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updating it at night..
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updating after some time...
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its awsem ff please add me
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just gave me little time more...
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Originally posted by: trs1391

its awsem ff please add me



thanks a lot dear..
yup i'll add you...
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part-44



sorry guys for being late... i was held up with other updates... so i am late here but today i am giving longest part above 3,000 words... because i want to manofy you all..bec i know you all are very angry on me... sorry again...this is my dream update.. i thought about it in start of this ff.. and now i have given this update.. me very happy...
this part is dedicated to jyothi... love you dear.. she wanted a romantic song seq.. though it is not that romantic but expressing all the emotion of maaneet..
jyothi... hope you will like it..





Maan waited a little then starts walking towards the main gate..just then geet came out from the washroom grabbed her bag and ran towards the hall… came out calling maan's name loudly but maan is not there.. dev & meera shocked to hear maan's name from geet.. how she knows about maan? Both thought that… she came to jai and where is maan?.. jai replied that he move towards the main gate just now.. she went towards the gate behind maan and inside dev & meera shocked.. how she knows about maan?

Dev is hell shocked hearing his bro's name from geet's mouth… and in same condition meera is..!! meanwhile jai and nt is very happy.. finally geet knew about her feelings for maan and going to confess him… they are praying to god for geet.. hoping that she will confess her love for him… and again koi problem nahi ho…. Dev and meera both looked at jai & nt for answer…

Dev-jai.. how get know my bro? she didn't met with him before then how it is possible…? He is in great confusion…..

Meera-haan jai.. bol na. geet maan ko kaise jaanti hai..

Nt-guyss relax.. take a chill… hum batate hai,,,,,

Meera-ha bata nt…

Nt-dev.. your bro and my sis loves each other….

What???? Dev and meera , both shout in unison….. in shock…

Jai-haan.. both loves each other very much par kabhi keh nahi paaye…

Dev-par ye hua kab? He is in so much shock.. couldn't digest the fact that maan singh khurana , his big brother is in love and that too with get….

Nt-hold on dev…. You know geet is working in office…

Dev-yeah…

Nt-she is working with maan… KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS…. But you never tell us that maan is ur brother… oops I mean veer ji…. And she blushed…. Abhi se maan veer ji ban gaye…. Dev smiled at her humblesness….

Dev-yaar.. mujhe kuch pate hoga to bataunga na.. how I suppose to know that you all know my bro and about their love…..

Meanwhile Maan went outside the college and sat in his car…geet came out calling his name but maan didn't listen his name… he didn't know that geet is calling him…maan starts his car and went… geet immediately fished the car keys form her bag and sat in her car… she also sat in her and drove behind him…. Maanis unaware that geet is following him.. he is driving with his usual speed and geet is trying to catch his speed… trying to over take his car but she is not that so much good in driving the car… but still she is trying… on the other hand maan is very upset.. he couldn't meet with geet.. he was longing for her… he so much wanted to hug her.. when he saw her on the ramp.. he saw some thing new in her eyes… she froze at the time when their eyes met for some seconds… some tears shed form her eyes.. those tears pierced his heart.. he is the one who made her cry.. just because of me,, she is crying.. I am not worth of her… she is really an angel and I am good for nothing…. I broke an innocent heart.. how can I did this with her? Maan is cursing himself…. How can I let her down… I should not did this with her… I am not a good person… he is very furious on himself…. On the other hand in get's car she is mad at herself.. why she didn't talk with maan? Itna gussa karna jarur tha kya? How can I misbehaved with him? He was doing all this for me and i… I misunderstood him… no.. I have to talk to him… I know him.. he will hurt himself… she is talking to herself… possessiveness she was feeling for him at that time that's why she became mad at him…. Jealousy just because of pari.. but she became angry on maan.. will she able to meet the gaze with him… what will happen when they both met…? maan is driving.. he want to calm himself… he is going to some another route of his daily route… suddenly he stopped his car at some dargaah… he thought for a while and came out.. may be this is place where he get some peace of mind.. where his heart and mind get some relief.. he can be here for some time but may be he'll get replies of his questions form here… he stepped out form the car..

Gumsum gumsum gupchup gumsum gupuchup

Gumsum gumsum gupchup gumsum gupuchup

geet saw him stepping out from the car.. she also stopped her car by the side of dargaah… and also came out from the car…

Gumsum gumsum gupchup gumsum gupuchup ..

Hulchul hulchul ho gayi teri honth hai kyon chup

Geet wants to call him but not able to call him… there s so much noise…. maan is too far from her.. he covered his head with handkerchief….



Hulchul hulchul ho gayi teri baithe hain gupchup

Pyaare pyaare chehre ne karte hain ishaara

Removed his shoes and stepped inside the dargaah… she is silently following him….. Geet covered her head with her dupatta….


Before she entered in dargaah she bumped to maulvi sahib….

Geet-maaf kijiyega baba….

Maulvi-koi baat nahi bacha…. Kisi ki talaash hai? Get nodded in yes….

