Burning in your Love (Part 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, & 13)

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DhwaniKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

Awesum...so finally he has let it ol...bt dat shud hardly matter to khushi...i just hope u r keeping it a happily ever after...or r u planning some twists related to ARNAV z past...

NewAys...d way u keep each nd every sceene from d show intact and weave ur story on d lines of it makes me feel um reading wot is going to happen in future once d MU gets cleared..i wish only dis happens...

Loved it

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

thxx fr ur update dear..

the parts r really very nyc...

felt sad fr arnav...his past is too bitter...

waiting fr next update...

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shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

uummm...let me guess...he'll ask her about the girl-episode at the mall??!!!...god, i'm dying to know...plz plz plz updte soon...😊
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LilaUK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

So many questions answered! Loved it. Can't wait for the next part!

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-Raichu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#385

oh so heart touching !!

it is really good !!

and NK 🤣🤣

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

hey this was an amazing update...loved the way you drew out arnav's past and khushi's response...thanks for the PM

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arnavluva

@arnavluva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

Loving it loving it 😊 😊 Now she knows the truth about his past & why he is the way he is. Love the way you've incorporated the pictures to give us readers a better visual. Plz plz update soon can't wait to read on what mischief happens at the sangeet. :) x

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clarissajohn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Drop me PM for the next super update

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hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#389

Loved, Loved, Loved it ! The first part was just pure AWWWH ! I'm glad Arnav made a decision to give Khushi the space that she needs, and also the way he weaved in to his past and opened up his past, and why he was the way he was...

Adored the Khushi who reciprocated the heart wrenching feelings that he felt and comforted him to an extent where she made her choice..

can't wait for the next part ! this all is just brilliant Smitar ! :D