I really feel for her.

Loved those lines-

But it echoed everyday in Chotte's eyes - darkened with pain, screaming for someone to listen, to stop the agony and Anjali hated that she could do nothing to ease it, no matter how desperately she wanted to - she was the reason for those emotions in the first place...and the cloud of unpleasant memories started settling in...

And should I decipher from the last few lines, as , Arnav still is hanging on to some hope that Nisha would break off the engagement, and he can still be loyal, sort of still be attached to Khushi and her memories?

And the way you have described Nisha's demeanor here, gives a soothingly appealing, and intriguing touch to her. Though I can't help but wonder that before her parents forced her to be prim and proper, she had a totally different side to her.

Fab update.The story is getting more gripping with every update. 😊

Originally posted by: icegurl789

i loved the update...seriously i m feeling a lot more dizzy with arnav getting serious with this relationship and talking to nisha and saying that theres no going back...i wonder what will happen when khusi finally enters into his life!

khusi has always been my favourite character - she is unique in her own way..plzz can we get some more on khusi's feelings i mean khusi's pov!

i cant wait for you to continue and reveal the entire plot!

do continue soon!

thnx for the pm!:D:D

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Hmmm...interesting reaction... :)

Lets let the updates do the talking but about Khushi, I will give you a small spoiler of sorts, a chapter completely dedicated to her is on the cards VERY soon. :)

Thank You! :)

thanx for the info!

its somehow that i cant bear to see nisha with arnie boy...i do appreciate your effort having a total different character like nisha aka female ASR in your ff...arnav and nisha both suffering,tormented souls lost their love but hez only reserved for khusi..i want them together no matter what!

they are one of the mesmerizing,breathtaking couple i have ever witnessed onscreen!

i m pretty excited to read how you bring back khusi into arnav's life...the story is getting more and more gripping with every update!

patience thats the thing...i will have to just sit back and read how arnav gets his khusi back which he definitely will right???

do update soon!:D:D

Originally posted by: --Siva--

Rae.. First, you will be updating this daily?? Then every 5 days once I get an answer for one of my question?

Your summary was much helpful.. It confirmed that I'm reading it right..😉

So it was not like Arnav and Nisha out of their frustrations came to this relationship but its their family.. That is new.. But why? May be family friends type? COs Nani is so strong and adamant on this engagement..

Arnav still giving a chance for her to back out? Why cant he himself do that?? I know he's the ASR not a normal human in love!

So what will be Nisha's answer??

No, this time I'm not asking u unwanted question, as you strictly said NO! Only this time, may be!😆

Thanks for the PM dear!

Originally posted by: kitzdoll

wow it was awsuuum...so nani doesnt like khushi n ajni realizes now that its her fault...god woman...anywayz it was awsuuum dear...loved it n thnx 4dxa pm

Originally posted by: meera30

Rae, you awesome awesome girl!

This FF gets better by each chapter.

The anguish each character feels couldn't be clearer if it were written all over my my laptop screen!

And I loved these lines!

But it echoed everyday in Chotte's eyes - darkened with pain, screaming for someone to listen, to stop the agony and Anjali hated that she could do nothing to ease it, no matter how desperately she wanted to - she was the reason for those emotions in the first place...and the cloud of unpleasant memories started settling in...

And Arnav asking Nisha if she was sure. Is he giving her a chance to escape or looking for a chance to bolt right of the relationship?

Originally posted by: Shruti_P

first of all rae thanks for updating so soon

this FF is freaking awesome

well i havent seen sanjeevni or DMG so no idea about it

but this keerti sound quite a dominating lady

and the way nisha came and snapped at receptionist she looks like ASR part 2 in lady form...🤣

anyways loved the update

anjali remembering her marriage with shyamwa na well true to her form she wasnt able to believe khushi n shyam n...u knw

waiting for next update

Originally posted by: multifaceted

Hey just read both the updates...truly awesome..the angst was very much visible and the way you have captured their emotions is mindblowing...eagerly waiting for the next part..thanks for the PM