Maulvi-fikr mat kar.. tujhe tera pyaar avashya milega…aaj wo teri zindagi me wapas aayega… she smiled at maulvi's statement….

Maulvi-ye le…..

Geet- baba ye…?

Maulavi-ye taaweez hai.. jab tu usse miley usey pehna dena,,,, ye hamesha tujhe tere pyaar se baandh kar rakhega…. She nodded in acceptance…


maulavi gave blessings to Geet and went saying that sab ka maalik ek…. She went inside in search of maan…..

Dekha teri aankhon ne hai sapna koi pyaara

Humse gori na tu sharma kehde humse zara

Humse gori na tu sharma kehde humse zara

The dreams in her eyes of her prince charming….. she was seeing this dream from so many days but not able to saw the face of her prince charming jo safed ghore par sawaar hokar get ke paas aata tha par hamesha get uska chehra nahi dekh paati thi….. par aaj usey pate hai uske princ charming kaun hai… she has to voice out her feelings.. but she is feeling little shy to call him here but she has to….. at-last finally She called his name but there was too much noise.. he is not able to hear anyone's voice… maan went inside and get is behind him… maan sensed that geet is behind him… he is little far away from her… he turned back and saw her in front of him…


a unknown relief geet felt when he turned… a alone tear came out from her eye which is not escape from maan…. He want to wipe it but his guilt doesn't allow him to went near her… doesn't allow to touch her…. Before he can took step towards her a lady came and drag geet from there in ladies area..where only ladies are there..


no mans are allowed there and in mans are ladies are not allowed…. Maan forward his hand to her but before she can hold his hand that lady dragged her… she kept looking into his eyes… in some seconds she disappeared in the crowd….

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile

Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

How can she gave words to that feeling which she felt when her eyes met with an unknown person. First time she met with an unknown person in park and her eyes met with him for some seconds,,, after that day they both became friends and both doesn't know when they fell in love…

Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,

Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon

Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,

Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon

Ab kya kare, kya naam le,

Kaise unhe main pukaaroon

She felt some unknown feelings for him but was unable to give the name of those feeling which she has for him…. She was unaware of her feelings towards him.. always rejecting her heart which starts pumping for him…. Both doesn't know when they both started meeting with each other in park early in the morning.. it's like they needed to each other….without meting to each other their day couldn't be complete….. both didn't know when their heart met with each other… she doesn't know what to do? How can she do all this? What name she will give to this feeling? How can she tell to maan about her feelings for him? She wants call him, hug him… give the name to their relation but how? The question is how?

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile

Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,

Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon

Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,

Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon

Ab kya kare, kya naam le,

Kaise unhe main pukaaroon

Pehli hi nazar mein kuch hum,

Kuch tum ho jaate hai yun gum

Nainon se barse rim jhim,

Rim jhim humpe pyaar ka saavan

When first time their eyes met. Both lost in each other.. but when first time maan saw her in park playing with some puppies and small kids. He lost himself in her… what an irony.. the great business tycoon lost himself , lose his heart at the first sight of girl.. he fall in love in first sight…. Maan went to the dargaah and covering the dargaah with the sheet…


she thought that he went.. she is searching him madly….here maan covered the dargaah with the sheet.. and looked at the back.. he found geet staring at him…



Sharm thodi thodi humko aaye to nazarein jhuk jaayen

Sitam thoda thoda humpe shok hawa bhi kar jaaye

Her eyes blinked couple of times in shyness….. because of his gaze… because of love he has for her.. she can see the immense love for her in his eyes… the intensity he has for her in his eyes…. She lost in him..in his eyes… and forgot where she is..!! her eyes filled with love and tears…. Love for him and tears for seeing after so many days.. she is feeling like absorb him in her eyes….


She is longing for him.. for his one look she was craving…. Suddenly air starts blowing…. Her dupatta starts sliding down from her head slowly-2…. Maan move towards her without breaking the eye lock…. Her heart pumping rapidly with his every move towards her… she kept her hand at her heart place for feeling the rapid beats which are beating for him…. On every beat of her heart maan's name is written… she doesn't know when maan became the part of her small life…..

Aisi chali, aanchal ude, dil mein ek toofaan uthe

Hum to lut gaye khade hi khade

Air is blowing like this that it takes her dupatta away from her head…..Her duppatta slide down from her head but she doesn't care.. she lost in him..in his eyes… a storm is going in her heart… fighting that how she will confess her feelings to him…. Maan came close to her …. Very close…. He forward his hand to her head…


hold her dupatta and covered her head with it.. she is looking at him lovingly.. absorbing him in her eyes… he can sense that she is lost in him.. he saw some feelings for him in her eyes…..but he left from there after putting the dupatta on her head…..



Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile

Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,

Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon

Still she stood there placing her hand on her heart feeling the rapid beats which beats for maan…. Feelings the new feelings she has for maan and she felt them just now… from those feelings she was unaware but today she knows everything.. she forgot everything now remember only one thing that maan is her.. in front of her…

Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,

Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon

She is trying to tie the knot of thread where so many knots were tied but her heart is pumping so rapidly, she is not able to tie the knot of thread…


maan saw this and went towards her…. He hold her thread and she is holding too… maan helped her in tied the knot…but get is looking at him lovingly… he left from there after helping her and she stood there like a statue…..


