arsha + kriyaansh.(ss)..part 4 updtdpg50*last* - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akku16



yes dear... deetha said ki 50th page pe she's gonna update... so dats y v r continuosly postin... 😃


oh kk...btw im maneet...chat karte karte spam karte hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey moew deetha ka thread spam karke tish k thread par spam karte hai...she said she'll update on the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
n here is the 1st comment on pg50
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Posted: 13 years ago
deetha ab update v reached page 50
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gud n sweet part 😃
Kunwar kab tak gussa reh sakta tha us se n Shaks ne us ko mana hi liya😊
Shaks ne ye socha bhi kaise vo us ka heart break karegi n he wil trust that whatever she said was true n now they r again united.
Their romance was passionate n i enjoyed it.😳
Part 2
was too gud 😃
So Arjun knew about Rey n instead of Rey following them Arjun traced him n told everything that wat's wrong with Kria n she has gone in depression. 😭
That was gud that Kria wasn't at home at that time so Rey n Smriti got the chance to clearify mu between them n soon they wil b 2gether. 😍
Update last part asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
oooyyyeee...

deetha... 50 pages hogye... now its ur turn 2 update...

we want update..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely7010


oh kk...btw im maneet...chat karte karte spam karte hai




hey... m sry kal k liye... actually jst 2 min k liye he aayi thi... mom bula ri thi so jaana padha... sry...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akku16




hey... m sry kal k liye... actually jst 2 min k liye he aayi thi... mom bula ri thi so jaana padha... sry...


its okk dear
Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys im back...sorry actually busy thi...and kal jab update kar rahi thi toh kuch error aake poora update gaya😡 ..soo aaj update kar rahi hun...dnt shout at me...



the end:


arsha:



he layed beside her...

she moved closer to him and he pulled her onto him...she brought her knees close to her chest and slept on him digging her face onto his chest ...he hugged her tight...

"pata hai shaks maine tumhe kitna miss kiya..."

no response...

"shaks??"

he finally got that she was asleep...

he smiled and tightned his grip and layed there staring at the sky...

the stars are twinkling ... the black sky ...the sound of the waves and the most beautiful thing added to all those was that his love was sleeping peacefully in his arms...he knew she was sleeping peacefully after more than 3 months...he was sure that she was a total different shakti who the ppl there saw...he felt sorry for that...but was very happy that he was reason of smile and happiness 4r smone that too 4r them who he loves the most and lives 4r and can even die 4r...

he was fully immersed in his thoughts when suddenly he noticed shaks moving and crying like a baby whose sleep was disturbed...

he quiickly came out of his trance when he realised his mobile was ringing...he immediately cut the call without seeing the id ...she again went into a peaceful sleep when his strong arms surrounded her tight...she had a constant smile on her face...

he slowly took his mobile and saw the time...

it was abt to strike 4...and in smtym the sun would make his way out...he doesnt want anyone to see them lyk dis as she dnt want to that early...he put his mobile in his pocket and slowly got up holding her ...she adjusted herself wrapping her legs arond his waist...hands around his neck and dug her neck in the crook and adjusted herself moving more closer into him...he saw her and nodded his head...itna pyaar karti hai aur upar se naatak...drame baaz!!!!!

he laughed at his cmnt and sat on his bike and rode back to her home...ri8 in front of her house he stopped...what if her parents saw us lyk dis...

he quickly called mukti...

as soon as he called her she picked at the first ring and strtd shouting...

"amar tum..."

"shh!!!!! bas ye batao ghar me aunty uncle koi hai kya???"

"no ...aur mujhe.."

he cut the call...

"aahh!!!!!! how dare he cut the call...mai bata rahi hun tum logon ko...uski khoon kar doongi...pakka wala..."


shan ,sneha and archie smiled and shut when she glared at them ...

"arey hum yaha pagalon ki tarah 4 ghanton se wait kar rahe hai...kuch toh batana padega na...how dare..."

she stopped as she heard the bell ring...all went to the door as they were really tensed abt did they patch up or they foght making thigs more worse...

as mukti opened the door all were shocked to shaks lyk dat...

"kya hua shaks..."mukti strtd asking in hyper mode...

