Burning in your Love (Part 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, & 13)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

awesome update loved it loved how he made and excuse to take her with him loved how she reacted to the girl loved how he told her about his past and how she told him about her fears they needed that conversation loved how he tried to explain and take away her insecurities awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

Awesome awesome just awesome I love your work so so so much thank u for pm me waiting for next one

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Loved both the updates! Thanks for the PM! Please continue soon!

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mon4u

@mon4u

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

love love love loved the update...thanks for pm

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sheanuzz

@sheanuzz

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Smitaaa dear!! Wonderful as usual!! I was so excited when I saw your PM. Hooked to this story!!

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Awww. . . .

That was very emotional. .. .

Arnav's past. . . . *sigh*

No wonder he's all so bitter this day. . .

Beautifully written Smita. . . . Thanks for the PM. . . . :)

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asrksr

@asrksr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

So he cleared her doubts.NK and akash! Hope we get something funny. Continue soon.

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Sexy Sobti

@--BSI-FaNaTic--

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#368

loved your updates 🤗

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Arnav's story brought tears to my eyes !
What a BEAUTIFUL UPDATE !

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#370

Incredible!

I couldn't believe my eyes as I read the story of Arnav's past.

It explains so much; it fits--completely fits what clues we have had and what Nani has implied in her cryptic comments.

I love how tenderly Khushi handled him after.

Also want to say that I'm glad he asked her more about the regret issue.

It shows how deeply Khushi is/was affected by all his careless aukat nonsense.

On a lighter note--it's cute to see how transparent Arnav is in trying to gain time with Khushi. How veiled he can be in business, but in love he has no ability for subtlety. Hilarious.

It was a nice touch by you to show Khushi also checking out his gorgeousness when his back was turned. I like the scenes where we see this aspect of her. She does have the hots for him and it feels affirming somehow.

Lovely.

Do continue when you can.

Cheers,

Maya