Ab kya kare, kya naam le,

Kaise unhe main pukaaroon

In honthon ne maanga sargam,

Sargam tu aur tera hi pyaar hai

She wants that maan confess his love for her…. She ran for seeing his ek jhalak… and saw him sitting at one place hearing the song which is maulvies are singing…. Lost in him…she saw him through the window


but suddenly maan's gaze move towards her but she is suddenly hid behind the pillar…


maan can sense that geet was watching him behind the pillar…her heart beats starts beating rapidly… she closed her eyes and calming down her throbbing heart which is throbbing against her chest…..


She doesn't know what he is thinking….. meanwhile maan is thinking that jo maine abhi get ke aankho me dekha kya wo sach tha… kya wo bhi wahi mehsood karti hai jo mai uske liye karta hu… aaj wo aise behave kyo kar rahi hai….? Kya wo mujhse naraaz nahi hai? So many things in his mind but he is not voicing out them because of guilt….

Aankhen dhoonde hai jisko har dam,

Har dam tu aur tera hi pyaar hai

She went towards the window for seeing him again but maan is not there… where he went? She is searching him…

Mehfil mein bhi tanha hai dil aise, dil aise

Tujhko kho naa de, darrta hai yeh aise, yeh aise

She is feeling so lonely at this very moment when maan is not there in the whole crowd… her heart is scared for losing him again in her life…. Suddenly a fear came in her heart… if maan again went away from her then what will happen?

Aaj mili aisi khushi, jhoom uthi duniya yeh meri

Tumko paaya to paayi zindagi

She ran from there in search of maan but then she saw he is helping to an old man… she sighed in relief seeing him after some minutes.. it's feel like her heart stop beating because she didn't find him…. Now she is feeling like she got her life back after seeing him….. she closed her eyes for a sec then she opened maan is not there.. again a fear ran through in her veins…. Tears came out from her eyes and she ran outside the dargaah….

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile

Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,

Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon

Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,

Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon

Ab kya kare, kya naam le,

Kaise unhe main pukaaroon

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile

Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

Kehna hi kya

She saw him…. She called him from the top of her lungs..

MAAN...!!

maan immediate rooted at his place hearing her voice… He turned around and looked straight in her eyes with a piercing gaze like reading her soul through her eyes...


. But she didn't uttered anything else and just ran towards maan.. forgetting all her fears and keeping in her mind and heart the pure and deep love she feel for him and want to share with him...!! He couldn't even imagine in his wildest dream what happened next...
she ran towards him leaving the whole world behind…


her world is in front of her eyes…. She stopped in front of him looking in eyes for a moment… before maan could say something she cupped his face from her tiny fingers..snaking her arms around his neck and capture his rough lips with her feather like soft lips… she smacked her lips to him kissing him breathless...!!.


today he is very happy.. he doesn't want any other proof of her love.. he knew that she also loves him but never voice out her feelings but today she proved it….he is the happiest man in the world he felt at this very moment…. She poured out all her emotions, love, longingness in that one kiss letting him know her feelings through her action...!! This was the first time geet made a move to touch him, to kiss him and he felt like his dream came true..
He felt she give pressure on his lips with hers with her whole strength… maan is dumbfounded after her action in front of her whole crowd she is kissing him.. his eyes widen in shock before his hands can reached to her slender soft waist he felt the grip of her lips loosen from his lips… the grip of her fingers on his face is also loosing .. her legs are melting… her feet are unable to take the wait of hers…. before he can figure out something what is happening her patite body collapsing on the ground but before she can hit on the ground two strong arms hold her by her waist and shout geet……because she went in faint state…..


her sim body crashed into his rock type body… she collpased in his strong arms…. GEET…!! Maan shouted from top of his lungs…..


Precap

I hate you I hate you hate you hate you but I love you jaan….


tell me friends hows it?

this is very long part..

so i want little long comments from you..

waiting for your response...

love you all

neha






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Posted: 13 years ago
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episode jai nt opened maneet love secret infront of dev meera boyth are shoked msk in love maAN GUILTY AND running away from geet geet following him they are in dargaah that scene make me remember geet showmaneet hide n seek in dargah and taavij scene so finally geet confessed but through actions it precap



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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love it finally geet confessed but by kissing maan infront of everyone geet fainted and precap wonderful thanx for adding me it fab ff
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Originally posted by: tamanna1391

episode jai nt opened maneet love secret infront of dev meera boyth are shoked msk in love maAN GUILTY AND running away from geet geet following him they are in dargaah that scene make me remember geet showmaneet hide n seek in dargah and taavij scene so finally geet confessed but through actions it precap







awww me on cloud 9 after reading ur comment..
love you a lot..
finally dev n meera got the truth...
and finally geet expressed her love for him.
actually i want this seq in my ff... and i gave it
mujhe bhi show yaad aa gaya,,,
love you dear...
muah,,,😳


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