SwaRon SS - Falling For The Beast

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Good u updated n this one was filled with their convo... Now ur atleast saved from my kolhapuri... Rest all i dunno... But i seriously loved this part...

Edited by manasie - 13 years ago

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Loved the update, Thanks for the PM

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

I think I have said this before but that's not going to stop me from saying it again- this is the best SS that I've ever read! You are totally playing with our emotions- in a good way. You gave a new meaning to the word pain.

P.S. The ending was BEAUTIFUL!

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

When u mentioned about Nil and how he missed Swayam then i realized how much a sanity angle is required among a mad bunch of friends. Their are many reason gang of boys in D3 rocks and this is one of the most important one. Swayam has been the glue to hold them all together. Loved this upadte . And thankfully the convo was lengthy and good.

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Finally, they spoke to each other and Swayam's outburst in the end was really heart touching and the way you ended with Sharon's hand still up in the air...Beautiful !!!

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517072

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

you really hav a mature style of writing👏,and I'm loving it.❤️ Keep it up.

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Awesome update Pree. Loved it. This conversation covered up for the last tiny update. The conversation was awesome. That part where she mentions about Nilesh was really nice. It shows the kind of strong bond that the boys share.

Thnx 4 d PMn update soon. : )

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

this ss has been unique since th beginning & that seems to strengthen each update ...luvd their covo & th reasoning of both ... th end part was superb 👏 I culd visualize Sharon like that

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Sakina

@-Sakina-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

This was the most touching part yet,Pree.

This part was beautiful.

"If I were you' I'd let it go." He said walking away.

"You're wrong." Sharon called out. He stopped in his tracks. "If you were me, you'd not be coming here early to catch me. You'd be spending your days and nights on this bench trying to get me back."

This pretty much sums it all,with respect to Swayam,The simplicity and immense magnitude of his love.(Will stop gushing about Swayam now.:P)

The last bit where he lets his hood fall took the cake.Brilliantly written Pree.Muahz.

And also the part where Sharon said that Nil ended up crying after the boys bombarded him regarding his date-because he missed Swayam.</3

Edited by -Sakina- - 13 years ago

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Ur carrying dis ff on really well... D way u write feels so real n thnkz fr dat... Dis ss is truely a different 1 n m loving it.. Thnkz fr d pm... Pakka pm me d nxt update...

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