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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
part 9
nice part...
idiot kahin ka...
not everyone is like he thinks...
hope Geet is fine...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Yar it was very short update but mindblowing hayee loved it thoroughly:-)

Short Update ka kya kare? I have planned the first ten chapters from the start. And just like 4th chapter was fully dedicated to Arhi I wanted 9th Chapter fully dedicated to Maaneet. And next scene was of Arhi, so had to stop there.
Thanks for the compliments!😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: rosebal2004

I love it. its awesome. You have an awesome writing skill and imagination.
Please continue writing.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Everyone appreciated the story, you appreciated my talent! Thank you once again!
Your comments made my day!😳😊😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: coolflora

amazing ff
pm me next time when you update

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli22

nice part..
eagerly waiting for more maneet scenes..

Thank you😃
Geet is unconscious. Next part will have a twist in Maaneet's life which will change Maan's life thoroughly. Thats all I can reveal. Keep on reading!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 9
nice part...
idiot kahin ka...
not everyone is like he thinks...
hope Geet is fine...
cont soon dear...

Thank you!😃
Maan toh idiot hai hi! Serial mein bhi start mein aise hi sochta tha! Ghada kahin ka!
Geet is fine but ek twist incoming which will change Maan's life later on!!!
Keep Reading!!!
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CHAPTER 10. KAHANI MEIN TWIST

Place - Shantivan, Delhi

"Toh kaisa laga aapko humaara ghar, Khushiji?" enquired Anjali with a smile as she looked into the glowing face of Khushi Kumari Gupta who was standing besides her staring in awe at the poolside. Khushi had come over to Shantivan on Anjali's insistence and had met the whole Raizada family alongwith the Jha couple except Arnav who was stationed in his room with laptop. The whole family was already in love with her and was delighted to have her over. After exchanging customary greetings, Anjali had dragged Khushi all over the house showing her the whole house. The only room she had not shown her was her Chote's room knowing very well that her Chote was a private person and would not appreciate their intrusion. She had specifically left the poolside for the last as it was the best part of the house.

Khushi looked around happily. This was heaven, Khushi thought happily. It was like she was surrounded by nature all around - water below, sky above and plants all around. As it was evening time the skies twinkled with stars and Khushi could clearly see her parents twinkling above. She noticed a recliner and also a doorway which seemed closed. Anjali had pointed out that it was her younger brother Chote's room and he was a workaholic and a very private person. For first time in her life Khushi felt jealous; she was jealous of Anjali Ji's Chote for having a room facing poolside. She wished it was her room. This way at anytime she could come out, sit on the recliner and spend time with her parents for hours. She smiled at Anjali and walked further looking at the various plants.

Suddenly Hariprakash arrived to inform Anjali that Shyam was calling her as he seemed to have misplaced a file. Anjali turned to call Khushi back when she noticed the wonder on Khushi's face and she decided to leave Khushi there. "Khushiji hum abhi aate hain. Aap yehi pe rahiyega.", Anjali said as she turned towards the stairs.

Khushi lost in the beauty of the sky did not notice that she had been practically left alone. She just wandered around the pool with a childish excitement on her face.

Arnav rolled his neck as he kept on working on his laptop. Earlier in the evening, there was a commotion in the living room and his sister had come up to call him up to meet Khushi, Akash's sister-in-law. But Arnav had refused citing work reasons. But truth was he did not wish to meet a girl sharing his Afreen's name and be reminded of her the whole evening. But the whole exercise was futile as his mind kept on wandering towards her. He shut his laptop to take a break when he noticed a movement by his poolside window. He turned his head and felt his heart stop. His Afreen was standing there looking around. She wore a loud salwar kameez with gotas and embroidery done on it. She had a childish wonder on her face. Arnav stared at her for few seconds with a goofy grin on his face when he remembered that she was happily engaged and was in Lucknow. She could not be here. Arnav shook his head. Now it was confirmed. He had lost it. He has gone mad. Or else how can he see her here when she is in Lucknow?

Arnav opened his laptop and started working on it. He refused to look at the poolside window. No way! He knew very well that he would see his Afreen there. But he also knew that she was nothing but a mirage. After few minutes of resisting, Arnav slowly lifted his head to stare outside. And stare he did! Because outside Anjali was talking to his Afreen and then held her hand and dragged her to the stairs.

Arnav stood up with a jerk. She was real, he thought or else how Anjali would have noticed her. She was real! Arnav thought again. He ran to the poolside opening the door but till then Anjali and Khushi were out of his sight. He stood there in shock for few minutes when it striked him that she might be still there in the living room. He practically sprinted across his room and down the stairs but slowed down as he reached the stairs. She was nowhere. She was already gone. His shoulders slumped in defeat and he trudged upstairs to brood in his room.