"ssshhh!!!!!"kunwar put his finger on his lips saying her to be calm...

"par amar..."sneha.in same hyper mode...


"sssh!!!!!!!!! "he looked seriously at them...

all were fuming and confused too...he slowly took her to her room and placed her gently on the bed unwrapping her legs around him...

but she dug her face more into him...

" uummm..." she again cried lyk a baby...

he caressed her hair and slowly took her hands of his neck kissing her forehead...she turned to other side and strtd searching 4r her teddy... (hehehe...i do it in sleep...😆) he quickly handed her teddy and put the blanket on...she slept peacefully...

he came out and closed the door silently...as soon as he turned back he faced 4 fuming faces...

all strtd shouting ...

he pulled them downstairs...

"sssh!!!! chillao mat shaks uth jayegi.." he said angrily on the living room...

all looked at him with full anger and strtd beating him...he cried in pain...after smtym they stopped...

"amar u dnt have brain...pata hai hum kitne tensed they..."mukti

"pata nahi tum log kaha gaye the" sneha

"hum beach gaye the long ride ke baad" kunwar said swinging his hands lyk a child and grinning wide...

archie bet him hard n his head...
he looked at him ...

"abe hum yaha mare jaarahe the tum logon ki patch up hui ki nahi aur tum log beach pe enjoy kar rahe the...??"

kunwar bit his tongue...

"sorry guys..."

"par bata kya hua??? patch up hui ya nahi???"shan

"haan...aur patch up kya??? humari breakup hui kab?? "

"phir itne dinon se ek doosre se naa baat kiye...wo sab kya tha?? " sneha...

"wo...wo toh jagda tha...aur ab sab sahi...aur ab agar tum logon ki ye qsn session khatam toh mukti bata mujhe sona hai...kaha sojaun???"

" chaho toh living room ki couch ya phir...shaks ki room mei ek couch hai..."

amar quickly ran up and slept in the couch seeing her...





kriyaansh:


smriti turned back to see rey on his knees folding his arms as if pleading her and crying to the worst...

he didnt speak anything but his silence explained all to smriti...

she strtd moving to him as the bell rang...she went to the door and peeped into the hole to see who was it...she found kriya making herself straight and trying to fix a smile on her face...

she opened the door...

the first thing caught her eyes was him...a wide smile spread on her face she dropped her bag slowly...she took a few steps towards him but stopped,...she looked at her mom who nodded to go on...he didnt notice her...he was crying with his forehead touching the ground... she got that her mom gave back her life to her,...tears rolled down her eyes...she moved back till she hit the door and cried silently...all were quite and everyones eyes are wet on seeing her after 3 yrs...

"jhalli" arjun called her as she was abt to fall as her eyes closed slowly...rey jerked his head up and saw her sliding down the door...he ran to her but arjun already took her in his arms and placed her on the couch.rey kneeled besude her and took her hand into his when arjun searched 4r bag...

"kya baat hai arjun??"swayam asked/...

"wo kriya ki bag"


as soon as he asked swayam bought and handed it to him...arjun gave an injection to her...

"beta kriya..."

"kuch nahi aunty...sudden shock lagi hai isiliye...bas 15 min mei theek hojayega..."

"rey tum tension mat lo wo theek hojayegi...tum jaake mooh dole beta..."smriti

but no response...she thought of repeating...but swayam cut in...

"aunty wo nahi sunega...better hum kriya ki hoosh aane tak wait kare..."

she nodded...she saw rey looking at kriya with a faint smile which spread unknownly on his face...


after 20 mins kriya woke up...her eyes found him first...he pulled her into a tight hug...they didnt cry...even a drop didnt form in their eyes...infact they were smiling...wide...they got back the smile which they left back with each other before three years back...after a long hug they pulled back...rey smiled at her...she smiled lyk a small baby...

smriti wondered how his smile brought back her smile when she tried her best to even bring a small curve on her lips but always ended with a wide but fake smile...she dnt know how rey was...but she accepted whole heartedly with the one smile on her daughters face...it was his biggest proof to tell that he was a 100% perfect guy for her daughter...she smiled wide and went in to prepare lunch 4r everyone...

rey slightly slapped her...

