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Posted: 13 years ago
so sweet update
our heroes are ignorant towards there feelings...
and geet and khusi just adorable

omg vrat was just awsome
thanx for the pm
loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

awsome update

loved it

arnav ko gussa aaya as khushi ws nt picking up the fone

nd maaneet moments awsome

soni ne vrat rakha or maan tender


sooo sweet


maan inally falling for soni


Thank you
Yes, Both the boys are finally falling in love.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 23
excellent...
OMG this is so entertaining...
Maan and Geet
Maan is now missing Geet's Indian khaana...
and is now liking it all the more...
hai shes too adorable...
usne vrat aur upwaas bhi rakha hai Maan ki success ke liye...
Maan is falling more strongly...
lover boy...
and Dev's reaction was hilarious...
cannot forget that...
peturaam, hope got this correct for the hungry man...
Arnav Khushi
Arnav has become the lover boy here...
he just wanted to SEE Khushi for once and he threw tantrums to this extent...
poor Khushi shes was so baffled...
cant blame her...
hes blaming her for his stupidity...
that was funny...
yeh dono bilkul gadha and ullu hai...
ab bhi samajh mein nahi aayi PYAAR hua hai...
pata nahi kaise Business Tycoons ban gaye...
and Maan OMG hes getting very protective and possessive of Geet...
cant wait for the J part to happen...
and Arnav is scared of Bua ji...
ha ha ha...
these 2 guys are too good and feel like pulling their cheeks...

PS - yaar why cant u update this daily...am having a gala time reading this...awesome...thinking to copy in my desky this FF...will do it tomorrow...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Analeez11

A SMALL SCENE

DING! DONG! DING! DONG!

NT walked towards the door wondering who was there. She opens the door to see a behenji type girl wearing a salwar kameez and specs and smiling like an idiot. She murmurs to herself "Is FF mein itne behenji kya kam the jo aur ek bhej diya. Soni, Khushi, Payal aur ab yeh. Yahaan toh behenjiyon ki fauj lagi hai."

NT: Yes! How may I help you?

The girl: Hello! I am Kalpana, a writer

NT: Oh! Kalpana means imagination. No wonder you are a writer. But how may I help you?

Kalpana: Madam, I have a delivery for you.

NT: You are a writer and you are delivering?

NT wonders whether the girl has gone mad.

Kalpana: Sort off, Ma'am. It is a special delivery.

NT: Oh, Okay! But from whom and what is it?

Kalpana: It is from Deepa Ma'am from spvd services.

NT: Kaun Deepa? Main nahi jaanti Deepa ko.

Kalpana thinks "Finally hindi boli. English bol bolke main thak gayi thi. Aur English mein yeh baat karti toh main iska Khoon kardeti."

Kalpana: Aap unko nahi jaanti par woh aapko jaanti hai. Aur yeh free hai.

NT (excitedly): Free hai?

NT excitedly grabs the box and opens it. The box is nearly three feet in height and contains popcorns. NT smiles but frowns.

NT: Ab iski jaroorat nahi.

Kalpana: Kyon?

NT: Maan aur Soni mein jhagde kahaan ho rahe hai.

Kalpana scratches her head. She thinks: But I wrote lots of nok jhok in chapter 21 and 22. Why she is telling such things.

Kalpana: Par Ma'am jhagde kahaan bandh hue? Abhi haq pe jhagda hua phir parathe pe jhagda hua.

NT: Par chapter 23 mein nahi hua. Wahaan toh ek sweet scene hua aur phir doosre din Maan ne Soni ko gale lagaya.

Kalpana: Arre! Yeh toh pyar ke taraf jaa rahe hain. Kya aap khush nahi hai?

NT: Khush hoon. But what is the use of popcorn now if there will be no nok-jhok.

Kalpana bites her nails. She thinks: Arre! Isne popcorn nahi liya toh Deepu ke request ka kya hoga. Soch Kappa Soch.

Soon, Kalpana ki dimaag ki batti jail.

Kalpana: Par chapter 24 mein nok-jhok guarantee hai. Woh Sanyal aunty ki beti ki shaadi mein hi hoga.

NT: Par hum sab uss shaadi mein nahi jaa rahe. Sirf Soni-Maan jaa rahe hai.

Kalpana slaps her forehead. She thinks: Arre! Buddhu hoon main! Maine hi toh Maan aur Soni ko akele bhejne ka plan kiya tha.

Kalpana: Toh uske ke baad mein Parathe par bhi ek jhagda hai.

NT brightens up. She asks: Sachchi?

Kalpana: Promise!

NT smiles and drags the box inside.

Kalpana turns to her readers and gives them a thumbs up.

Kalpana's message: Le Deepu, tera kaam hogaya. Ab next time ke jhagde mein Dadima aur NT ka popcorn pakka. Aur baki readeron, Aapki aisi farmaayish ho toh pesh kijiye. Main poori karne ki koshish karoongi but no guarantee haan!

P.S. Arre! Bataana toh bhool hi gayi. This scene is dedicated to Deepa (spvd) Thanks for the idea.




scene 1 (know more such scenes will be added in future 😉)
OMG that was fantastic dear...
enjoyed it so much...
cant believe u did this small scene inclusion...
and i hope now Naina will have the pop corns till the next nok jhok happens...
thank u so much honey...😳
muah...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: additishah

Wow! Nice update! Loved how Maan and ASR are finally starting to wonder what's happening to them. Soni fasting for Maan's tender and Maan also not eating except a few morsels was very cute! And finally Khushi hugging and kissing ASR on the cheek after topping was a surprise! I never thought Khushi would be the first one to kiss ASR...I always thought it's the man who takes the initiative. That was amazing!

Thanks for the review😃
Poor Guys! They are confused by their dil.😉
Khushi kissed Arnav on impulse. She would have kissed anybody who was in front of her at that moment.
Yes, Maan-Geet scenes are cute. After writing when I read it while editing, I realised that the MG scenes have come out really good.
Thanks once again for reviewing!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gilmore

perfecttt sweet kkisss hahahaah

Thank you😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prit27

my arrogant heroes are falling in love☺️

another great chapter of their lives😃

Thanks for the review😃
The boys are finally falling😉
Next update tomorrow😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

so sweet update
our heroes are ignorant towards there feelings...
and geet and khusi just adorable

omg vrat was just awsome
thanx for the pm
loved the update

Thank you for the review😃
Yes, the guys are ignorant but are falling badly in love
Next update tomorrow. More falling from the guys' side.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
haha..
deeps is getting charectoers in ffs too..
nice idea..
lloved it..
its really a honour for deeps..
thank u girl for giving this..

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