FF: Indecent Proposal [Thread 2 - Pg 162]

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1051

fantastic update.
loved it to the core
keep writing
and thnxxx for the PM😃

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1052

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!1 😊

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1053

wow i must say d story z very gripping.nyc way of writting.hope against hope.vl he fall in love wit her? seeingd way she'l meet n mingle wd d family n her bubly mood . waiting 4 d nxt part. .

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shree

@subi27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1054

Hey awesome update!!! But as far as arnav how long will he be like this???hate this arnav:(

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1055

hi thankyou for the update 😊. awww i feel so sorry for kushi, she's basically scared of travelling in both by air and even by car. hmmm and arnav is going to be so concerned abt asking her why she's scared - not even in the wildest dreams! nice of you to put ths in the way he relpied! "ASR hires only the best"😆

Ah! he just forced a ring on her finger just like that!? What the? and his nerve to treat her rudely that too outside his house?! Second hand! what the!? and then it struck me - Could it be his mother's? Pls atleast spare kushi from this disgust, i mean we all knw how it would feel for a girl to hear this kind of a thing.

hope atleast in the presence of his family members he would be civilised?! and how is the family going to accept her?

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Sarun.nav

@Sarun.nav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1056

Fiance and staying in RM. I guess it's good thing. Raizada's ll definitely except her. Seeing Khushi blend in with raizada family, Arnav ll fall for her and be nice to her I guess some time in future.. I really felt d hurt of Khushi when Arnav told her not to be too happy abt the ring boz its second hand..😡 But I have a feeling may be its her mothers.

Flashback of khushi's parents were beautifully written..

Awesome update... Looking forward to for next update...

Edited by Sarun.nav - 13 years ago