"bata nahi sakti...humesha itni baat karti rehti hai?? aur haan maan na padega...tum acting bohut achi karti ho...mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum meri baat itni seriously lelogi..."

she looked confused at him...

"are us din jab hum dono...girls locker room ki washroom mei...bataya tha na ki tumhari acting bohut buri hai..."

they both laughed at it as their foreheads touched...

"ek bata sakti thi na..."rey asked and she stopped smiling...

taani was fuming at the back...

"sorry..."kriya pouted...

"dnt do that...mei tumse naraaz hu...dnt deviate me..."

she pouted more...

he narrowed his eyes...and both bursted out into laugh again...

smriti was glad to see the scene...

"excuse me ...i think tumhe use humse bhi milne ka mouka deni chahiye..."sharon told to rey...

kriya looked at her shocked and stood up...


"sharon tum..."

"kyun mai tumhe miss nahi karsakti??? u know friends se zyaada enemies miss karte hai..."she said with attitude...

kriya rolled her eyes...sharon is sharon!!!!!

both sharon and neha moved frward at the same tym to hug her...but both stopped before kriya...not able to decide who will hug first...kriya was impatiently looking at them...finally she couldnt resist and pulled both into a hug...

everyone one by one hugged kriya...she had a wide smile pasted on her face...but wait...sabne hug kiya...par swayam...??

she looked at him...he was standing at the back with his hands folded...she ran to hug him but he stopped her showing his palm...he gave her a cold look and went into kitchen to get some water...kriya looked down ...it was gonna be tuf to convince him...she had a reason 4r not telling to rey...but swayam??? no!! a big no...no reason...all were smwat surprise with his actions...he came back and sat on the couch reading the newspaper...all were in their places looking at kriya and swayam...finally kriya prepared hersellf and sat beside him...

"swayam..."

"sorry to say but mai strangers se baat nahi karta...and im busy now so plzz dnt disturb..."

" swayam plzz...maaf kardo.."

he looked seriously at her...she loooked down...rey had a smile on his face...he knew it...he knew how swayam was feeling ri8 now...

"maaf...kis baat keliye kriya??? mai tumhe maaf kyun karu?? aakhir tune kiya hi kya hai??? actually bataun...mai hi kuch zyaada soch raha tha...ki hum best friends hai...aur tum mujhse kuch nahi chupaoge..."

"swayam im really sorry...actually"

"nahi kriya...sorry ki kya zaroorat hai??? tumne mujhe bas apni life ki sab se badi baat chipayi...mujhe bina bataye chaligayi...formality keliye mereliye. ek choti si letter chodi...oh sorry woh toh team chodne keliye thana...bas ek baar bhi mujhe batana zaroori nahi samjha...ya phir shayad tumhe mujhe kabhi apni pain share karneki laayak hi nahi samjha..."

she cried biting her upper lip...she took small sobs...

"now stop dat..im not gonna forgive u 4r that... never and ever..."

she cried loud this tym...he saw her and bet her on her head...and they hugged,...all smiled wide...

swayam just consoled her as she cried...finally he pulled her,...

"agli baar aisi ki na"

"kabhi nahi karoongi pakka" she told...

"dnt even dare to "


she smiled...

"waise tum log ek saath girls wash room mei kya kar rahe the??"swayam asked her...

she looked at him with wideeyes and blushed...

"wo ...wo..."

"wo uss din mei ise rokhne gaya thana .neha ko rokhne se...tab achanak se ladkiya aagayi ...a.ur...hum...wa..sh..room ...mei...ghusgaye..." rey said slowly...

"maine jo socha usse kuch jyaada hi nikla tu..."arjun...

"waise meri jhalli ko patane keliye tumne bohut mehnat kiya hoga na..."

"mehnat...poochiye...agar mei uthna mehnat mere papa ki bussiness mei lagaya hota na...toh unki bussiness national se international banchuka hoga..."

all chuckled as kriya glared at rey when he looked don biting his lower lip...



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bas itna hi...aur nahi...bye...
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ss likhne ka mera sapna khatam
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hope u like it...luv all
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