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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Loved it! That was so awesome! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the PM and update!

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Haha! I love the end bit with Arnav shouting instructions to Aakash
You can take the Arnav out of ASR, but you can never take the ASR out of Arnav

Yuks

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

loved the way you described payal and khushi's relationship! it was really sweet!

continue soon!

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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

wow... amazing... I cant wait to see how they make it to the hospital... :D

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647669

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Loved it!
Aww their so cute
cant wait for the second one!
I wonder what they'll have!

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Aww soo sweet..I hope this day comes in the drama lol..update soon x :)

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Inaya Haya

@lilmzsunshine

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Need I say this ... I want the second half of part 1 .. of course :). The longer the work, the better for me - purely selfish reasons I assure you :).

Sounds very interesting ... I'm wondering if this will have a surprise, like the 'dream' one you had written earlier ...

can't wait to find out.

-S

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Awww so romantic! and i agree arnav is a gem of a person! love ur characters! and LOL arnav drive slowly but reach the hospital fast 🤣! LOVED IT!!!! cant wait to see whats gonna happen now!

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Inaya Haya

@lilmzsunshine

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

ohhh ... I love the ASR in the back, mixed in with the Arnav who's begging for taking the pain away from her ... hai...

I liked reading Payal's thoughts - so peaceful and beautiful. I wish the actual relationship was like this in the serial, too.

-S

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Rae...neki aur puch puch??😆 Dying to see him in the delivery room...hoping its allowed in India. I want a ranting, screaming, cursing Khushi, blaming him for this condition...and then a blissful moment with just the tree of them, as they savor the first taste of being a family...one cohesive unit, depending upon each other for survival and happiness.

In short...yes, I want the next part.

--Nags