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You must really hate ipink :D
Read it...will edit w/ proper comment later!!
Loved it btw.
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It was just perfectly soo Sookie. Seriously, the last two parts had so much w/ regards to desi soaps, the done to death cliches...packed into them...that it had me snickering at work! For someone who claims to hate these things you sure have paid a lot of attention😛, anyone who wants to know what desi-soaps are all about, given them this SS as an intro..😆 People turned and looked at me quizzincally, I just pretended to not to see anyone, and went back to work, which was quickly cutting out the tab. Damn you IF why does it have to be so colorful, and sparkly :D verrryy eye-catching!
For starters, why didn't Khushi set out his clothes on top of his bed with a white hanky❤️ on top!...
The second part has to be quoted -
"You don't feel odd to be in a man's room like this?" He said gathering all the huskiness he could manufacture.
"I am in your room," she said and took out couple of blazers.
His jaw hung open.
"What does that supposed to mean?"
"I am in your room sir so I am quite safe," she said holding up a jacket against his chest. She wrinkled and shook her head.
"Are you saying I am not capable of taking advantage of you?"
"No, I am saying you aren't capable of taking disadvantage of me," she said holding up a shirt against his chest.
Defining character of a lead male: [read desi-alpha-male] he can always push and shove, but good old fashioned chivalry is still truly alive ...😆 and he is one patient [cave]man...
The part where the girl's family invades the 'date' was a true ROFL moment. I've heard of something similar happen..well narrated to me by an unfortunate guy who had to sit through one such 'guddu' sessions...so Arnav gets some empathy from me there. 😆 back to your write up, seriously, cultured is a such an abused word! And this situation too- the coy demure girl is a picture perfect and the one who talks back must smoke, do weeds and be the she-devil incarnate...how convenient!
"I see. What else does she do?" Arnav said fully giving up on talking to the girl.
"She doesn't have much time outside going to temples, talking to everyone in the family and generally be a good girl all the time."
"It must be tiring, isn't it?" He asked snidely. Khushi had now covered her face with the book she was reading and turned off her mike. Her shaking shoulders suggested that either she was giggling uncontrollably or there was something seriously wrong with her nervous system.
😆
"Are you going to a wedding or something? If you want to leave, then it's totally okay," he said feeling horribly casual in front of the family who were probably on their way to a very grand function..."
At least he doesn't know, they sleep in the same dress as well. 😆 He has a lot to learn.
"How red is her face? Tomato red? Blood red? Raspberry red?" The lunatic was back on her mike. He ignored her.
You haven't missed a thing!
Off to Part 5.
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Edited by olive.green - 13 years ago
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