How was she here? How did Di know her? Thought Arnav. Then he remembered about Akash's saali, Khushi and he brightened up. She must be Payal's sister, Arnav thought with a smirk but suddenly his smirk turned into a frown. She was engaged. But how was she engaged before her sister's marriage? wondered Arnav.

An hour later, the question about Khushi's engagement still pestered Arnav's mind as he sat down with his family for dinner. If his family noticed his disturbed mind, no one commented on it. They busily chatted about Khushi and her antics. Arnav listened to their chatter with a disappointed feeling. Slowly the talks turned to marriage and Mamaji questioned about Khushi's marriage. Arnav's ears perked up at Mamaji's question. Naani replied that the girl wants to complete her studies and after her graduation the family will think about searching for a boy for Khushi. Arnav's heart threatened to burst out his chest. She had lied to him. She was not engaged. Arnav thought happily. Even the fact that she had lied to him did not deter him from being happy. His happiness was shortlived when Mami stated that she must have a boyfriend as the girl seemed quite bold and seemed the type who would go for love marriage. Arnav could have kissed his Di when she spoke up saying that she had asked Khushi about it and Khushi replied blushingly that she did not find anybody yet but also promised that if she found somebody she would inform Payal and Anjali first. Arnav had a hard time concentrating on his meal after the discussion. He realized that while he knew that Khushi was Payal's sister, Khushi did not know that he was Akash's brother.

Place - City Hospital, Chandigarh

Maan paced to and fro in the hospital corridor for what seemed like hours. He would glance at the time in between his pacing. When Maan had reached the hospital at night 11 PM, he had used all his influence to get the girl admitted immediately. After initial check up, the Doctor had informed him that the girl was bleeding all over her back due to whips being used on her. Her feet were also bleeding so she must have run barefoot for hours. But these were minor injuries. The blow on her head had left a deep gash on her head and if the blow would have been more forceful, her skull would have cracked. She had developed blood clot and hence had to be operated immediately for her survival. Maan had signed in as her husband and she was wheeled up to the operation theatre. When the nurse, filling the form had asked for her name, Maan wracked his brain. He did not know her name. But if he told her that she would have told the Doctor, and the Doctor would have known that he was not the girl's husband. Already he had lied that his wife's life was in danger to stop the Doctor for calling on Police. He looked around for inspiration when he came across a bag with the name 'Soni Matching Centre'. Maan whispered, 'Soni' and he realized that Soni meant beautiful in Punjabi. "Ji?", questioned the nurse. Maan came out of his thoughts and told her, "S..S..Soni…. Sonia Kh..Kh….Khurana" and nurse noted it down. Maan nodded his head and looked at the girl. For the world she may be Sonia Khurana or whatever her real name was but for him she will be Soni, the beautiful. He realized that he now had a wife named Sonia Khurana and imagined his Daadima's reaction. A small smile came on his face but in vanished and Maan was filled with guilt. If he had believed the girl and taken her to Delhi as per her wish then the men would not have reached her. She would not have been hit so badly and would not be lying in the operation theatre swinging between life and death. Maan shook his head and readied himself for a long night.

It was 3 AM in the morning when the Doctor came out of the operation theatre. Maan stopped his pacing and went towards the Doctor. "The operation was successful but abhi kuch keh nahin sakte. We are shifting her over to general ward and you can sit with her. She is unconscious but jitni jaldi hosh aajaaye utna kam khatra hai.", Doctor told Maan. "Khatra kam matlab? Woh theek toh haina?", Maan asked worriedly. Doctor patted Maan's shoulder in a gesture of assurance. "Sar pe chot hain Mr. Khurana. Hosh aayega toh Damage kitna hua pata chalega. Woh shayad paagal bhi ho sakti hain ya shayad woh theek thaak bhi rahein. Abhi kuch bol nahin sakte. Brain is one complicated organ. Aap bas Babaji se dua kijiye." The Doctor walked away and Maan sat back on his seat. Few minutes later the girl was taken to a general ward and Maan followed them. He sat beside her bed on a chair and stared at her.

She was beautiful! Maan thought. He suddenly glanced at her hand noticing the scars. Her whole hand was smattered with scars. Maan winced as he stared at them. By the look, they seemed very recent. Who would have done such things and that also to a girl? Maan thought with disgust. He looked at her angelic face and felt another bout of guilt. If only he had believed her and taken her to Delhi, she would have been safe, Maan thought despairingly. Maan shook his head. There is no use wallowing in guilt. He should think about what to do next. Maan worriedly looked around. The men thought she was dead. That meant she is safe for at least few days. But what about later? Maan decided that he would take her to Delhi as she asked for and then he would arrange some security for her. Maan nodded and felt relieved. At least one thought taken in right direction, Maan thought happily. He kept on staring at her and slowly exhaustion took over him and he went to sleep with his head on the bed.

Maan was woken with a loud female scream. He woke up with a start and looked here and there when he noticed the source of the scream. The girl, Soni, was screaming like a maniac pointing her fingers at him. He noticed the nurse trying to calm her down but to no avail. Maan was shocked for a second but regained his sense and shouted, "Chup!" The girl stopped screaming and stared at him with her eyes widened to the point of popping out. "Bilkul Chup!", ordered Maan and glared at her menacingly. The nurse asked the girl in a soothing voice, "Kya Hua?" to which she replied, "Yeh kaun hain? Mere kamre mein kya kar rahe hain? Inhein jaane ko kaho. Kitne daraavne hain yeh aur inki aankhein kitni badi hai? Mujhe dar lag raha hain. Inhein jaane ko kaho, please." The girl while talking in an innocent voice was moving away from Maan and edging towards the nurse who was standing on the other side of the bed. Maan felt anger at her words. I saved her life and she calls me scary, Maan thought angrily.

Suddenly the Doctor, hearing the commotion, came into the room and enquired the nurse. When Nurse told him the girl's plight and pointed at the quivering girl hanging onto the nurse's hand looking at Maan with fear, Doctor glanced at Maan suspiciously and told him to move out. Maan complied and walked out.

Maan started pacing the corridor when he noticed the time. It was 9 AM. Maan worriedly checked his phone which was on silent mode and noticed the missed calls from his office and house. He walked away to a secluded corner and called his house first. His Daadi picked up and started admonishing him for not calling him and worriedly asked him if he was okay. Maan explained the situation to her including the lie he told the Doctor. He told her that as the girl was in danger because of his fault he will stay with her and make sure that she is fine. Dadima replied positively and told him that she would pray for the girl. Maan smiled and shut the phone. He called up Dev and explained the situation and asked him to handle KC for few days. Dev agreed and Maan called his office. He spoke with Adi and Sasha explaining them their duties and informed that he will be staying at Chandigarh for few more days. He also asked them to brief the new Secretary and make sure she was ready by the time he came back.

After half and hour of pacing, the Doctor called Maan into his cabin and explained the situation to him. "Amnesia? Memory Loss?", Maan questioned with a bewildered look on his face. "Ji haan. I have checked her thoroughly and even though there are few tests to be done to be sure, I can tell you that she has amnesia. She has forgotten not only you but also her name. When I asked her name, she was confused and started screaming that she did not know her name. She could not recall any thing, not her name, not her hometown, nothing. I am sorry Mr. Khurana." Maan was stunned with this news. "But how..?", Maan asked in a shocked tone. He could not believe it.

"Mr. Khurana, our human brain is quite complicated. Any attack on it can give different results. Infact if you had been attacked the same way, still the result would have been different. Aapne kaha tha ki aapki biwi kuch dino ke liye laapata hogayi aur phir aapko is haal mein mili. Uske poore shareer par chaabuk ke nishaan hain. Usne in dinon mein bahut kuch saha hain. Yeh sab ka trauma aur upar se yeh sar par vaar ki vajah se unke subconscious ne aise react kiya hain. Lekin bhale hi woh sab kuch bhool chuki ho, unke subconscious ko sab kuch abhi bhi yaad hain. Everything is stored in her subconscious. Iska matlab yeh hain ki unhein dheere dheere sab yaad aa jayega. This is just a temporary situation created by her subconscious to protect her from trauma. It is just a post traumatic reaction. That's all. Ek ya do mahino mein unhein sab kuch yaad aajayega." Doctor replied.

Maan took a moment to digest all the facts when the Doctor spoke again, "Main Dilli ke ek jaane maane Doctor ko jaanta hoon jo aise cases handle karte hain. Dr. Puri unka naam hain. Saare tests hone ka baad, hum ek do din mein aapki wife ko discharge kardenge. Dilli mein aap Mrs. Sonia ko Dr. Puri ko dikhaa dijiye. Everything will be fine Mr. Khurana. Don't worry." The Doctor handed Maan a visiting card and Maan glanced at it and felt relieved. Dr. Puri was none other than one of his Father's friends and was considered as son to Daadima. Maan could explain the whole situation to him without the wife angle. He could even tell him how he had met her and how he had lied that he was her husband so that the procedures would start soon. Maan gave a smile of relief; happy that Dr. Puri would be able to help him.

P.S. Hey Guys! I had mild writer's block for nearly three days that is till Wednesday. When on Thursday I was able to write, my mind was bit confused on how to write both the above scenes and it took me sometime to write them properly. So, how was it?

P.P.S After writing and editing, I realized that both Maan and Arnav call Geet and Khushi resp. as beautiful. The only difference is that Maan being a Punjabi munda used the Punjabi version (Soni) and Arnav having a lucknowi background used the Arabic/Urdu version (Afreen).

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mindblowing update now maans wife is sonia lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 10
awesome part...
so now Arnav knows about Khushi but Khushi doesnt...
hes gonna have a go on this...
poor Geet...
so her name now is Sonia and Maan's wife...
cont soon dear...

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